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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 22
Well, I love you Tina. I never want you to feel uncomfortable with me. If you do, please let me know., said Bette, opening her eyes and placing a soft kiss on her lovers forehead.
I will, Bette. I will., said Tina, smiling to herself at the love in Bettes tender words.
After cuddling for a few more minutes, the girls got dressed and made their way to the Aquaworld Marina. It was a beautiful day and as they cruised along crystal blue waters, the lovers held hands and smiled brightly at each other. When they docked at Isla Mujeres, they ate a light breakfast before running off to go snorkeling. The young women giggled with each other, enjoying each other their drama-free paradise. They approached their snorkeling adventure with childlike wonder and amusement. Together, they marveled at the colorful fish swimming around them as they floated weightlessly in the cerulean waters.
When their hour of snorkeling time was up, the lovers made their way to the white sandy shore and rented a cabana for the day, lounging lazily on beach chairs. On this day, they werent Abandoned Bette with a Domineering Father and Troubled Tina with a Homophobic and Hateful Family. The beautiful blonde and the gorgeous brunette were young, in love, and carefree.
Six hours later, their day on the beautiful Isla Mujeres came to an end and the girlfriends boarded the cruise ship and headed back to Cancun. After eating a light dinner in the Gran Melias restaurant, the tanned young lovers walked back to their room, hand-in-hand.
Bette dropped off her things and fell across their freshly made, king-sized bed. Spending a day in the sun had really drained her. She rested a dainty hand on her bronzed forehead and slowly closed her eyes. Shed drifted off to sleep when she felt Tina gently tap her.
Dark brown eyes opened to meet soft brown orbs. Bette, you fell asleep. Come with me., said Tina.
T?, asked Bette, her eyes and mind still foggy.
Tina held out her hand. Yeah. Come with me, babe.
Bette took a deep breath, trying to get her bearings as she took her lovers hand. Quietly, she followed Tina into the bathroom and smiled at what she saw. Her girlfriend had managed to bring and light 4 votive candles. They were spaced out on the countertop, their flames dancing on the wall, illuminating the darkened room. The bronzed beauty gazed at the suds floating leisurely on the surface of the garden tub and turned to face her girlfriend.
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(111 votes, average: 3.64 out of 5)
Just got home and tadah – a surprise awaits me! Am I first??? Okay…off to read :)
These girls are so sweet. I’m enjoying the story, so please continue.
You are the BEST!!!! Love the shower sceen. It was so worth waiting for.
Exquisite Bette and Tina lovin! Wonderful chapter!
Lordy that was hot. Nice.
I’m still recovering from the season finale of CSI. Not really coherent yet. I’ll read it again when I am, promise!
A-mazing. I love your chapters, no matter what you say about them.
You’re gonna be in my oscar acceptance speach when i get famous, just wait and see.Haha.
…just regaining consciousness to say: you’re an amazing storyteller, MTS! What can I say that I haven’t said? Hmmm…oh, your lab coat is ready to be picked up from the cleaners :)
Was just breezing through and YAY! You posted! Love it! Love it! Love it! I’m enjoying this ‘downtime’ after all the emotional stress of the last weeks. Take your time before ending this spring break.
Thank God! I was beginning to have withdraws, but it was well worth the wait. Love this story!!!
Thank God you’re back!! Please don’t leave us like that again…I go through SERIOUS withdrawls when you do!!!
LOVE this story. It’s my favorite I swear. Don’t stay gone too long, I miss you. Love this.
THUMBS UP!!!
This was well worth the wait!!! I can’t wait for Bette to rest up and pay Tina back, so please continue.
your story is great post soon
GREAT SHOWER SCENE..LOVE YOUR STORY PLEASE POST SOON
If you get any better at this I don’t think we will be able to handle it. Excellent as always.
i have to stop reading your stories at work… i loved it…esp the shower and abth…mmmmmmm… keep them cuming
What a hot shower love scene, and they are so cute together. Glad they have fun. Post soon, thanks! Good chapter!
THANK GOODNESS YOU’RE BACK! (although i did like your take on the season finale) such a good chapter, :) i bet bette’s happy she got her shower time ;) i’m excited for the next chapter! you’re a very talented, descriptive writer MTS!
ahhh.. this is just what I needed tonight ;) That kind of love and passion is amazing and wonderful. Hurry back!
Aw, thank you so much MTS for this wonderful chapter! It was a beautiful ending to the KICK ARSE day that I had…=P…please update soon!
your chapter in the morning… my fav start of a day :-)
i am not much of a Bette/Tina fan… but this is one of the stories that really got me all hooked… I love this… Thank you.
I’ve read some of the others but you have that special quality that keeps us wanting more.
That was so beautiful and they need this time thanks
You know what? I would only say “awwwwwwwwwww so sweet”. ;)
just caught upwith you r last couple mts. i love everyword you write!1