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The L Wing – chapter 222
“She’s being damn pig headed Tina – she knows that I can help the situation “
“Does she know that you know this person ?”
“Well – no – but she just has to ask “
“So basically – you are criticising Bette for not asking you to help in a situation that she doesn’t know that you can help with. She’s good Kit but she is not a freaking mind reader “
Kit sulks “ She just has to ask “
“And you and I know why she isn’t turning to you – last night hurt her very much “
“Are you saying that it didn’t hurt me ?”
“No – of course not – It also hurt Melvin and I hate seeing you all so angry with each other”
“Bette was doing most of the anger “
“Kit – what do you expect ? This secret that you both kept from her all her life – yes its going to hurt her and she is going to lash out. Bette is human and she feels things very deeply and this is her weakest point – anything to do with her mother is so hard for her to deal with “
“Which is why it shouldn’t have come out – why he wants all of this in a book “
“His motives are his – the fact is that he does want the book written “
“Does it have to be by you though ?”
I am more than ready for this attack on me
“You would rather he hired some hack who slanted it so it was a hatchet job on him ? You would rather he let someone else do it and them to include lies about all of you ? Or would you prefer someone who loves Melvin and his whole family and who can write a book and who can form your father’s life in the terms that he deserves ? I want to show the whole world that my father in law is one of the most influential African Americans of his generation – that he has been a witness to so many scenes that are so iconic. He saw Jack Ruby shoot Lee Harvey Oswald. He was one of the aides that Martin Luther King was talking to from the second floor motel room balcony when he was assassinated – God Kit -that makes him unique. He knew Marilyn Monroe – god that’s a conversation I want so much with him. Melvin was a trail blazer – and Bette gets that from him – you really think that his story doesn’t deserve to be told ?”
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You have just made my Monday. I log on and see two posts from you. Yahoo!!! Good chapter. I can really feel Bette’s anger. Please post soon. On to read the next post. :)
That a good way to calm Bette down. You can,t win any fight with angry. You can,t start fighting the people that you trust and love the mostand expert to do the best job possible. Bette seems to be angry with everyone except Tina and the baby. So,if Kit can help, let her Listen to Shane.and get the lost souls homeand the other home. thanks
Great update. I think Kit is right, they are in for a long fued. I can’t see either of them backing down.
Really felt Bette’s anger come through in this chapter! I cringed myself when she went off on Kit. Surely the next chappy will be you letting us see Tina unleash her secret powers on Bette, right??? PPS
Seems we haven’t seen the worst of the sisters act. Kit should have know better than to get on Bette like that, she knows her sister too well. This is a great chapter, keeps the mind running on what is up next. PPS :)
Stubborn Porter’s! Kit made things so much worse than they had to be just to try and prove a point she didn’t have. I love the family times that calm Bette’s temper and soothe her soul. I am so addicted to this story!
What makes your writing so good is that I not only care about Tina and Bette et al, but now you’ve got me anxious to see what Bette will do to try and save the soldiers and the aid workers! Well done! Thanks!
I know and understand that why Bette is mad at Kit and Melvin, but as POTUS she has to seperate her Bussiness and personal life. She needs to accept any and all of the help that she can muster to successfully resolve theis crisis. This includes setting aside her grudge or bad feelings for both Shane and Kit. She can always frued with Kit in private later. At this rate this frued may go public and that is NOT what she needs, now or later.
Bette needs a crash course in work and personal life management 101. She can never seperate her feelings when anything involving her family comes up. She was the same with Tina and now she is letting her feud with Kit spill into her presidency. I really enjoy this story but Bette seems to have blinders when it comes to Tina. She holds Tina in such high regards, I almost feel like she is parted the Red Sea with Moses and walks on water. Tina is a tad too self righteous! I can understand Bette’s pain at losing her mom and having everything she grew up believing debunked, but she needs to deal with that and stop taking her anger out on Kit and Shane. She cannot run a country by herself and she is looking to alienate everyone around her EXCEPT Tina and Ella!
Ally..so glad you updated my favorite story.keep it up woman :0)
Ahh no good when sisters fight and this is getting bad. Hope everyone will calm down and think and hope that they will work thing out. Please post more, thanks!
Wow I’m really Looking forward to that unleashing thing “wink” Great job Ally, Kit can be really thickheaded and stubborn sometimes, I mean doesn’t she know that the situation is already bad but she just had to make it worse!!Tina is really suppoetive and great she is so good to Bette, I hope she can relax her. ” I know she will”Thankx Hun, post soon
Kit really doesn’t have the makings of a diplomat, now does she?
OH boy kit really is knee deep in poop alright! the porters are all so stubborn. they need space and time to settle down…. excellent update!! :)
both of them are just fucking babies. its all a competition to them. thx
awww hell, if I was Ella’s mommies I would’ve had the doctors in at the 1st sniffle. How come T’s so calm??? as 4 Kit and Bette; B has a right to be super angry about Kit’s role and Melvin’s; and the secret they kept all those years was becuz they damn well know they’re guilty.