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The Proposal – Part 2
Story written on March 21, 2005 by BluJewel.
An unexpected relationship at the start
But with time you got into my heart
Running from a past that led us in each others direction
Two altered paths meeting at the same intersection
Over stormy clouds; to cool, calm seas
Love still remained between you and me
A proposal is a stealthy admittance of ones feelings
The most naked you can be, your emotions so revealing
But no rings, bells, or pretty things
Will enhance the happiness, being with you brings
So instead of saying Ill be your wife
Id rather say Id be your star for life
Cause when titles fade and lose their meaning
A star will live on forever and keep on beaming
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downlow95 says
Simply perfect and beautiful. Congratulations!
s says
Just beautiful. Sniff,sniff!!
TheRealJLO says
Ha! and they say I’m the romantic…well everyone is offering up their services, so…I can video the wedding and my sis is a caterer…I’m in jerz though I don’t know where you are…don’t hesitate to ask luv…Now there is an armour that needs refinishing…night
Katey471 says
Bravo! Adorable! Does anyone have a tissue? I’m all misty now. ; )
lenab41 says
Let’s see!, finding the words to describe this rebuttal is quite a task;however,I’ll give it a try. I couldn’t have written a better rebuttal. SWEET,LOVING,KIND AND OH SO MUCH LOVE PUT IN THESE WORDS. yes, I’ll be your star for life.. AWESOME,JUST AWESOME….10 stars
Amazed says
very melancholy, but beautiful indeed!
windrider says
Shall I book the caterers? Congratulations! And perpetual happiness shine upon you both.
msKhaos says
beautiful propsal beautiful rebuttle all is good in the world of Rayne & Blu woo hoo. CONGRATS and a star is such an awesome thing to be.
leogrrl2 says
beautiful. congrats.
gina says
AWWWW! That was sweet. My friend is a DJ if you want I can ask him to DJ for you:)