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The L Wing – chapter 52
I smile at the recollection and glance at my father who is smiling — maybe we have him on our side after all.
Bette would never have made a move on me if she hadnt found out that I was crazy about her
As for why Tina — I could not tell you that – I do not know. I fell in love with her the second she walked into my office. I can tell you why I am in love with her and why I want to spend my life with her
She looks at me and softly kisses my brow.
Its very simple – she is the most amazing woman I have ever met. I love how intelligent she is — she is articulate and confident – I love and admire that in anyone. Tina is kind and gentle and is wonderful company and she makes me laugh and we have a chemistry that I cannot define. Tina is beautiful on the outside – I wont insult your intelligence by denying that we do not have a very intense sexual relationship – but as well as her immense physical beauty Tina is also exquisite on the inside. She treats everyone she meets with such gentle good nature – I am in awe of your daughter. I want her to become my wife because the thought of losing her – of not spending every day with her terrifies me
Oh wow my dad says quietly. My mom is still giving both of us the evil eye when the front door slams out and shut again.
Im home — hey who are all the cars — Tina !
Lucy bursts into the room – I turn to look at her. She looks as good as always — tight jeans and a black shirt that is open enough to reveal a basketball shirt underneath. Her blonde hair is tied back but she looks so pretty.
Lucy launches herself into my arms – I hug her tight releasing Bette from my hold. We hug each other – finally she disentangles from me and beams.
I heard that Bette was at Camp Lejeune so I kind of expected you both to be here
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(36 votes, average: 3.89 out of 5)
one cherry pie to go please….food flattery – works everytime – great couple of chapters – any leftovers for later?
goodness, brilliant :)!
I want to tell you that I really like the reality that you have created for Bette and Tina. I truely love this story. I have been reading it while I’m ill at home recovering from a serious heart and back problem and your story has kept me from going completly nuts of pain and boredom. That you for that. I love POTUS and her press secretary. Please continu!
I went to church (to keep the peace in the houshold) and I could not hear a word that the guy was saying. I kept thinking about what Tina’s parents were going to say. I get home and not one chapter but two chapters await my reading pleasure. I love this story and hope that you will continue to brighten my days to come. Glad that you are feeling better. I wish that I could eat some ice cream right now.
Just goes to show…Bette Porter….And Pie….What more could Tina ask for!!!!…So momma Kennard may take a little more convincing…..But the whole story has a kinda “feel good” edge to it….which is great!
Oh, Ally, you made my weekend with your four brilliant chapters!
Thank you for making this a wonderful story, please continue!
Don’t let your bosses get to you, just wright your story during business hours. I won’t tell them ;)
what a great weekend you made it for us. Thanks for the chapters. have fun at work.
omg u make me cry, laugh and run around screamong all in the same paragraph!ur an awesome writer….makes me proud to be a brit!!!!!
How about some apple pie w/that coffee ice cream? Yum, yum. Great story. Who’s going to deny having the POTUS as an in-law? Oh, yeah maybe if the Prez is GWB.
Ally, this chapter is brilliant just brilliant. Your writing makes so many people happy and I am so overjoyed and proud to be able to say that you are my best friend.
WOW!!! just great I love it. More please soon. Thank you
Really like how Bette handles herself no doubt she’s the commander in chief. How nice you are to write for us while you are recovering – these last two chapters were lots of fun- thanks.
The Porter charm gets them every time! Please keep posting!
Can you eat some more Ice Crean and write another one. this was brilliant thanks
Damn Bette is so charming and awesome, she so funny and sweet. Now let see what’s next, thanks!
Ally, thanks for another wonderful chapter! Glad to see tha Ma Kennard seems to be coming around. She may still need some convincing but I’m sure Pa Kennard will help work on her. I think she does see Bette’s sincerity when telling her how much she loves Tina. It’s also understandable for a parent to be protective of her child.
…..presidential decreegreat line; post again soon! Love this story.
another amazing chapter i am greateful that you posted another one! this is good i never doubt about the porter charm, Tina’s mother is a difficult person but she only wants the hapinnes for her daugther i hope B&T can convince her of that they have true love. i hope you continue keep better. take care
Leave it to Porter to ease the tension. I can’t wait for B&T to go public. Alice will shit a brick for not figuring it out!
Ahhhh, I LOVE it!!!!!
Pie: bringing people together! Excellent. I love Lucy. On to the next chapter…
I don’t suppose we can persuade you to write another chapter tonight, can we?
Thank you!
Another brilliant chapter. Great! Keep writing.
how sweet! i think i have a crush on lucy…
cute..pls post again..
woohoo~ i read three chapters in one go!thx for the posts!!!
Wow. i am truly blessed. So glad to hear you are feeling better, you are truly gifted as a writer
leave it to bette to make everyone fall in love with her….loved the chatty banter at the end, just like one big family
I cant find the words to explain how happy I am that you posted again today another brilliant chapter, going back to read it. Now if you were to post again today I will love you forever
Hmmm, pie-lover Bette, or pie-breaker Bette? maybe both. lol
Gee, Ally, after all that drama in the last chapter and they end up in a happy family portrait gathered around the kitchen table. And eating pie, none the less. You must be feeling better. Good.
I absolutely love this story and have no idea why I have not found it before. It is a real page turner so much so that this is the first Comment I’ve made since Chapter 1!
Bette as the President is great and Tina as Press Secretary brilliant. As an absolute TiBetter I am so happy having them together sorting out all the issues. caused by their relationship
Great !