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The Letter ch. 33
Mom and Dad couldn’t be happier for me. I thought that they would have had something to say about how quickly we had fallen in love but in that weekend, they too had fallen in love with Emma and Alyssa so they understood why it has happened so quickly. The thing that probably put some of their fears to rest was that they knew because of the Warren situation, our engagement would be long and in that time, we would be able to learn so much more about each other. I was excited about getting to know more about Bette and getting closer to Alyssa and Emma.
Alyssa was easy to love. She was open to the idea of letting new people into her life and was innocent. She was overcoming her own fears at the same time that she was growing into a young woman who was getting to realize her potential. I felt an immediate connection with her. She welcomed me with no reservations and the hugs that she offered me were heartfelt. She was happy with her world and her world was ever evolving, to include those who were important to her mother.
Emma was more of a mystery to me because I saw a lot of myself in her and knew that when I was her age, I wasn’t easy to reach either. In recent weeks, especially as she saw me embrace her mother and her she had let down a lot of her walls. Our differences were much less than our similarities. I knew once all of her walls were down, we would be close. I already felt them slipping and as I got to know her, I liked her even more. She was different from Alyssa. Alyssa was someone who you loved because she was just lovable. Emma was someone you loved because you had to work hard to earn her trust and in doing so, you got to know the person that few knew. I hope Bette does get her into therapy regularly. She’s a great kid with so much potential and her love is in abundance. Her fears, different from Alyssa’s though still play such a large part in her life. Her love of Bette is so formidable. To think that she could be taken from her was destroying little pieces of her at a time.
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mlyn3251 says
I can’t express how happy I am that you’ve been updating this story again. I would check the site everyday and nothing. I love everything about this story. The Warren’s must be left penniless, they’re horrible people. PPS
Nanc says
”was able to find some time today to finish this chapter as I avoided raking leaves. Hopefully, I’ll have some time in the next days to add more.” – – You know, newagegirl, that trees actually benefit from leaves on the ground (they add insulation, shielding their roots from winter cold)… so you’d be doing the trees a favor by staying inside and writing… not that your loyal readers would complain either :-)
Dainty says
So happy to see another chapter tonight and the warrens are doing just what I thought they were doing, all this for money, the bastards. Hopefully with their newly discovered criminal history, Joyce will be able to nail them to the wall and the Court can deny their access to the girls permanently. Wondered if Bette and Tina would be able to stay away from each other and it was so great to watch them realize they did not want to be apart and for them to discover that they needed to be with each other. Great chapter. PPS
bettyvhall says
They were going to disrupt these girls life for money. Sorry sacks of whale s&&t. Guess there re people in this world that out for what they can get at the risk of hurting others. They are so worthless.horrible people. Lets bring out the letter from the Mother so a judge can see how she felt about her children and Bette. A voice from the grave. thanks
StormyOne says
Mostly a silent reader, but wanted to say how glad I am that this story is back.
toby4ever says
Oh NAG, I’m so glad you ditched the leaves for us today. So now we know the motivation of the Warrens…I have a feeling though it won’t be as easy to win this as Joyce thinks, which means we are in for some drama still! Beautiful writing NAG, just beautiful!
zheese says
Dirty Rotten Frickin’ Frackin’ Scoundrels!!! Dissss-gusting!!! pfft pfft…tryin to get rid of that nasty taste they’ve left in my mouth! Thanks, nagster!
momadukes says
tissue queenetta, you need to use that rake of yours alright, you go rake up those Warrnes put them in the campfire and wala, little and big girls can drag momma Bette into the woods and have thier outdoorsy way with her. perfect. Thank you, Md
pattifloatn says
Yep, break in a few days, can’t wait, but then the dreaded FCAT. I am hoping that Joyce and others are able to do some major damage to the Warrens. Money seems to be the key to the Warrens. Maybe some jail time would be a better place for them.
Eastmorn says
So wonderful to see another post so soon – The Warrens are greedy, evil, and heartless folks. Somehow I knew money was involved. I hope Joyce sticks it to these two soundrels in court. It was wonderful that the evening ended as it did – with ice cream and one another. Hope to see If You Never… after the school break!
mc says
Just catching up missed this update somehow. I love this story and I love that the Warren’s aren’t just run of the mill homophobes but skanky crooked robbers – let Joyce at them please.thanks for posting and writing.
mlyn3251 says
Where are you? I think I’m having withdrawal. Surely the leaves must be raked by now or at least they have become compost.
hope4tb says
Where you be???????????? Hope all is well and you will post again SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!thank you
mlyn3251 says
It’s very disappointing when an author doesn’t finish the story. I guess life gets in the way sometimes.
lell says
NAG you cannot leave this wonderful story unfinished. its to good to be left. as is If you never say anything to me. i just love how you tell your stories, absolutely fabulous. please come back and finish them. i cannot tell you enough how brilliant you and your writing are. i hope all is well with you and that some day see that you have returned to finish these fantastic stories.
Bailey says
I think Bette should just give the Warrens the money with the understanding they never, ever contact the girls and drop the custody case. Save Emma and Lyss from knowing how cruel and heartless people can be. Great update. Can’t wait for more :)
beachlife says
feel fre to leave the leaves anytime,lol. let me at the warrens, i knew there had to be some money involved, but there maybe other reasons too??? so when is tina gonna move in? :)PPS
sgtmags says
Yay Nag thanks for posting again! Ten days?! Bring on the “Spawn of Satan” Let them run wild in the streets! LMAO.
lucero2557 says
Well, the Warrens become each time more horrible people, whom do not deserve to have the custody of Emma and Alyssa. B&T are getting more solid as a couple and the girls feel more comfortable knowing that they do belong to them. Bette’s friends and Kit are helping to ease the path of the battle in court. Thanks for this great update. Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks. PPS Lucero & Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick)
cpq says
Thanks for the quick update, NICE. I knew that it would be about money, it usually is about that or control. I am soooo happy that the girl have had a chance to meet and enjoy Tina’s parents before they found out about the Warren’s motive. Now that they are engaged the girls have gain to GREAT grandparents and the Warrens have aquired two new enemines in this fight. PPS :o).
Jackiee1 says
They are, at best, angry mean people with no feelings.
Rau says
YEAH, AVOIDANCE, its such a huge methodology for me to eventually work my way through things…so i’m glad the story cane before leaves. those girls are so sweet, joyce will trash the warrens for sure. nasty people. pps.
hope4tb says
Awesome as always… anyway I can get adopted by Tina’s folks?….. guess not … PPS!!!
fe1801 says
This is a beautiful story. I hope you come back and finish it someday soon!
evyfluffy says
i just read all of the stories posted by newagegirl…omg i can not believe she never finished this one…this had to have been in the top 10 best stories….i really would love to see it finished
Sharon says
newagegirl wonderful story please continue