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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 20
Tina couldnt speak. Her lips were quivering as her body trembled beneath her lovers arms. She rested with her head on Bettes chest, her lungs struggling to suck in air, her heart struggling to slow down its rapid beat.
Bette gently stroked Tinas hair as she held her close. I love you so much, T. Welcome to paradise, baby., she said, before kissing her girlfriends forehead.
After a few moments of comfortable silence passed, Tina raised her head up slightly and looked into Bettes eyes. I love you, too. Was that my official welcome?, she whispered.
Bette smiled. Yes it was. Was it to your liking?
Tina put her head back down and snuggled into her lovers chest. It was.indescribable. You might have to carry me inside. I dont know if I can walk.
Dont worry. Ill take care of you, T.
You promise?, asked Tina.
I promise.
Tina sighed. This really is paradise.
I know.
They were quiet for a moment.
T?, asked Bette.
Yeah?
Its like 8 oclock. You want to go and get some dinner?, asked Bette.
I had my sights set on a beautiful caramel feast., said Tina.
Dont worry, T. This buffet is always open. Lets eat dinner and see what we can of the city. Is that okay with you?
Yeah. I just need a quick shower., said Tina.
Bettes eyes lit up. T.youre taking a shower? Were finally in Cancun. You know what you promised me?
Tina lightly chuckled. I know. But well have to wait until I get my sea legs back.
Maybe I should schedule an appointment so you can stop giving me excuses., said Bette, her smile falling.
Trust me, babe. It will happen. And you will find it well worth the wait., said Tina.
Really?, asked Bette, her smile returning.
I promise., said Tina.
I cant wait., said Bette, settling back down and kissing Tinas forehead once more.
The young lovers rested a few moments more, taking in the serenity of this beautiful resort, enjoying the feel of being in each others arms. When Tina felt she could walk, Bette took her lover by the hand and gently guided her back into their room.
They had finally made it to paradise and it was already smiling down on them, promising an enchanted and charming respite.
TBC (To Be Continued)
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(65 votes, average: 4.35 out of 5)
Still loving this story. Thank you so much.
nice welcome for Tina, can’t wait for the shower scene in the future
I love this storyline! I so look forward to your stories…keep up the good work!
Keep it coming, keep it coming!!
Damn, that was hot! I think I’m going to enjoy the girls in Cancun.
Wonderful as always. You never let me down. Love this story.
Hmmm…I feel like Bette! Anticipating the much wanted “shower”…*grr*
this story is Amazing!!!
I’ve been following this story since the very beginning & I am still lovin’ it. Great job! Looking forward to the next chapter & the shower :)
Cancun sounds great! I’m glad the girls are finally gong to get “their” week of fun in the sun…woo-hoo! Thanks for another fantastic update!
Okay, I should’ve waited until later to read this. Very hot and sexy. When is the shower, I can’t wait to see just how good Tina makes it for Bette. Post soon, PLEASE!!!
Another great chapter! You made my heart leap, jump, skip and sing for joy!
What a welcome….Can’t wait for the rest of the trip..Please continue..Post soon
Oh my, I’m so way behind on my readings=(…No worries, I’ll catch up in no time…BEAUTIFUL chapter MTS!! Hot as always…the girls can finally relax=)
Wow, I definitely need a cold shower. If this was just welcome to paradise, I can’t wait to see what lies ahead!
I don’t think I’ve ever wanted two characters to take a shower more than I do right now. More!
You are the best. Love all your work. Great Chapter. Cant wait for the next to come out.
THAT WAS AWESOME..LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE POST SOON
Keep Going, Keep Going!!
They are blessed in the love dept huh !! They deserve it ! Dont we all ! Thank you – as always a brilliant chapter, beautifully written.
Man! I’m heading out of town in a few minutes but I just HAD to tell you that it’s so good to have B&T in paradise! I’m looking forward to getting back so I can hopefully get caught up on their week of looooove!
If you’re granting wishes, I’m wishing I am Bette in this story. Please?
I get this strange feeling whenever I read your words. It’s like my stomach does flick flacks and my head disappears into some pink cloud. Some days I deliberately stay away from the site, just to spare myself the disappointment of not finding a posting from you, just so I can be all the more exited when I log on another day and find another chapter. I’m a fool and I’m rambling. Now you have a small clue of your impact on a humnble reader.
love this stttooorrryyyyy…..
amazing once again!! so hot and delicious.. i need to find someone like bette and get to cancun
Damn, they certainly are in paradise! Haha, can’t wait for the shower! This story is great, please post again soon!
one word- ‘perfection’.
My gosh, you’re amazing! I am beginnig to get seriously addicted to your story. This chapter was paradaise, post soon!
That was so Beautiful Awesome HOT.
Damn this is amazing and can’t wait to see the shower time. Post soon, thanks!
i seriously need to get better with my praise, i feel like a broken record telling you how much i love this story. this was a hot chapter, tina’s such a tease! i’m sure she’ll make it worth bette’s while. happy that they’re not facing problems here!
just so perfect you are one of the very best.
Where do I sign up to go back to school and find this kind of joy????
Please continue NOW!!!!!