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    The letter on the subway

    Story written on March 27, 2011 by kins40.
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    Chapter 8

    Bette reached for both of Tina’s hand and placed a kiss on each of her wrists.  She placed her hand on the back of the blonde’s neck and pulled her in for a passionate kiss. When the skin of their upper-bodies touched the two women whimpered in unison and their breathing quickly intensified.
    Bette murmured against Tina’s lips.
    "God….I want you so much"
    The feel of Bette’s soft warm breath against her lips took care of Tina’s last bit of restraint and she attacked the brunette’s lips with unbridled passion.
    They fumbled somewhat at removing the rest of their clothing as their bodies were increasingly trembling matching their ever growing desire.
    As they stood there in front of each other in all their glory, there were no words spoken, all sounds immediately strangled in their throats, so intense was the feeling at the discovery they had made of each other. 
    Bette gently pushed Tina over to the bed never taking her eyes off the blonde’s, they lowered themselves onto the soft duvet.
    Bette covered Tina’s body with hers, drawing a loud groan from both women as their entire bodies touched for the first time. She nestled her head in Tina’s neck and exhaled her words.
    "Oh my God …Tina… you feel so good"
    The  blonde received the brunette body on her own, slowly opening her legs to let her rest in-between them. Their bodies pressed further against each other as the blissful rhythm began.
    The two women relentlessly loved each other over the course of the night. Lost in the other’s world they rediscovered new shores, new worlds of exquisite rapture, a new language of love, they climbed the highest peaks together, tumbling back into valleys of pleasure only to reach even higher summits in unison. They fell back down trembling at the experience they had just shared,  reluctant to unclinch their bodies. Sleep claimed them in intervals only for them to wake up and begin their exploration once more.
    When daylight broke their bodies fell back for the last time.
     
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    10. Why were you worried?? This was a very beutiful chapter, even though I have to agree with Jackiee1, B should tell her about the letter soon. But I bet you have that covered aleady ;)

    11. Amazingly beautiful Kins, no worries! You’re already a master at giving us Tibette in their most loving and intimate moments. We’re hooked, and it’s only getting better! So glad Tina didn’t let Bette leave that studio. To borrow your wording: Bette and Tina appart tonight?… Not an option!! ;) Thanks!

    15. Still here….reading your wonderful work…I may not comment all the time but you know I’ve been fan of your work since the beginning…as usual, loooved it…PPS

    21. Fantastic chapter. So happy they’ve found each other at last. Now, as I asked in a previous chapter, I want Bette to olet her know that she found the letter or take her to her apartment and show her the letter. Maybe she should have her write something on her stationery and then take her to the apt. and show her the letter and let Tina know how affected she was by it. And now, she has found the love she too was seeking. Wonderful chapter. Thanks for posting.

    23. Hmm.. Kins40, you left me in a dreamy state :-) …. Huh?? A bit worried you said?? … Well if I may be honest too… are you insane to be worry because of this excellent writing?? Oh please, no worries dear! … The one who should be worry is US-the readers! Because I am sure that the one who is addicted to read more of your story is not only me! You have no idea how eagerly I am waiting for your post, and to ease that, I re-read from chapter one in a slow mode… Sounds silly-i know, but it’s true :-p Anyway, back to the story, when will Tina found out about Bette is having her letter?? I dont think it would be any issue there but make them closer after all the time they know each other.. Right? :-D … Hahaha… See.. I am too eager to read more but since there’s no more, you left me babbling >_< PPS?? Thanks! :-)

    27. No reason to be nervous. Loved you having Tina repeat the comment “your hand is made to fit mine” as it so perfectly describes their connection and was such a romantic way to move their relationship forward. You’ve written them so sweet, and open, and adorable with a whole lot of sexy mixed in!

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