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    The look in her eyes

    Story written on July 27, 2011 by kins40.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=77937
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    Single chapter – one-off

    Bette put her arms around Tina’s shoulder and pulled her gently towards her.
    The blonde leaned sideways and let herself be surrounded by the warm arms, her heartbeat and  her breath.
    She stroked the hair back from Tina’s face and continued caressing the blonde’s scalp in a slow gentle raking motion.
    "It is so peaceful here," Tina said softly as she took in her surroundings.
    They had retreated to Bette’s back garden and were sitting side by side on the beautiful garden seats adorned with multicoloured ethnic cushions. It was late afternoon and Bette and Tina had spent the day in each other’s company.
    "I know, it is rather isn’t it," Bette replied equally as softly, lulled by the  slow movement of her own hand in Tina’s hair.
    Bette was actually very proud of the sanctuary she had created so close and yet so far away from the frantic life of the city which sprawled as far as the eye could see all around them.  For the time being, however,  they had stepped away and only a few yards separated them from this hustle and bustle on the other side of the front door.
    Three weeks. It had only been three weeks since Bette had met Tina.
    It was during that evening at the gallery. Bette had turned around, distracted from her conversation by the insisting tone of a man’s voice calling her name.
    She had spun around to answer her interlocutor and she had found herself standing in front of those eyes.
    Bette barely remembers the request made by that man. She had remained professional and  courteous to him and his request but all she remembered of that time was how intrigued she had been by those eyes.
    They were the most amazing eyes.
    Had she been asked, at the time, about their colour, she would have been unable to give an answer. Those eyes were more than a beautiful colour, they had something to say.
    Was it a past full of secrets or a future full of love with no regrets? Bette did not know the name which belonged to those eyes but she wanted to know the answer to those questions.
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    3. I check the website everyday for updates from you and then I see one and I was like YAY!!! This was so awesome! Hot, sexy, tender, and sweet! Please start a new series or multi-chapter story soon, I love the way you write!

    5. S**t! I am glad I read it tonight. I thought only guys having wet dreams. well I am always having one after reading your post.to answer your question, yes I did lol.Ypur stories are guidance to love thank you. Yet you are bad to put me in this situation PMSL.I am too old to have wet dreams. Wonderful post.

    7. Kins…I would like to thank you. You’re by far the best writer in this site (IMO). Your words are just exquisite, simple breathtaking.I’m usually a silent reader, but your talent made me come out off my safety zone to say: Bravo, you’re brilliant.Obrigada por dividir seu talento com a gente.Beijos.Flávia.Ps: I read all your stories

    9. Flay is 100% correct. No doubt. I would love to study at your word processor, my dear. My imagination has finally met its match in your written words, and if I can speak for it, it is hopelessly in love with your written works of art.

    10. K40..you’ve tackle almost everything.. ..and anything…but this is one of my fave so far..I love eyes …and yes you can and always known one’s feeling just looking through their eyes.

    11. Wow, I knew it! The Eye story it the best one ever, LOL. Very hot, intense, and tender sweet. I don’t know but I love it thank u for the 5 wonderful stories ;D I wish we can see more from u

    16. Hey Kins, Thanks for your PM. I sent my reply, but some error occured. I hope you get it. But just in case… Your stories are worth reading and re-reading and re-reading and so on…. Keep writing. Love your stories. And comments for this story… What a description of beautiful eyes. I agree, Tina’s eyes are like spectrum of colours. So beautiful. You are amazing.

    17. Kins … I generally skip NC17 stories and when I do read them it is with some trepidation because generally they contain graphic descriptions of sexual content or acts that I have no interest in reading but when I see NC17 on a new Kins40 story I jump right in because I know the if I don’t read it I will miss a wondrous experience, and I have yet to be disappointed. Thank you for this story and the previous one which I did not get a chance to comment on. You truly are an amazing author and you do it with such style and grace. You’ve given us a new appreciation of body parts.

    18. I really enjoyed this story. It reminds me of my favorite quote. “But to see her was to love her, love but her, and love forever,” Robert Burns. Thank you for sharing.

    19. Love all your stories….the images that your words try to convey, they are so vivid…and I always come away with wishing to be immersed in this kind of intense connection again. Someday.

    22. Wow! … O_o … And here we are! Amazed, inspired, touched, and satisfied* (*: for a while till your other masterpiece! :-p) LOL … thank you for admitting that somehow you also enjoyed the nudging and poking of your favorite parts :-p for a moment it ever crossed my mind not to teasing you too much about that in case I offended you.. It’s such a relieve as I don’t have to worry about that anymore :-D ha3..Does it mean I / we can continue the effort of tickling you to write more?! ;-)  And for this story, I can’t agree more! Eyes are the window of the heart and soul.. I always found that good actors/actresses are the one who absolutely can act and must be able to convey the message through their eyes expression too!! One thing I noticed when watching Tibette in action.. Oh..my…God..! JB and LH are soooo good on this! I think it’s one of the factors why the connection looks so da*n real!! Geez.. Pardon my babbling.. :-p After reading your sweet lovely tender story I feel so much buzz inside and oh..! it’s so heart warming! ;-) thanks Kins for sharing your story with us!! You have no idea how excited and thrilled I am when seeing your name!! ;-) It’s such a nice surprise after sometime of not being able to have Internet/access to this site ;-) ha3.. thank you! And NC17?! Wow!! Your nc17 writing is sizzling and so classy! :-) brava!! definitely keep looking forward to your next post. Cheers!! ^_^PS: when there’s time for more babies I will absolutely re-read the story of the worshipping part! ;-) lol coz it would be a great source of keep the positive energy flowing and having more positive attitude too regardless how often I need to act as the real Merlion ;-)

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