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The look in her eyes
Story written on July 27, 2011 by kins40.
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She was reminded instantly of a wonderful quote she once read;
"A soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
Her mouth gave a wonderful smile and her heart fluttered that little bit faster at the instant discovery of the realm of fantasies her mind was opening in front of her. One look was all it took. Destiny had already kissed her.
Bette and Tina touched for the first time that night. It was a chaste, polite and innocuous handshake but something happened in that very instant and both women felt it.
When Tina had found herself in the presence of the brunette a few days later, Bette had kissed her, softly and tenderly.
Tina almost fell over. It was the combination of the surprise of the act itself but also the confirmation of the yearning inside of her. That feeling she had been waiting for all these years. That kiss had unravelled it all for her in an instant. She knew it now, she felt it now.
She was never so happy to have lost any jewellery before.
When Bette’s lips left hers, Tina reopened her eyes. Bette was looking down at her.
She felt a warmth mounting to her face as her cheeks took on a faint but noticeable pink tint and she gave a shy smile.
Bette traced her face with a slender finger. The barely there touch felt like a breath and everywhere she touched, Tina felt a tingle.
The movie studio executive and the gallery owner started dating, slowly, tentatively.
They made time for each other. Lots of time. And on days like today, their time started with breakfast, then lunch and dinner. They talked, they laughed, they got to know one another and every so often they kissed.
Tina woke up to the smell of the garden’s Rosemary and Bette.
Tentatively she moved her head. She realised she was still leaning against the brunette’s chest.
They were stretched out on the plump and comfortable cushions of the garden seat. Tina’s head was tucked underneath Bette’s arm, using her as a pillow.
The gallery owner was half-turned towards her and their bodies pressed close together all down their length. Bette’s hand had finally stilled their comforting movements through the blonde locks and had found a resting place, draped over the roundness of Tina’s bare shoulder. Her hand was warm and soft against her skin.
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Hot and tender. And, have I mentioned hot?
Wonderful.
I check the website everyday for updates from you and then I see one and I was like YAY!!! This was so awesome! Hot, sexy, tender, and sweet! Please start a new series or multi-chapter story soon, I love the way you write!
Amazing!
S**t! I am glad I read it tonight. I thought only guys having wet dreams. well I am always having one after reading your post.to answer your question, yes I did lol.Ypur stories are guidance to love thank you. Yet you are bad to put me in this situation PMSL.I am too old to have wet dreams. Wonderful post.
This was lovely, Kins. Thank you so much.
Kins…I would like to thank you. You’re by far the best writer in this site (IMO). Your words are just exquisite, simple breathtaking.I’m usually a silent reader, but your talent made me come out off my safety zone to say: Bravo, you’re brilliant.Obrigada por dividir seu talento com a gente.Beijos.Flávia.Ps: I read all your stories
How beautiful! Just simply awesome and wonderful. thank you.
Flay is 100% correct. No doubt. I would love to study at your word processor, my dear. My imagination has finally met its match in your written words, and if I can speak for it, it is hopelessly in love with your written works of art.
K40..you’ve tackle almost everything.. ..and anything…but this is one of my fave so far..I love eyes …and yes you can and always known one’s feeling just looking through their eyes.
Wow, I knew it! The Eye story it the best one ever, LOL. Very hot, intense, and tender sweet. I don’t know but I love it thank u for the 5 wonderful stories ;D I wish we can see more from u
I think you’ve become my favorite writer here. I can’t even begin to express what I feel when I read your stories. Your stories are awesome.
So beautiful.
Beautiful,simply beautiful.Thank you very much.Please continue writing.
How can I not float when you write stories like these? They just take my breath away. I can’t wait for your next story.
Hey Kins, Thanks for your PM. I sent my reply, but some error occured. I hope you get it. But just in case… Your stories are worth reading and re-reading and re-reading and so on…. Keep writing. Love your stories. And comments for this story… What a description of beautiful eyes. I agree, Tina’s eyes are like spectrum of colours. So beautiful. You are amazing.
Kins … I generally skip NC17 stories and when I do read them it is with some trepidation because generally they contain graphic descriptions of sexual content or acts that I have no interest in reading but when I see NC17 on a new Kins40 story I jump right in because I know the if I don’t read it I will miss a wondrous experience, and I have yet to be disappointed. Thank you for this story and the previous one which I did not get a chance to comment on. You truly are an amazing author and you do it with such style and grace. You’ve given us a new appreciation of body parts.
I really enjoyed this story. It reminds me of my favorite quote. “But to see her was to love her, love but her, and love forever,” Robert Burns. Thank you for sharing.
Love all your stories….the images that your words try to convey, they are so vivid…and I always come away with wishing to be immersed in this kind of intense connection again. Someday.
Fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow.
Wow..incredible, beautiful story!! You always have such power to bring us inside your story..truly amazing!
Wow! … O_o … And here we are! Amazed, inspired, touched, and satisfied* (*: for a while till your other masterpiece! :-p) LOL … thank you for admitting that somehow you also enjoyed the nudging and poking of your favorite parts :-p for a moment it ever crossed my mind not to teasing you too much about that in case I offended you.. It’s such a relieve as I don’t have to worry about that anymore :-D ha3..Does it mean I / we can continue the effort of tickling you to write more?! ;-) And for this story, I can’t agree more! Eyes are the window of the heart and soul.. I always found that good actors/actresses are the one who absolutely can act and must be able to convey the message through their eyes expression too!! One thing I noticed when watching Tibette in action.. Oh..my…God..! JB and LH are soooo good on this! I think it’s one of the factors why the connection looks so da*n real!! Geez.. Pardon my babbling.. :-p After reading your sweet lovely tender story I feel so much buzz inside and oh..! it’s so heart warming! ;-) thanks Kins for sharing your story with us!! You have no idea how excited and thrilled I am when seeing your name!! ;-) It’s such a nice surprise after sometime of not being able to have Internet/access to this site ;-) ha3.. thank you! And NC17?! Wow!! Your nc17 writing is sizzling and so classy! :-) brava!! definitely keep looking forward to your next post. Cheers!! ^_^PS: when there’s time for more babies I will absolutely re-read the story of the worshipping part! ;-) lol coz it would be a great source of keep the positive energy flowing and having more positive attitude too regardless how often I need to act as the real Merlion ;-)
SO SWEET AND WONDERFUL
So romantic, awe tibette first time..love it!
Simply Mesmerizing!
WOW! Beautiful!