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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 23
Oh My God, she uttered, as the shock surrounding her emotions began to unthaw and the reality of her grandfathers impending demise settled in around her.
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Tina emerged on the surface of the water, pulling her wet blonde locks from her face, and instinctively scanned the poolside for her girlfriend. Her soft amber orbs focused in on Bettes drooping head and defeated posture. Squinting against the sun, Tina watched her caramel skinned lovers lips form the words Oh My God, and a chill slid down the blondes spine.
Somethings wrong. Something must be wrong., thought Tina, giving her girlfriend one last look before swimming to the edge of the pool and pulling herself out.
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By the time she reached Bette, the bronzed young woman was finished with her phone call. Her dark curls had fallen loosely over her face, her head slightly bent, her body shaking with soft sobs. Tina sat down, straddling the lounge chair, facing her girlfriend.
Baby, whats wrong?, asked Tina, pulling Bettes dark curls away from her face.
The sun-kissed beauty removed her girlfriends dark glasses. She needed to see Bettes eyes. Upon seeing those dark brown pools filled with sorrow and standing with unshed tears, Tina pulled her soul mate into her arms and gently stroked her hair.
Tina was starting to get really worried. What is it now? We were just getting a chance to relax and unwind. Why is she so upset?, she wondered.
Bette pulled back slightly and her sad brown eyes met her girlfriends comforting amber orbs. Its my grandfather, T. Hes dying. He had a stroke. They have him on life support right now. Theyre trying to wait until I get there to take him off.
As the dark-haired beauty spoke, her lover wiped away heavy, heartfelt tears from soft caramel skin. Im so sorry, babe.
Daddys trying to get a flight out for me to get home. And one for you to get to San Francisco., Bette whispered.
Tina frowned slightly and slowly shook her head. Im not leaving your side, babe. I want to go where you go.
A glimmer of happiness floated across Bettes watery brown pools and a faint smile graced her sensual lips. You want to go home with me?, she asked.
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(56 votes, average: 4.18 out of 5)
Good story.. I’m thinking one of the families is about to find out..
GREAT CHAPTER…poor Bette it’s going to be tough….VERY INTERESTED IN THE NEXT CHAPTER…PLEASE POST SOON
This is so sad and sorry for Bette. Ok I think Melvin will know about Bette and Tina relationship. Post soon, thanks! Good chapter!
Another great chapter here’s hoping Our favourite couple can make it through this strong
You have the right balance in your chapters. Just like a good book, hard to put down and keep wanting more. Good work!!
(sniff) Lab Coat, Lab Coat…this was a very touching chapter (sniffle). Thank goodness you posted coz I was seriously going through withdrawal syndrome… (singing off key) I WANT MY MTS :) As always, love it and ask for more…sooooon please!
Oh no, more drama for our favorite couple. I’m trusting that you’ll get them through all this without too much heartache.
That was so sad. I want to cry now. Its great that Tina went home with her. Loved it as always. Your the best.
what great writing
A very emotional chapter. I’m glad that Tina’s going with Bette. Well done!
Wow great chapter as always. I think it will be hard for Tina to stay away from comforting Bette in front of her family. Thanks
Tina is a gem. I have to agree with Jwet, it’s going to be interesting to see how Tina comforts Bette infront of her family. There’s the friendly hug that says “I’m sorry” and there’s the lover’s hug that says, “Come here, let me hold you and ease your pain”. Can’t wait!.
WHOA! MTS It’s getting really sad
for Bette well I’m just hoping that Tina also support Bette for her family crisis and also Bette family also agree of Bette Relationship with Tina OMG! this
is going Interesting I guess let see next chapter Please.
Gosh, how I’ve missed this story!Blasted hackers!!!
I too am wondering how it’ll go with Tina at
Bette’s side during this family crisis. Can’t wait to find out. Please post soon!
The drama in your stories feel like natural life events and not contrived just for the sake of extending the story. Well done.
Yikes! These two hardly ever get a break, do they.
Man, B&T just can’t catch a break!! I was so happy when Tina said she would go with Bette. It’s wonderful to know that no matter what these two may encounter, they’ll get through it together. Excellent chapter, MTS!! Thank you.
That was sad but wonderful. I hope all is well for them.
oh! that was wonderful. i’m apprehensive about bette going home, i mean, her mom’s going to be there right? what’s going to happen! oh please post soon, i love this story!
great story, just spent the last 2 days reading the whole series, it’s so additive, you’re absolutly one of the best writers here.
perfect as always,mts you write i read. loveit!!
Aww…poor Bette…I hope everything gets better…I love the fact that Tina will be there with her every step of the way…wicked chapter MTS…I’m so lovin’ it! Please update soon!
so great, I don’t know how you do it, weaving such tender emotions into this story, I love that Tina’s going with Bette. Really, that’s awesome. Can’t wait for the next chapter.