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The Promise
Bette: I better start at the beginning.
She opened the typing program she needed and began what would be a long grueling process, that would only make things worse for the time being.
1. Im sorry I didnt tell you the moment I saw you that I loved you and that it would be forever, because right then I knew.
2. Im sorry that the second time we met, I kissed you, because that was the first time I took control of our relationship.
Bette continued typing through the night. Before she knew it she could hear someone talking to her. She tried to pull herself from the screen, but was in the middle of an important part of her project.
675. Im sorry that I didnt take us where you wanted to go for our fourth anniversary…I wanted to show off the money I got from my new job, more then show you how much I love you.
Bette could here Tina asking her what she was doing, and tried to answer without giving up too much information. She looked up to see Tina had left the room. She could hear the water running in the bathroom, but went back to work.
676. Im sorry that I went to see my dad when he was in town instead of accompanying you to the premiere of your first big film…. family comes first and YOU are my family.
Bette looked around to see the lights were off and Tina was fast asleep. She shrugged her shoulders and went back to typing up her list of wrong doings. Bettes eyes were struggling with the marathon typing session and steady stream of tears that flowed form her eyes. She knew she had to get everything into the open before it was just set aside and buried with all her other skeletons in the closet.
934. Im sorry that I let Alice knowing about the baby first cause me to lash out at you…it was my own insecurities that were starting to get to me about the pregnancy.
Bette wiped the tears from her eyes and looked up at the clock. Two fifty in the morning and she was still going at it. She needed to take a break from all the self loathing she had been doing her entire day. She reached in her pocket for her mobile phone and dialed number ~69~ on her speed dial.
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(37 votes, average: 4.22 out of 5)
Sorry about the whole show thing, I’m kinda silly and got confused! he he Just ignore me…. anyway, I love your story and can’t wait to see the action plan for Saturday and the reactions! Thanx for a great story and please update again soon!?
*69 hmmm something going on here “wink” anyway.. great post again.. the plot thickens.. oh can’t wait till satruday.. comes.. hurry already.. I can’t wait anymore.. ok I will wait if I have to.. post soon have a great one!
That is alot , I really couldnt begain to tell how many way i love. I just tell them everyday I love you. thanks
Great chapter, J! I’m still loving the story and can’t wait to read the next one. I’m wondering if Alice is gonna blow because of only hearing Shane’s side of the phone convo. Keep on writing!
hey there! everyone needs to stop keepin secrets from each other, but Tina needs to give Bette more credit, she fucked up once and she knows it.. she aint gonna do it again!! Splendid Chapter love!
wow very interesting! and 934 feelings? whoa. Can’t wait for an update :)
Bette is just so in her “Mission Impossible”… She could speak a little with Tina. If Tina was like Bette and do what Bette do (almost with another girl, even she’s a good friend) and speak like that to the phone, what Bette could think ? like Tina maybe ?
I wait with impatience next chapter. This is a very good story and you write it very well.
Oh and why number *69* for Shane ? It’s a little confused here … Or funny ?
the proverbial poo is about to hit the fan! i can’t wait!!!!
That was great. I can’t wait to read about what Tina’s reaction will be. 934+ things to be sorry for is a lot.
WOW!! 934 different feelings is a lot of feelings! Great update!!
Oh i feel a drama coming on!!! post soon and put me and T out of our misery its 5:45pm in London.
Ok this is good and awesome, can’t wait to see on saturday. Post soon, thank you!