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The Onyx part2
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After 7 beers and 10 girls asking me to dance, Helena text me asking where I was, so I go in the VIP again. She’s not dancing anymore… and I’m not sure how I feel… bad because she’s gone or happy because she doesn’t have anybody grabbing her ass. I sit.
“Where were you Shane?”
“I needed a drink… where’s Alice?”
“Oh she’s getting a lap dance”
“oh…”
“What’s wrong?”
“Nothing… look… I want a lap dance”
“haha great, for a minute there I thought you weren’t my Shane” Jenny looks at me with big eyes and I laugh
“haha yea”
“Well let me get some girl then” she stands up
“Wait I want Carm-… um Cat”
“I knew you liked her, you were giving her your hungry eyes the hole time” She moves away and she talks with this guy for a minute or two then she sits again”
“Jenny you want a lap dance?”
“N-no Shane”
“Cense when does she call you Shane?” Helena looks really pissed at Jenny “Where the fuck is your respect huh?”
“NO she can call me Shane, Helena I don’t care”
“She’s not your friend Shane, but your fucking slave”
“Look, I just don’t want her to call me Miss Shane … It got old”
“oh… anyways, talking about slave…” she looks behind me and then I feel a pull in my shirt. When I look back I see Carmen in her underwear again.
“Are you coming?” she says walking away and I follow her, passing the room Dana went in… the curtain weren’t closed the hole way so I see Alice on top of Dana. Haha man Alice in cheating on me… we get in this little room and she tells me to sit down. I do. She closes the red curtain, something Alice didn’t do. Then she starts moving her hips dancing her way to me, looking at me. She gets up on the couch were I was sitting and continue dancing with her panties in my face… that smell… shit I’m in trouble …I have to remind my self that I can’t touch her. And it’s hard because the only thing I’m thinking of doing is pulling does little panties off her and grabbing her ass pulling her closer so I can taste her pussy. She takes off her bra and gets lower so that her tits were at my face and she’s straddling my waist. I feel this hot sensation coming from the middle of my legs. The feeling of her in top of me is just the best feeling ever. She starts grinding to me. Then she gets up and I already miss her skin on mine. She starts taking off her panties, really slow and I can’t think… I want her so much but… but I can’t do this… not like this
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Keep going this is so cool and differnt! =D
this story definitely caught me by surprise, its very good please post soon
Great story! I love the idea of this other world. I hope, Shane will find a way out of this huge K-hole she’s in. But at first she should make things clear between Carmen and her. Can’t wait to see what will happen next and what’s up with Carmen&Co in this story. I reeaally love this one so please keep going!!
Im loving Cat so far, and who is that person Shane took away from her?¿ GREAT STORY PPS!!!!
Dude this iz sooooo fuckin’ kool!!!! Mane, I’m lovin ‘Cat’ . . . . she a fiesty one ~wiggles eyebrows~ . . . . Please come on and give dis tomboi an update ~puppy-dog eyes~ . . . Whelp, anyways, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . HoLlA aT mE!!!! Stank . . . Da’ one and only, chicka!!