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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 22
For not giving up on us., said Bette.
I couldnt give up on us, babe. You are so much a part of me, it would be like giving up on myself., said Tina.
Music to my ears, T. That is music to my ears., said Bette, leaning in to place a quick kiss on her lovers lips.
Mmmmmm. Let me finish, Bette. Then we can go.relax., Tina whispered, a sly smile easing across her face.
Okay. Please continue., Bette whispered in return.
Tina slid her soapy washcloth down Bettes toned arms, before turning her attention to her girlfriends elegant neck, her amber eyes never breaking contact with her lovers dark brown pools. She moved down to Bettes *****, tenderly washing each one, circling the erect nipples, teasing them with her fingertips.
Play nice, T, came Bettes sultry whisper.
Im not playing, Bette. Just bear with me a little while longer., Tina replied, rolling her lovers right nipple between her fingers.
At long last, Tina looked into Bettes eyes and said, Babe, Im gonna have to go a little lower. You okay?
Bette sighed deeply, her eyes at half-mast, T..please hurry. I need you, baby.
Ill hurry., Tina whispered.
Ahhhhhhhhhhh, Bette moaned, as she felt Tinas washcloth slide against the smooth folds of her swollen center. The gentle touch sent tiny jolts of pleasure out in waves over her body and the beautiful brunette leaned her head into Tinas shoulder, her hands tightly gripping the blondes arms.
What are you doing? Are you trying to kill me?, hissed Bette.
Tina laughed lightly. No, babe. I just want to make sure you dont have any sand down here.
Youre just torturing me.
Im not. I just wanted to take care of you., said Tina.
Okay. Well, let me take care of you, then., said Bette, raising her head up to meet Tinas eyes.
Oh?, asked Tina, her eyebrows arched expectantly.
Bette smiled and took the washcloth from her lovers hand. After re-soaping, she started to reenact Tinas methodical cleansing process, gently washing every part of her lovers body.
Tinas eyes were closed as she whispered, I like this, Bette.
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(111 votes, average: 3.64 out of 5)
Just got home and tadah – a surprise awaits me! Am I first??? Okay…off to read :)
These girls are so sweet. I’m enjoying the story, so please continue.
You are the BEST!!!! Love the shower sceen. It was so worth waiting for.
Exquisite Bette and Tina lovin! Wonderful chapter!
Lordy that was hot. Nice.
I’m still recovering from the season finale of CSI. Not really coherent yet. I’ll read it again when I am, promise!
A-mazing. I love your chapters, no matter what you say about them.
You’re gonna be in my oscar acceptance speach when i get famous, just wait and see.Haha.
…just regaining consciousness to say: you’re an amazing storyteller, MTS! What can I say that I haven’t said? Hmmm…oh, your lab coat is ready to be picked up from the cleaners :)
Was just breezing through and YAY! You posted! Love it! Love it! Love it! I’m enjoying this ‘downtime’ after all the emotional stress of the last weeks. Take your time before ending this spring break.
Thank God! I was beginning to have withdraws, but it was well worth the wait. Love this story!!!
Thank God you’re back!! Please don’t leave us like that again…I go through SERIOUS withdrawls when you do!!!
LOVE this story. It’s my favorite I swear. Don’t stay gone too long, I miss you. Love this.
THUMBS UP!!!
This was well worth the wait!!! I can’t wait for Bette to rest up and pay Tina back, so please continue.
your story is great post soon
GREAT SHOWER SCENE..LOVE YOUR STORY PLEASE POST SOON
If you get any better at this I don’t think we will be able to handle it. Excellent as always.
i have to stop reading your stories at work… i loved it…esp the shower and abth…mmmmmmm… keep them cuming
What a hot shower love scene, and they are so cute together. Glad they have fun. Post soon, thanks! Good chapter!
THANK GOODNESS YOU’RE BACK! (although i did like your take on the season finale) such a good chapter, :) i bet bette’s happy she got her shower time ;) i’m excited for the next chapter! you’re a very talented, descriptive writer MTS!
ahhh.. this is just what I needed tonight ;) That kind of love and passion is amazing and wonderful. Hurry back!
Aw, thank you so much MTS for this wonderful chapter! It was a beautiful ending to the KICK ARSE day that I had…=P…please update soon!
your chapter in the morning… my fav start of a day :-)
i am not much of a Bette/Tina fan… but this is one of the stories that really got me all hooked… I love this… Thank you.
I’ve read some of the others but you have that special quality that keeps us wanting more.
That was so beautiful and they need this time thanks
You know what? I would only say “awwwwwwwwwww so sweet”. ;)
just caught upwith you r last couple mts. i love everyword you write!1