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    The Promise

    Story written on February 9, 2005 by TheRealJLO.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=52004
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    Chapter – 24 – I’m coming in

    sorry I dont have much time to address indv. Its way past the bedtime…JM, M_Rave and Aceofhearts…youre killing me…Confussed, thats not a girl friend its A Situation all comments inspired this little diddy…goodnight

    Chapter 24

    The gaping hole you left in my chest still hurts every time the wind blows.! ~ JLO~

    Alice sat in her apartment eating popcorn and watching TV. John Cusack jumped around beating up Tim Roth in a music store on the screen.

    ::Knock::Knock::

    She looks at the door, but doesnt bother to get up and answer it. Her facial expression is unchanging as she stuffs a large handful of popcorn in her mouth.

    ::Knock::Knock::

    Shane: Alice…come on I can hear the TV.

    Alice picks up the remote and turns up the TV volume.

    Shane: Al…I had to go, Im sorry…let me in…Im here now so I can make it up to you…

    Shane leans her head against the door. She puts her hand flat against the door up above her head.

    Shane: Al…dont be like this

    The door across the hall opens.

    Neighbor: Could you keep it down!

    Shane: Im sorry..am I inconveniencing you? Is it embarrassing for you to listen to me begging my friend to open the door, while I stand out here like a jackass?

    Alice lowered the TV and smiled when she heard the contempt in Shanes voice. She went to the kitchen and popped another bag of popcorn in the microwave.

    Shane: Cause you know, its not bad enough that Im standing in the hall at ten oclock at night banging on a door…see Ive got to have some old bitty nagging me about knocking on the very door I want to open.

    Shane pulled her pocket knife out and shimmied it in the space between the door and the frame. She felt the handle loosen and smile. She went to push the door open but the deadbolt was on.

    Shane: Damn! She never uses the deadbolt…she must really be pissed.

    Alice smiled at the loud thump she heard of the door slamming against the dead bolt. She just shook her head and watched the microwave.

    Shane: Emergency Key!!!! (Shane snapped her fingers)

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    3. Hmm… What to make of the phone call? I can’t imagine Bette and Shane are actually in love with each other, but their psychic connection could mean something deeper they both have been suppressing, subconsciously or consciously. It will be interesting to see what comes of their meeting in the morning and how Alice will minconstrue the convo. The chapter was indeed funny, and I enjoyed every minute of it, especially how Shane was miserable in her attempts to maintain a platonic evening with Alice.

    5. A “situation”! haha u crack me up, and this chapter was da bomb *can an indian girl form the UK, get away with sayin that?*.
      Anywho, loving the story, but let em be happy for a while, no more secrets they are so fucking cute together!!

    6. WOW another great chapter from you… “no sex in the champaign room” LMAO.. you really have these two perfect.. great job.. hope you have a great day!

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