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The Long and Winding Road – chp 7
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“She once broke a barman’s finger who was coming onto me and touched my ass. If you had touched me in front of Bette she would have ripped your head off Henry “
He sneered. Tina flushed with anger.
“The others would have held you down because they all hate you Henry – not for being heterosexual or for being a man. it’s a myth that you never understood that all lesbians hate men. But they hate you for being a fucking male chauvinist pig. For all the comments about how we would all be better if we had a cock inside us on a regular basis “
“You never objected to a good fucking “
“I didn’t – I liked it a lot but I wanted something’s from sex that you couldn’t even spell let alone done Henry — like having my G-spot stimulated by your finger and having my clit sucked and kissed.”
“You screamed pretty loud Tina “
“I screamed until you ordered me to stop because I once woke up Mickey — your rutting boar impression not having the slightest impact on him of course “
“So what Tina – -you liked it “
“I’m sorry Henry – you are a good man and I hope you met the right woman for you and for your son “
“I came to the Planet “ Henry said – determined to have her hear him out “ and you were out the back with your ex. And you were touching her face and staring into her eyes. You never once looked at me that way Tina — I just wanna know why you used me”
Tina could see Henry was genuinely upset.
“I didn’t use you Henry — I swear that I care about you. But – she’s something to me that no one else ever could or ever will be. She’s the other part of my soul – she is the person who fires me up and calms me down at the same time. Bette is the person who makes me whole. I thought that when we parted that I could replace her – but I was deluding myself. She belongs with me like I belong with her – we’ll only ever be miserable apart. “
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Great update, and I am not feeling sorry for Henry at all because I think that he went into this thing with Tina with both eyes open. He was looking for a momma for Micky and got what he wanted out of their relationship. He knowingly tried to fool his self into believing that they were a great couple despite the fact that Tina still keep some of her things at her old house and never sold it. If you choose to fool yourself, then you are the fool and only have yourself to blame. He should really let this be the end of it. Loved seeing Bette comfort Tina again, or should I say T :o)
I’m so mad about the clothes… and they’re not even mine! Wow… anyway, great chapter, heartwarming, loving every word of it!
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Ally, I like both of your stories, but this one has really grown on me. At first I was a little scared but knowing how you feel about Bette and Tina, I placed my heart into your hands. I knew that you would take care of it. You have and even more. This is a very touching story and I can’t wait for the next update. There are so many unanswered questions that I am sitting on the edge of my seat to hear.
absolutly briliant chapter. Could not have done it better. I love the story, your writting. You are very talented. I love Bette pregnant! Very nice alteration to the real happenings.
Great story Ally, I´m looking forward to the next chapter.
This is exactly how it is going to be (In the L word hopefully), when Tina comes around, and she Kicks Backacne’s a$$ to tha curb, I will have no sympathy for him what so ever, when he has tears and shit, ima be like *roll eyes* B*tch plz! You got to go! Love ur story .. but yeah L WING L WING WING lol
& I was so sure it was going to be Kerosene & a lighted match!looking forward to the next one ally.PS wasn’t the kid’s name mikey on the series?
Way to go T. Henry showed how dumb he is, you don’t trash someone’s stuff then leave them in your home alone. STUPID!
Fantastic as usual! I was desperately hoping for an L wing chapter but this is rapidly becoming its equal! …I never was very decisive! And just incase you need any more revenge ideas for henry, how about sewing a couple of prawns in the hem of his curtains, or sprinkling mustard/cress seeds on his carpet and then watering them! After 4 days the house will smell like a fish market and he’ll have a lovely new green carpet! A mate of mine did the cress seeds and wow did it work! Thanks for all your posts, Ally, always a pleasure to read em!
LOVE both stories!! You are a GREAT writer!!!
excellent! how dare Henry rip all Tina’s cloths? a child action don’t you think? well but now B&T seems to me like they can fix somethings and start again!
Love the fire they both have. It will be interesting to see how that fire returns to them. Thanks Ally
Wow, things are evolving pretty quickly. For a second I thought Tina was going to torch Henry’s house. Glad she stopped short of that. Maybe in addition to the creosote, she should have taken a page from Alice’s book and applied a liberal coating of poopy-shit to Henry’s belongings. Can’t blame him for being hurt, but he was an asshole.
yay update…although i’m surprised it was this story…I thought i figured out your pattern…but in any case any update from you is always great!
Bet that 4 day call to London will suck. HAHA..can’t say it didn’t happen to a better person. LOL Love this story and all your others. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Love the direction you’re taking this story. I just knew today would be the day we would have an L-Wing update!!!
Love the story and I WANT THE NUMBER OF THAT TALKING CLOCK IN LONDON. PLEASE. This chapter was great and knowing that they still feel the same for each other is super. No let them get back together, have a family and live happily ever after. I do believe in “happy ever after.” Tina must go to London and be there when the baby is born, they must do this together to make up for the son they lost.They will have a hard time of it but they will get through it. Thank you.
Ouch, 4 days call to London. Oh boy, payback really is a bitch! LOL… Great update, thanks for posting.
i so love this story… now really get them talking and back together… i have a feeling if bette goes back to london, tina will be right next to her on the plane… but please just get them together… where they belong… love this… please continue
you are getting better as a writer Ally – just amazing — oh and in your last story – rachel is not the only one with gorgeous baby blue eyes eh ?talk tomorrow xxxx
Ally…I love when Tina is not a bitch…we can count on you to keep “our” Tina true. post soon…anything.
Ally, That was just great. I hope Bette and Tina can work things out. Thank you for the story.
Henry made a a big mistake,I believe Tina would have left without a fuss or mess if he had been muture enough .Pay back is hell. Maybe they can get some thing worked out and Tina will go back to England for Bette to help her with the baby. thanks
also so happy to get another chapter from either of your stories! (now that you’ve hooked me into 2!!) I am really starting to wonder why B can’t move back to LA… why does she need to stay in London? (Sure, it’s London, but I hear LA is nice too! sunshine vs. rain if nothing else!!) Well, I’ll wait and see… I know that you won’t let us betina fans down!
marvelous…i like where it’s going..i know you planned some drama in the future possibly but for now i will enjoy them getting back together..thanks
Another great chapter, my friend. Payback is a bitch and her name is Tina. LMAO at that one Ally. I hope that Bette and Tina can reconnect with each other. Sometimes love isn’t always enough, but in this case I hope it is.
Henry is such a SOB! Even though their love for each other is still burning,hope B&T will talk about the issues they still need to deal with, and then move on with their new life together, wherever that may be. Thanks for the update.
I have a confession to make… I’m looking for this one before L Wing… Its great!
Loved it! I think your writing is completely marvoulous! I loved how Tina knew that Bette would’ve kicked Henry’s a** if he would have tried anything! Hopefully they will be able to work things out as to where they’re going to be in a week!!
Great! Henry so deserved what he got. Now please get the two ladies together. I love this story, ally.
It is so obvious that you love this couple. Me, too. You handle them with such care and adoration. You writing is wonderful, literate, complex, passionate and authentic. You’re a CPA, correct? If I got that right, you certainly don’t fit the stereotypical image of one. I sincerely hope that you have the passion in your life that you so beautifully display for your fans.
Oh I forgot to ask you, can I have a number of that talking clock in London please, I think I will needed, lol!
Note to self: Don’t destroy ex-partner’s clothes. She might go you one better and then you’ll just look like a dumbass.
What Tina did to Henry’s clothes caused me to run outside and do a somersault! Ok, I really didn’t do it; but it’s the thought that counts. Wonderful update……..post again soon. I also look for this story before L Wing.
This is so good and damn payback is a bitch and her name is Tina Kennerd lol. Yeah Bette would kick henry ass if he touch Tina. Don’t ever destroy your ex-girlfriend or ex-partners clothes you will regreted. Ok now let our ladies talk and work thing out and let see whats next, thanks!
I do like this story, too. L Wing still my fav
Just fantastic. I love Feisty!Tina. It is so good that both Bette and Tina can be there for each other now. Looking forward to them dealing with the loose ends and to lots more beautiful moments of reconnection. Your writing is as wonderful as ever. Can’t wait for your next post (of anything). Oh and wasn’t the FA cup final phenomenal to watch? (Not as exciting as the L wing perhaps but hey we can’t expect everything can we!)
the passion tht they share is sumthin only true love and soulmates share and they jus complet each other like ying yangyou are amazing ally