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The L Wing – chapter 220
“Would you have rather she had taken you with her and you would have not grown up with Melvin and Kit ? “
“That’s a different thing isn’t it ? – I just wanted to know her – to know what she was like”
I can see how hurt Bette is – she is close to tears. I take the teddy bear from her and hold my arms out to her. She quickly comes across and hugs me – I take hold of her and kiss her hair
“Its going to be okay “
Her body is shaking – I hold her tighter and wait for the inevitable tears. But they do not come – it feels like she is fighting a massive internal battle with her own emotions.
“Let it out honey “
“I don’t know if I can “
“You are safe – just me and you and our baby – your family “
She rests her head against my chest
“Don’t let go “ she pleads in a tiny voice
“I won’t – I swear that “
She holds me tight for several minutes – neither of us speak. I don’t think Bette can speak – she is battling her feelings – I wish she would cry -I hate it when she bottles her feelings up. I stroke her hair – taking curls and twisting it around in my fingers.
Her hair is so like Ella’s – I kiss her hair again
“Its okay babe – you are home “
After a few more minutes she looks up
“I don’t know if what I feel is anger or hurt “
“Both probably “
“Yeah – God I was so angry with Kit and dad – I don’t know which of them is the most reprehensible in all of this “
“Your dad was the adult – Kit was a child “
“Kit was 14 . She’s always had a wilful streak – I’ve seen it so many times. I remember when I was about 16 she was begging me for money so she could buy drugs and I wouldn’t give her any. Do you know what she did ?”
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Great update. Hope you feel better soon. x
God Bette is so doesn’t deserve this from both of them, but she must understand that they were different people from what they are now, Tina is so good for her. Thanks Ally post soon honey.
Most the time if you keep your emotions inside they can eat you up, thanks goodness for Tina right now. thanks hope you are feeling better
HEY Ally, Brilliant to hear you are feeling better adn ready to take on the world. Thnak you so much for this gentle and tender exchange between Bette and Tina and Ella. It is these moments take make life worthwhile. I just love the supportive and caring manner Tina has with Bette here. Tina really is there to look after her. I guess the truth will out but you need those around you to back you up. Just adorable. Loving it all. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Lovely chappy…I miss these 2…Hope all is well with u 2 ally…
I’m happy to hear that you’re feeling better Ally. This is such a nice update to your story. Thank you!
Good to see an update from you Ally.Get well soon.
i may be stupid but what is 00:56?? i didnt know that mel was a bleeding father. that would scare me if i was a kid??? ;) thx ali, stuff like that is hard no matter the age.
Great update Ally, feel better soon! bette will have a clearer head after she cries it all out! :)
awwwwwwwwwwwww.. i love this sweet relationship..ty ally
This is so good!
Glad you are on the mend Ally :) Woohoo…an L Wing update. Poor Bette, all those emotions coming to the surface at once. I’m glad Tina is there to comfort her. Great update. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
Great update! Why so much blame on Kit? Bette’s mom doesn’t really sound like a winner to me.
tina is a saint!!!
Ally good to know to ur feeling better, thanks for a wonderful chapter. Now dat u r feeling better hope to have updates of ur other amazing stories:)PPS
Ally: hope you are feeling better soon. Thanks for taking the time to update this story.
I hurt for Bette so much. I could really feel her pain. I am so glad that she started to cry. She needs to let it out and let Tina comfort her while she does. Great chapter Ally. I’m glad you are feeling better. Hang in there. Looking forward to more.
yay!! Ally’s in the house! loved this chapter… i believe these things happen for a reason, if they had told Bette before, she wouldn’t have had Tina and Ella to comfort her and it would be much worse than it looks now. Please post another chapter soon… whether it’s the Lwing or Love&Pride(or All my Loving, just saying), we wouldn’ object at all… pps!!!!
I am so excited that you updated for us. This chapter was amazing! As always I will be waiting for the next chapter.