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    The Promise

    Story written on February 7, 2005 by TheRealJLO.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=51982
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    Chapter 23 – A woman who takes things from a man is a girlfriend, but a man who takes things from a woman is a gigalo.

    Janet ” perfection aye? Hmmm youre spoiling a girl..and as for the bottle of Rum NOOOOO! I am adding vanilla rum to my list of unmentionables when it comes to liq. Yeah I was thinking David was a sell-out and then you wrote it in your story great minds…oui? Oh and its gonna def take a truck load of flowers, but just wait and see…its gonna be big but I will have to find a way to write it so the audience doesnt fall asleep with the description

    m_rave- yes mission impossible will probably end up being funny, since every time Im serious you guys are on the floor in a puddle. Oh and By the way, as for our little game…I found myself singing up on the roof at work…you better right that into a scene before I am forced to !

    Lwordjunkie- Bette will get in the right direction….eventually..ps Ill try to send a lil brown sugar your way ~wink~ and the second job had to go…I loved the people but the boss man was a ***** and it wasnt worth the money to get spoken to like a little kid.

    nix- thanks luv…but I dont know what show you are asking about? Please xplain or e-mail

    Cfone- I think Shane is just happy to have something…and shes happy to see how far cheri is willing to go after she was willing to open her heart

    seven- Bette has fucked Tina up too much…theres so much there for her to fix

    bvhall- thanks for all the positive feedback..I guess I will be writing after the season starts

    maybeyes- yeah Bette is kinda ***** herself with the whole Shane thing…They have both become dependant on each other and its gonna piss people off..and as for it only being friendship…~rubs hands together with an evil grin~ Ill start typing

    Confussed- my week was Eh! I drank way to much in like 2 hours and got sick and brought home.. And then I woke up on my bedroom floor and had to walk a mile to go get my car at my friends house…..hey do you have a girlfriend? I was confused about one of your comments.

    InShane- glad you like dash, I was nervous about introducing anew character…I havent liked a lot of the ones Ive read on the site…but you know who I do love…and Im hoping she shows up soon!

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    1. You’re damn right I stopped…I’m falling asleep while typing I’ve been up sinve 430 and i went to bed at 1…a certain someone left dirty thoughts in my head that kept me up all night….~winks to the culprit~ alright I have to drive up to my BF’s wrestling match tomorrow with his whole fam arg! see you in a few

    2. Awe… I can hear Alice’s little heart breaking.. Shane needs to come clean.. as for you my dear.. I am glad you are doing better without that other job..you deserve to be treated with respect…no matter what job you have!!! Good for you.. keep up the great work with this story I am sooo hooked.. and waiting for more.

    3. Hey! well being sick.. drinking too much… then walking home; sounds very familiar lol!
      As for the G/Friend, like everything else it is loong and complicated, but the simplest way to explain wots happening is “kind of”… i know i know vauge, but wot can u do, sometimes u just dont know…
      EXCELLENT chapter! each one just gets better than the last, thanks for sharing ur amazing talent xx

    4. Bette had better spend more time with Tina,she is feeling so alone right now. Shane needs to Just tell Alice that she loves her, Dash is cute. Shane needs to come clean to Al about Cherie. Thanks so much. Yes S2 is to short to not have good writer write. we all love your stories,so dont quit. just keep on.

    5. ahhh dont leave me hanging i want more lol, great chapter. you’ve introduced Dash very well so no reason to be nervous ;) hope you write soon and i really need to write soon to. 5*stars for u!

    6. Well, I hate ending like that. Damw cliffhanger. And I’m going to kick Shane ass if she don’t come clean to Alice fast. I know she love her but Alice is not sure of Shane feeling at all. Do something girl. Now I waiting for my next fix. Soon please.

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