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The Marrying Man 5
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Alright, alright, but you owe me lunch, Bette. I mean it.
Whatever just tell me what you know.
Well, it’s like I told you on the phone she had a heart attack. It doesn’t make a lot of sense but that’s the story. She looked to be generally healthy. Her heart seemed to be healthy, but acute heart problems have been know to happen. Seems like natural causes to me. I don’t think you have a case Bette. Drop it and move on. Shane has told me how obsessed you’ve been with this thing. Now you have your answer, there is no foul play here.
James, what you are telling me just does not make sense. And tell your wife, Mrs. McCutcheon that I don’t need her talking about my behavior to the world.
She is hardly going around telling people about you. I am her husband, Bette.
Whatever, James. I don’t buy what you’re saying about the McBride death. Are you sure? I think you should look again.
I am telling you, I didn’t find anything. And it doesn’t matter much now, because the body has been released to her husband for burial. It’s over, let it go. I am sure you have other cases. What’s got you so sure this isn’t just an unfortunate death anyway?
Just a hunch. Anyway, I’ll see you later James. Check you later.
Confused and disappointed, Bette returns to the case load at the precinct, thinking to herself well what now?
***
Hey honey, how are you? How was work today?
Hey Tina, work was alright. Hey I have to go out of town on business for a couple of days. I am leaving tomorrow. Something came up at the last minute that I need to deal with before our wedding. I don’t want any disturbances when we leave for our honeymoon. I want to be able to spend every waking moment with you. I am going to miss you.
How long will you be gone, Tina says while throwing her arms around Eric’s neck and leaning in for a kiss.
Not long, I’ll be back before you know it.
Babe, you were just away on business 3 weeks ago.
What are you; a detective, Eric says with aggravation creeping into his voice.
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I couldn’t picture Shane married to a man either, but since this is moho’s story, I’ll deal with it! LOL!! Eric slapping Tina is not cool, and she not only took it, but provided herself with an excuse for why he did it. Not only that, when she told him she loved him, his only response was “yeah!” Ok, I’m not Einstein, but there’s enough going on right here for a rocket scientist to know that this is NOT a happy relationship. Since they aren’t even married yet, maybe Tina will be able to get away from this asshole – or does she not want to et away?
Bette needs to hurry up and corner Eric. I am afriad that he will not only hurt Tina but his children. He considers them a miskake already so getting rid of them would not be a problem at all.
Man, Love is blind. But you know this is how it goes down sometimes. One slap but the partner ignores it rather than seeing it as a warning sign, then they turn around and say I never saw it coming. I hope Tina can wake up but it might be too late and Bette figure Eric’s angle in the murders.
Oh I forgot: Shane married to a MAN!!!!lol…I can’t picture that!
Probably because Eric was really sweet and loving in the beginning. I have no experience with abusers, but don’t they generally start out as the perfect person and then one day they reach their comfort zone and reveal their real selves? If he was abusive from day one we could probably say Tina’s a dumbass for being with him. Anyway I had wondered what happened to this story. Thanks for posting!
not even knowing that eric is a murderer how can tina take his abuse? i hope bette will figure it out soon
So glad you posted again. So Eric is a prik with anger management issues… I hope Bette catches up with his sorry a** soon. I can’t wait for her first interaction with Tina.