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Bette will never be able to say how she got to her place on the beach but here she sits watching one of the most vivid sunsets of her life. It had been the joy ride of her life or at least that will forever be her memory of it.
The clouds began to merge into new and different images that stimulated different areas of Bette’s mind. Tears form in Bette’s eyes, the rays of sun spiking through the colors move her into a sacred place of peace. Gazing at the most brilliant colors merging together to form new stunning colors helps her mind move to thoughts of where she is and where she should go.
TINA
Tina it all begins and ends with Tina.
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Shane was in between things at the moment. She was tired of putting in her dues at the salon. Being the wash girl was akin to being their little whipping girl. The other stylists were all jealous of how easy their clients would talk to Shane. She was in between leaving the place for a better opportunity and staying and finishing her dues. Other things in her life were also in between. The girls she shared a place with were all in and breathing down each other’s necks. This made her in between places to lay her head for the moment. That apartment was way too small for all of them at once. It was only when they were on different schedules that the accommodations worked.
So being in between meant there was only one place to be and that was at The Planet. Kit would let her crash there on her couch in the office if need be and the last few nights the need was there. Not wanting to be anywhere else for the moment, Shane sat up at the bar nursing her coffee. There was no where important to be and no one she wanted to see. It wouldn’t be until later tonight that she planned on hooking up with anyone anyway so for now she was free and easy.
This is where Kit found Shane when she burst out of her office. There was a look on Kit’s face that let Shane know immediately that something was wrong with Bette. The mix of fear, determination together with the taught line of her jaw was all Shane needed to see. Kit only got this way for a few and lately mostly one, Bette.
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I don’t if the last part involving Tina is a hallucination or reality. The first part about something or someone blessing us with Grace was so well written and tender. Who amongst us hasn’t experienced an event that we say afterwards,”There but for the Grace of God….”? and some of us aren’t that lucky. PPVS.
Thanks for posting! Hope B&T talk… PPS! :D
Great update. I’m really afraid for Bette at this moment because I don’t think it is Tina that has found Bette. I hope it is Shane but I actually think it is helena maybe but I sure hope it isn’t. Gosh this is scary. I think when Kit finds out that Shane started this she will give her the butt kicking she deserves. Thanks for posting. PPVS
I´m a little spooked here – is Bette really seeing Tina or is it her wishful imagination playing tricks on her – I think I´m gonna ask Seahurst to really yell at you for doing this to us – well to Bette – well to us really – your still faithfull readers!!
I love this story. I hope Shane gets to the beach in time because I think Bette is hallucinating. PPS
Damn…Bette is hallucinating now. This story makes me speechless. I have no words. I just need MORE from you!! Great story!
Thanks proofy lol.I took my deep breaths, now make her get better plz.Can’t wait for the next chapter now. A promess is a promess lol. Bette is getting better and willkick helea butt. You are posting tomorrow, an’t you???pmsl. PPVS
Excellent. Was the last part a hallucination or was Tina really there? Or is it Shane and she’s mistaken her for Tina. I just want them to be happy together and hate to see Bette like this. Thank you for a marvelous story.
Hey JWet, Another fantastic and emotive chapter.Bette got safely to the beach while driving stoned while a simple slip in a bathtub can end a life. The sheer randomness of life is inexplicable and yet the savoir of many a reckless act.Why does Bette’s state niggle with me? Is this the effect of more potent drugs? I just feel she is heading for an OD. I do hope that Tina realizes this and gets Bette the medical attention she so desperately needs. Perhaps Shane will arrive and sense the severity of Bette’s condition.It was amazing that Tina found her lover. Fate is taking a hand and helping reunite these soul-mates. Yes, it is darkest right now but they both feel that something is changing.Bette in particular needs to focus on this and seek the best help. This isn’t something to do on your own. It needs the help and support of family, friends and trained professionals.A detox facility is what Bette needs. This way she will be out of Helena’s line of fire which will give Bette the time and space to rectify some of her past mistakes and begin the journey to sobriety.Shane has some making up to do so can assist Tina with Bette and provide great insight into Bette’s state of mind.Kit is also regretting her behavior and has some fence mending to do.As always J, you have crafted a magnificent melodrama. One, which I can’t wait to read more.Your have rocked my world with your wonderful words.More please whenever you get the chance coz I will be checking and waiting impatiently.Much, much gratitude and thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
I’m so glad that Bette wasn’t in a car accident. I’m not sure if Tina is really there or if Bette is imagining it. whatever the case, I hope she does get sick. That might get some of the drugs out of her system and hopefully she’ll be too weak to go anywhere else on her own and get into more trouble.
Poor Bette. After reading this chapter, my week doesn’t seem so bad. Have a great weekend and post again soon.
I sure hope it is Tina standing there and not Bette’s imagination playing games on her. Helena needs to be stopped, like now. Everyone of the gang needs to be finding out what the witch is doing to Bette and put a stop to it.
Grace….I think we have all experienced it at one time or another in our lives. I think back to the times I drove a car while out of my mind drunk and never hit anyone or anything. I still can’t believe it. Grace….you wrote this wonderfully. Thanks!! Oh, and I am glad it was Tina who caught up with Bette first.
the last part looked to me as if it’s not really happening but it’s just in Bette’s mind…really looking forward to happier times…thanks
Jwet, I love your writing but this story is so dark. Bette so lost and Tina so blind yikes – they are such fools in this story it’s hard to read.
Bette is intoxicated,it´s hard to read.PPS
Your writing is beautiful.. Thanks for sharing, Jwet. Glad that Bette didn’t have any accident or something but she still has a lot to go through. Anyway, I count on Seahurst to keep you from doing more damage :P By the way, I second Dainty, Shane does deserve some butt kicking here. PPVS
I sure hope the cavalry can circle their wagons and get Bette the help she needs before Helena breaks through! Thanks for the post. Looking forward to the next one soon. :)
Thank you for posting. I actually hope it’s not Tina there on the beach, she should go back to Helena and be with her, they seem to be made for each other. Too bad that Bette is infatuated with Tina, because she isn’t loved back. This is sad to read. I wish she would find someone who truly cares.