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The Pact–Broken Promises
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”Well my wish didn’t come true. I hope all these wishes in this fountain find their way to their dreamer’s reality because mine didn’t” Bette muttered as she turned around and walked back to her rental car. She waited another hour in the car and when she realized that she had lost the love she never had she let the tears fall.
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10 years later
”I’ll be there in 20 minutes babe.. Love you too. Bye” Bette said hanging up her cellphone, shutting off all the lights to her office, grabbing her coat and heading out the door.
She made her way to the parking garage and got into her car. After adjusting her mirror and checking her make up, she started the car and headed for the exit.
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Tina held her coffee cup in her hand and leaned up against the counter in the break room. She has been on ER duty for 48 hours and can feel herself ready to collapse. With staff being so short she has had to put in long hours at the hospital.
Feeling a buzzing in her pocket she reached in and pulled out her cellphone.
”Hey Mom” Tina answered
”Hey. I just wanted to tell you that your son, the great Kyle Lawson, scored 15 pts tonight. What a way to celebrate his 10th birthday and your 31st my baby. I wish you could be with us. Philip filmed everything. He’s such a proud daddy”
”Yeah. I know he is Mom..Look..I’m getting paged to the ER. Tell Bub I love him and that Momma is so proud of him”
Tina quickly hung up and ran through the doors toward the ER meeting the EMT’s.
”Dr. Lawson. I was beginning to wonder if you got the page” The intern said as he approached Tina
”What we got?” Tina asked grabbing the chart from the EMT as the intern filled her in
”We have a Female..32..BP 90/56 Res 18. Possible multiple fractures to left leg and arm, multiple lacerations to face. Breathing on her own. Another vehicle ran a red light and made contact with the driver side of her vehicle”
”Ok let’s get the patient sent for X-ray and get OR 1 ready” Tina ordered as she went to scrub up and saw a woman frantically running up to the desk as she walked into the OR.
”My wife, Bette Douglas-Porter she was brought in. Where is she?!.. I’m Victoria Douglas-Porter. Please can someone tell me how she is!” Victoria demanded in hysterics at the information desk.
As the clerk tried to calm Victoria, Tina walked into the OR where the patient was prepped and ready for surgery to repair her multiple fractured left leg and left arm and to suture the lacerations in her face.
”Did we get a name on the patient” Tina asked as the OR attendant placed the surgical gloves on Tina’s hands
Tina walked up the patient as the attendant stated the name.
”Bette Porter. Well she’s married. Bette Douglas-Porter it says on the chart”
Tina instantly froze. ”Bette” She gasped as she stared at Bette lying on the operating table
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I like your story, continuous please and please your story has a happy ending.
oh wow nice start, I regret that Tina failed to attend an appointment, she was the idea.
please continue, I’ll follow
Please continue. I want to know why Tina didn’t show. Thanks
Excellent start. Great story! I’ll bet Tina was pregnant and couldn’t meet up with Bette! Please continue!
Hello, welcome!
A very good start. I agree with Vegas513. I bet Tina was pregnant at the time and could’nt make their meeting. But why didn’t she got Bette’s letters back then?
Bette moved on and is married and now they meet each other 20 years later, while Bette is really injured.
I really hope you will update soon and hope for a happy Tibette ending.
Well of course I have to say welcome my dear as a writer and lover of this spectacular couple. This story was very refreshing from most so that’s always great. Its sad that Tina didn’t keep her end of the promise but I was sure that one of them wasn’t… Now the doctor Tina has laid eyes on Bette Porter so this should be good…again nice job!
A very good and sad start,hopefully the ending is a happy one. Please continue and come back soon!
Hey rayne, very interesting beginning and I would like to read how the story unfolds. Wondering too why Tina didn’t show up as promised but I am glad Bette did move on and no matter what Tina had her chance and blew it so why would Bette leave her wife? As it seems Bette did keep her promise and unsuccessfully tried to keep in touch with Tina. What happened, did Tina’s parents find out and had a hand in sending Bette’s letters back. Did Tina even try to stay in contact with Bette, because even if she were pregnant at the time they were supposed to meet, there was a lot of time in between to get in touch with Bette. So sorry if I don’t see Bette and Tina getting back together, especially as I don’t think that Bette married Victoria just for fun. I know that almost everyone on this site always wants Tina and Bette together no matter – I am not one of those, I also like reading stories where they find someone else and live happily after, especially when the story is about Bette. So I am looking forward to see how the story unfolds especially as it seems that Tina too is married and even has a child. Thank you for posting and hopefully continuing with your story.
Wow! great start already liked this story.
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5 stars.