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The Promise
She turned to leave and collided with a woman who was in a major hurry. She managed to prevent a serious party foul, by saving the drinks on the tray with moves that would have given Spiderman a run for his money. She winced from the shooting pains that coursed through her chest. Dash looked up to see Alice covering her mouth with a look of fear.
Alice: Oh my GOD…Im sorryIIdid I.is there anything on you?…here, Ill buy you another
Dash: Im fineI saved it. dontworry.
Alice: Are you okay?…Should I go get Bette and Tina?
Dash hunched over holding the tray.
Dash: Im fine.you justkinda knocked the wind out of me.
Alice: You sure?…cause you look really pale.
Dash shook her head and stood up.
Dash: Dont sweat it Alice.
The two stood in an awkward silence as they both stared at their feet and switched their body weight side to side.
Alice: I miss her so much.
Dash: Why dont you tell her that?
Alice threw her hands up in the air and put her hands on her hips ready for a verbal fight. She backed down; when she saw Dash wasnt making a move to attack she was taken off guard.
Alice:I triedI just ***** triedI told her and I made a move, and she pulled away.and then blamed everything on me and stormed off.
Dash: Doesnt matter who makes the first move if its still the wrong move.
Alice: You know what, forget ityoure on her ***** side anyway.I dont know why I wasted my time.
Alice pushed past Dash to storm off, but she quickly grabbed her arm while balancing her tray in the other. Dash pressed her body against Alices back and spoke in her ear so that only she could hear.
Dash: Im not saying you being with her is wrong.but think about what you did.you tried to fix it with *****.
Alice turned back to Dash.
Alice: Thats what she wants.she fixes our arguments with sexshe fixes everything with.
Dash: Noshe tries to show you how she FEELS with *****.
Alice: So when I do it Im wrong? That doesnt make
Dash: Al shut up and listen for once.
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(19 votes, average: 4.37 out of 5)
as good as always sorry about your computer troubles
Poor Al and Shane. I really like Dash.
Yes another great one. As soon as your PC is fixed your gonna need to fix me with an update ~wink~
I’m glad you had the chance to post, It brighten up my day. I’m happy you brought back the songs, gives me a chance to hear new music. Great Job.
WONDERFUL AS USUSL
Good chapter. I hope Alice and Shane will work thing out and can’t wait to see how they gonna do that. Post soon, thanks!
Amazing as always and such a nice treat before my ballet exam ;)Sorry for the computer trouble and hope it gets sorted soon…. can’t wait till the next chapter but will endeavour to be patient as it’s worth the wait =0)
Woohoo!!! Things are steaming up… Gimme more!
so hooked, you know I love it. please don’t ever stop this story!
Sorry for your computer but I love so much this story, I’ll wait with patience you post next chapter.
I can’t help thinking Shane is very hard with Alice. I’m not sure Shane has this faith she wants Alice has… I hope Alice ‘ll fix this situation but if Shane doesn’t want, what can she do ?