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cant reply to all the responses this time…sorry ladies but I always read them all! Thanks for the input. Wasnt sure if you guys would get it in the end, or think I was a total pervert. Well I hope you thought I was a pervert, but I was hoping Jesus would clear it up in the end. Anyway heres the next chapter.
Chapter 46
Shane laid back in bed starring at the ceiling. It was ten oclock on a Tuesday night and she was laying in bed with nothing to do. Her right casted arm was flayed to the side and hanging over the edge of the bed, while her good arm lay on her topless chest. Her fingertips stroked at the small light brown, peach fuzz hairs on her pale skin. She inhaled deeply and bit her lip as she smelled the soft scent of Alice in the air. She had taken off her shirt and buried it in the bottom of the closet when she put it on to go to bed, only to remember Alice was the last to wear it. Now the smell was haunting and teasing her.
Shane heard the house phone ring in the distance. No one ever called the house line so she started to push it out of her mind. She jumped to attention when she remembered she gave Dash her mobile phone Sunday night before she had Bette drop her off at home. Normally, Shanes phone was surgically attached to her head, but lately she enjoyed being out of communication with the world. So, she gave the phone to Dash so she could call her and vice versa. Shane rolled over and rose on her good ankle. She limped over to the door and as she was about to open the door it flung open ant slammed into her.
Shane: Ouch….
Jenny: Sorry Shane…its Dash she doesnt sound too good.
Shane tried to recover from having the ***** both scared and knocked out of her. She looked up at Jenny who wore a baby – tee and boi shorts. Shane cringed when she saw the hideous glasses perched on Jennys nose.
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Another great chapter… Thanks
ooohhh so happy to see you posted…. can’t wait to see what happens next with shane and alice…. this was amazing as always, I really love your story and can’t seen to get enough!! ;)
What a great story before going to bed. love it as always!
I glad that Alice and Bette are through Bashing each other for a while. Also glad that Bette didnt have my ear, It was funny that Bette said that she expected Dash to be the adult. They all can get in a mess.. Thanks
yes been eagerly waiting for you to post.
Great chapter as always!!!! I’m glad Alice Is finally starting to see thelight and the consequences of her actions. Shane needs to have her but kicked for cutting off her cast and I bet Van will do it. She can’t be that worried about playing the piano again. Thanks for posting.
It is good that Alice is beginning to understand the relationship that Bette and Shane has going on and maybe she can comprehend more about what is going on between the two.
GREAT CHAPTER , PLEASE POST SOON
Great chapter. Glad to see you back, this chapter is good, a little funny between Bette and Alice and at time is have emotion, sad, hurt, and happy. Alice and Shane need a talk and let see what happen next. Post soon, thank you!
So GREAT, So GOOD, So FUNNY. I can’t wait for my next fix.
LMFAO>>>>>>> man woman this chap was sooo awesome..I am very lucky to be part of this joruney..that you have give us…WOW..and “BLACK DON’T CRACK..LMAO” haven’t heard that in a while…your just too much..lol
take care and hope you have time to post again soon..take care girlie..