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The Promise
Hello ladies, here I am again. InShane, Nix, Acetisk tiskIm so disappointed.***** even JadedRogue is taking a hiatus.where is everyone? How did I become the lone writer? Anywayhere you go. See you on the flip side.Ps- Janetwith is J5 coming out? Ill be patient, just wondering when I should take off from work is all.hahahha Okay on this episode of ***** Of Our Livestheres a song I wrote in.its not by me, its by Prince, but I say that Alice wrote it. Its really rare and thats the whole song, its acoustic and its called I miss you if anyone wants it later and cant find it they can im me at IVENTINKLE and Ill get you a copyits a great song
Chapter 53
Dash awoke to an annoying ringing sound, and stretched out her long lean body. She grimaced and recoiled when she felt the pains in her ribcage. Shed fallen asleep curled up in a ball again, but at least this time she didnt wake up oh her chest like she did the first night. She could hear music blaring from the other side of the house, but decided to answer the ringing of Shanes fancy cell phone on the coffee table before she left to investigate.
Dash: What?
Dashs deep throaty voice croaked over the phone.
Alice: Before you say anythingyoure right I broke the rules of our arrangementbut most importantly, I wasnt a good friend to you.
Dash: Hey this isnt
Alice: I know its not a good timeits never a good time with you lately, but you know what Shane, its time for both of us to grow up and face the ***** factsI love you and I want to be with you.I also know youre my best friend and my real sister and
Dash: Al waitIm not
Alice: I dont care if you say youre not in love with me ShaneI dont careI know youre afraid of being hurt, I am too.I dont want to hurt youI dont want anything from youI just want you
There was a long pause on the phone as an audible sigh came from Alice.
Dash: Can I talk now?
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(21 votes, average: 4.52 out of 5)
great update – im glad you’re still writing!! Even if the others are mia! Go Shane – get your girl back!
Yet another amazing update which took away the pain of my blisters enough for me to do my *happy dance* ;)My little break from my story should be over soon if you’re still interested…. and thanx again for the update =0)
5* for you. A great chapter. What does Shane want to do ?
Shane: It’s over…She doesn’t deserve me. Wow and then the song… just wow. Get on with the rest girl.
this is a great story I can’t wait for your next post please post it soon
GREAT CHAPTER PLEASE POST SOON
You got me on a cliffhanger. Where the hell Shane is going. it’s not looking to be Alice place. Ok I need to calm down. I’m trusting you with that. Ok hon, I really need a fix soon. ~wink~
Wow!!! This chapter was incredable. The story just flows Beautifly. I’m glad Alice is making an effort to get Shane back. I don’t know What Shane is up to but I know You will make it work in the end. I’m sorry I didn’t Comment on the last chapter I read it at 3 o’clock in the morning And thought I would have time today to comment before You posted again. Thank you for all the extra effort You have made to post this wonderful story it made my week .
God i whish i had dated a Dash in highschool, but i’ll just stick with this on chick, keep on writting : P
Good chapter. Poor Alice and now let see what Shane is up to and hope she going to talk to Alice and be together. Post soon, thank you!