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The Pact–Broken Promises
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8 years later June 24, 1995 3pm—School fountain
She sat at the bench in front of the fountain waiting for her to show. She hadn’t seen her since the day they confessed they were in love with each other. She had tried calling her several times but they had moved and letters written were returned with no forwarding address. She hoped beyond hope that she remembered what they promised each other that day.
As the minutes ticked away she tapped her feet watching the traffic and then stared at the fountain thinking back to the day she met the girl she fell in love with.
”You know if you throw a penny in there and make a wish it will come true” the voice called out behind her
”Huh?” She turned around to see her walking up beside her
”I said if you throw a penny in there and make a wish it will come true” she repeated.
”Well I don’t have a penny so I guess my wish will never come true”
”Here. Take mine. Maybe it will give you good luck” She said handing the penny over
”Thanks” She replied and started to throw the penny in but the girl stopped her.
”Wait! You got to close your eyes and make a wish before you throw Abe in there” She explained.
”Abe?”
The girl rolled her eyes.
”Abraham Lincoln. On the penny”
”Oh yeah. I knew that. Sorry” She said slapping her forehead
She closed her eyes, made a wish, opened her eyes, then threw the penny in the fountain.
”Well I hope your wish comes true and that my penny helped” She said putting her hand on her shoulder. ”By the way my name is Tina. Tina Kennard.”
”Thanks. I’m Bette. Bette Porter”
”Well Bette. Would you like to go play on the monkey bars before recess is up?”
”Yes. Sure”
The memory made her smile but the hands on her watch made her frown as an hour had passed and no sign of her.
”Tina you promised. I must be the world’s biggest idiot to actually agree to something that obviously didn’t mean shit to you when you made this pact. Maybe you never loved me like you said you did. I took it seriously. Fuck! I’m just a fool” Bette chastised herself as she got up and walked to the fountain.
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I like your story, continuous please and please your story has a happy ending.
oh wow nice start, I regret that Tina failed to attend an appointment, she was the idea.
please continue, I’ll follow
Please continue. I want to know why Tina didn’t show. Thanks
Excellent start. Great story! I’ll bet Tina was pregnant and couldn’t meet up with Bette! Please continue!
Hello, welcome!
A very good start. I agree with Vegas513. I bet Tina was pregnant at the time and could’nt make their meeting. But why didn’t she got Bette’s letters back then?
Bette moved on and is married and now they meet each other 20 years later, while Bette is really injured.
I really hope you will update soon and hope for a happy Tibette ending.
Well of course I have to say welcome my dear as a writer and lover of this spectacular couple. This story was very refreshing from most so that’s always great. Its sad that Tina didn’t keep her end of the promise but I was sure that one of them wasn’t… Now the doctor Tina has laid eyes on Bette Porter so this should be good…again nice job!
A very good and sad start,hopefully the ending is a happy one. Please continue and come back soon!
Hey rayne, very interesting beginning and I would like to read how the story unfolds. Wondering too why Tina didn’t show up as promised but I am glad Bette did move on and no matter what Tina had her chance and blew it so why would Bette leave her wife? As it seems Bette did keep her promise and unsuccessfully tried to keep in touch with Tina. What happened, did Tina’s parents find out and had a hand in sending Bette’s letters back. Did Tina even try to stay in contact with Bette, because even if she were pregnant at the time they were supposed to meet, there was a lot of time in between to get in touch with Bette. So sorry if I don’t see Bette and Tina getting back together, especially as I don’t think that Bette married Victoria just for fun. I know that almost everyone on this site always wants Tina and Bette together no matter – I am not one of those, I also like reading stories where they find someone else and live happily after, especially when the story is about Bette. So I am looking forward to see how the story unfolds especially as it seems that Tina too is married and even has a child. Thank you for posting and hopefully continuing with your story.
Wow! great start already liked this story.
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5 stars.