Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of NC-17. Age verification is required to proceed.
The Logistics of Romance
“Tina. Please!”
That’s all I needed to hear. I take my fingers and open her lips, revealing just how excited she was. She was dripping. I had to taste her. I ran my tongue from her opening to her clit. I circled it slowly then took it into my mouth with a soft suck. I looked up to see her leaning her head back against the door. Her moans filled my ears as I continued to stroke her clit with my tongue. She put her hands in my hair as the orgasm rushed to escape her.
“Oh fuck!” she screamed. Her legs were shaking so badly that I didn’t think she’d be able to stand when she came. I stood up and replaced my tongue with my fingers. I rubbed her clit. It was so hard and so slippery from all her excitement. Her hips bucked against mine. I knew an explosion was nearing. I took her clit between my thumb and my forefinger and pulled, simultaneously pulling her nipple with my teeth. She moaned loudly as her body convulsed. I held onto her, knowing this pleasure was over riding her ability to control her limbs. I thought she was tired and needed a break, but after a moment of recuperation, she grabs me and kisses me, leading me over the bed. She sits me down and says
“Your turn.” Before she gives me a chance to react, I feel her tongue on me. I nearly jump out of my skin. She’s not taking it slow. She’s licking me and sucking me with frenzy. I lean back as she takes over my body.
“You’re so good Bette! So good..” At hearing these words, she moans into me, making my already sensitive clit throb. She grabs my thighs and pushes them forward, giving her more access to my dripping pleasure zone. She starts taking broad strokes with her tongue. She’s turning me inside out. My moans turn into screams of absolute pleasure as she enters me with two of her fingers while her tongue continues to manipulate my clit. In and out. In and out. She touches my G-spot tapping it softly while she sucks my clit.
“ Bette, I’m about to cum. Oh God!”
She enters me deeply, and sucks me hard, and I can’t hold the force rushing through my body. I scream her name with pleasure. She licks me greedily as I continue to cum in her mouth. She moans at the taste of my wetness.
After my back finally settles on the mattress, I feel her climb on the bed next to me. She lays on her side, resting her head on her hand. She lazily moves her fingertips on my stomach. My breath settles, and I cuddle up next to her. She smiles lovingly.
“I love you Tina.”
“I love you more.” I reply, caressing her cheek.
She looks into my eyes with an expression that makes my heart race. It’s a mix of love, admiration, and intensity. It’s as if she’s looking into my soul.
“There’s one more surprise. Look under your pillow.”
I lean up and lift my pillow. There’s a little black box.
“Open it.” She encourages.
I open it and gasp at what’s inside. It’s a beautiful diamond ring. She lifts my chin to make eye contact.
“Will you marry me, Tina?”
I’m shocked. I’m speechless. This whole night, this ring, this romance has overwhelmed me. Tears fall from my eyes. She wipes the tears away as they fall.
“Yes!” I say as I nod my head. She smiles brightly and pulls me into an embrace. I hold on tightly to her. I feel her tears fall on my shoulder. She pulls back and lightly kisses me on the lips, and lust overtakes us once again. We make love until morning, floating into oblivion. We’re like stars suspended in our own sky, destined for a lifetime of happiness..and romance.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.



(49 votes, average: 3.63 out of 5)
WOW!!! That was VERY HOT!!!! tHANKS pps
I’d leave a longer comment but my screen is melting. Wow! Thanks for the awesome post.
Ok I need a new laptop this story completely fried it and now I need a cold shower…LOL! WOW! What an story excellent brilliant. Thank you
I have no words!!!! ABSOLUTELY AWESOME!!!
Oh hell! I can’t take it anymore! I’m off to read it…hope the ‘berry is fireproof.
OMFG!! You think I’d learn not to do that to myself at work! That was amazing, so romantic and smokin’ hot. *THUD*
Wauw – guess I should have taken that warning seriously.
This is soooo sweet and hot! I have a suggestion for a scenario. Bette. Bike. Tina. Cunnilingus. (in any order) :D
Should not have read this knowing I was going to bed alone
You had me at the limo ride!! I had to stop reading for a minute. Now, the proposal was romantic, but there’s one small detail…Tina’s wife. This gets better and better. PPS
I love Bette’s romantic side. Great story. Now you’ve got me even more intrigued about your previous story so I will ask that you post the rest.
Great! Just great! With a warning like that I can’t possibly read this at work! But this is going to kill me knowing it’s waiting…we’ll see if I can wait for the remaining 8 hours of my shift. Doubtful, very doubtful. LMAOOOO!
That was beautiful, and hot, and cute. Loved it!
Cold showers are not gonna help this..SHIT!!!!!