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    The Payback

    Story written on May 6, 2007 by the_Lez_girl.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=65605
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    Shane’s life has turned upside down–all the way DOWN…

    “Shane—I love you too babe.” Carmen looked around and then back at Shane. “What are you getting at?”

    “Well—this is what I’m getting at.” Shane sighed and got down on one knee. Carmen gasped and looked down at Shane.

    “Oh my God—oh my God.” Carmen’s face was flushed as she watched Shane get down on one knee. She bit her bottom lip as the tears began to fall. Everybody turned their attention to Shane and Carmen.

    “I love you with all my heart and I can’t spend another day without you. You are my opposite, and I can’t leave without you. Carmen de la Pica Morales—will you marry me?” She pulled ring out of her pocket and opened it up.

    “Y—yes! Yes, I’ll marry you!”Shane slipped the ring on Carmen’s finger. Everybody cheered, and Shane stood up. She wrapped her arms around Carmen and kissed her passionately. Carmen cried in Shane’s arms, and Shane kissed her cheek.

    “I love you.” Shane looked up and saw the woman she saw before staring at her and Carmen. She pulled away from Carmen, and everyone went over to congratulate them.

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                The night was coming to an end, and Shane and Carmen were the last to leave from the Planet. Shane pulled Carmen into her arms and danced in the street.

    “I can’t believe that I’m going to marry you.” Carmen smiled as they danced to sounds of LA.

    “I want you to be the one for the rest of my life.” Shane pulled Carmen into a kiss, and she pulled away. Carmen smiled softly and played in Shane’s hair. Shane looked up and saw the woman that was in the Planet in the middle of the street.

    “Hey—let’s go home all right.” Shane grabbed Carmen’s hand and walked towards the Jeep.

    “What’s wrong babe?”

    “There’s somebody following us.” Shane pulled out the keys to the Jeep.

    “What’s the rush?” Shane looked up and saw a tall man dressed in black in front of them.

    “Who are you?” The man smiled as the woman came walking behind them.

    “What do you want?” Carmen clenched onto Shane as she stared at the man in front of them.

    “We want you.” The man went towards Shane and ripped her away from Carmen.

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    2. damn . . . . u jus fucked shane completely ova . . . whelp, im sho u know wat u doin baby . . . and Carmen can’t be like dat . . . I jus can’t see it . . . Whelp, ya got me hook, chicka, like alwayz from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only . . .

    3. oh God… it’s very beautiful, but… Carmen can’t be bad… you know… she’s too cool! Well, she’s still cool… even if she’s a psycho… but, can I ask u something? I know, I’m obsessed… but this is a Sharmen right? Please, PLEASE, tell me it’s a Sharmen. There aren’t so many of them!

    6. Are you still writing this? I hope so! I hate to be left hanging like that. Please continue! I’m a sucker for Shane getting hurt type stories so if anyone can point me in the direction of any it would be much appreciated. Cheers!

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