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The Promise
Shane: You stopped when you broke the rulesyou stopped when you left me hangingand you stopped when you drove off into the sunset without me.
Alice: Me?!?! I found YOU with your pants literally around your ankles, after you hooked up with that.
Shane: Dont you dare go thereyou dont get to go there, because you werent supposed to be there.two rules Alice, two ***** things I asked for, and you couldnt even make it three days.I said no investigating me and my past, and no prying into my life.I told you I would explain things in my own time, when they needed to be
Alice: Im sorry ShaneI thought you were making a fool of mewhat would you have done in my
Shane: I would have believed you I would have stood up for you no matter what, and even if I didnt believe you, I would have been there for youand I never, NEVER would have left you hanging.you could have cleared it all up, but you were too ***** ashamed of being with me to admit we werewhatever we were.
Alice: Shane, NO, thats not why
Shane: I dont care why!
Alice: Shane, I thought
Shane: And I dont care what you thought eitherits done and over with, you made your choicesand you know whatyou could have fixed it.you could have salvaged it, but you broke the most important rule I had
Alice looked at Shane with a confused expression.
Shane: You didnt ***** call.and I waited Ive waited every ***** night since, and not once did you call to apologize, or see how I was doing..I dont know if Ill ever be able to ***** play again because of you
Shane stopped and took a deep breath. She squeezed the bridge of her nose and took a deep breath as the room began to shake around her.
Alice: Play? What are you talking about?
Shane: Nothing.
Alice: Shane .tell me.
Shane: One question Alice, and I want the truth.
Alice: Okay.
Shane: When you drove off the other night.did you see me fall?
Alice bit her lip as tears fell from her eyes. She looked away from Shane and nodded her head. Shane leaned in close and pressed her lips to Alices ear.
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(19 votes, average: 4.37 out of 5)
as good as always sorry about your computer troubles
Poor Al and Shane. I really like Dash.
Yes another great one. As soon as your PC is fixed your gonna need to fix me with an update ~wink~
I’m glad you had the chance to post, It brighten up my day. I’m happy you brought back the songs, gives me a chance to hear new music. Great Job.
WONDERFUL AS USUSL
Good chapter. I hope Alice and Shane will work thing out and can’t wait to see how they gonna do that. Post soon, thanks!
Amazing as always and such a nice treat before my ballet exam ;)Sorry for the computer trouble and hope it gets sorted soon…. can’t wait till the next chapter but will endeavour to be patient as it’s worth the wait =0)
Woohoo!!! Things are steaming up… Gimme more!
so hooked, you know I love it. please don’t ever stop this story!
Sorry for your computer but I love so much this story, I’ll wait with patience you post next chapter.
I can’t help thinking Shane is very hard with Alice. I’m not sure Shane has this faith she wants Alice has… I hope Alice ‘ll fix this situation but if Shane doesn’t want, what can she do ?