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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 36
Bette swallowed thickly over the lump in her throat and pulled a few curls behind her ear as she tip-toed toward the stairs and saw a heap of femininity crumpled at the bottom of the steps, rubbing her right ankle. A set of dark-brown eyes gazed into a pair of chocolate pools that resembled her own as recognition set in and a Bette breathlessly exhaled her older sister’s name.
“Kit?”
Kit winced and gave a small, pained smile as she looked up 23 stairs toward her younger sister. “Bette. Hi.”
Bette rushed down the stairs, holding her tightly tied robe close to her body. She eyed the suitcases and bags she and Tina had left down by the front door in their hurry to love each other and felt a wave of guilt descend down on her spirit.
“Kit, I’m so sorry”, she said, moving to help her sister stand.
“It’s okay.”, said Kit.
She tried to stand on her right ankle and found it a little too tender. “Ahh.”
Bette was becoming frantic and the worry was apparent in her face. Had Kit seen her making love to Tina? How was she going to explain this?
“Come sit down for a minute. Let me umlet me get an ice pack for your ankle.”
“I’ll be okay. I just need to walk.”, said Kit. She tried to walk again and winced at the pain.
Bette shook her head and said, “No, you’re not okay. Let me help you.”
Kit gave in and the sisters battled their own uncomfortableness as Bette helped her into the kitchen. She placed Kit’s leg in a chair and walked over the freezer.
Staring into the freezer past ice cream and frozen meats, Bette chewed nervously at her lip and searched in vain to find an ice pack.
“No ice packs, Kit. Will this broccoli do okay?”, she asked, holding up a bag of spears.
Kit nodded. “Yeah, that’s fine.”
As she arranged the frozen vegetables around her sister’s ankle, Bette asked “What are you doing here, Kit?”
Kit was suddenly shy, she didn’t want to make eye contact with the young woman who’d grown up literally before her eyes just moments ago. There were worry lines in her cinnamon colored forehead and she stared down her jean-clad leg to her ankle.
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OCD says
Totally and completely AWESOME MTS.. I mean OMG i wondered where Kit was in the story but WOW. That was soooo GOOD!!!!!
downlow95 says
Whew! A totally unexpected surprise! Well done!
truBlue says
I didn’t even think of Kit. Good one MTS! Is Tina going to be relieved or freak out from the close call?
btownjuli says
you are so sly…i didnt even think of kit! that was a relief!
mstx says
K
Excellent chapter. Glad it was Kit and that she is cool with it. Love this, can’t wait for more. Don’t stay gone too long :)
Seahurst says
KIT!!! I didn’t think of her either! Perfect surprise…perfect!!
ChakaSB says
Whew! Good conversation with Kit. Great chapter.
marsupial says
WONDERFUL THANKS
ecstasythrumusic says
I never thought of Kit either. Loving this story.
Bronwyn says
KIT! of course! It never crossed my mind, but now it makes perfect sense lol!
Thanks for another awesome chapter :)
kasbre says
wow MTS you totally caught me by surprise. I nver thought about it being Kit. Great interaction between Kit& Bette.
Precious Shadow says
MTS, Obviously you have had that awesome experience of mutual bonding, as have I. It happened with my first love (she has since died) and has never happened since. A truly mind blowing experience and you captured it so well. Thank you for bringing back those long forgotten, beautiful memories.
moonshadow says
Thank goodness-WHEW!!! I am so glad I was wrong about who it was! So glad that you brought Kit into the pic! I love it that she is as supportive of Bette as always. Thanks, this was a fantastic post!!!!
albeez says
shouting from the treetops MTS has posted. dayum, didnt think of kit either. i so love this story. i love the whole growing up together idea. thanks for such good writing and post soon.
shades says
Wonderful chapter! So glad it was Kit. Please don’t let Tina freak out to much. Anxiously awaiting your next chapter!!!
jade23 says
you are damn good writer MTS! :) I was absolutely sure it was Vivian.. glad I was mistaken:) thanks for post.
TiBetteShipper says
*Lets out the biggest sigh of relief ever* I’m soooo happy you introduced us to Kit and that it was she that saw them!! I totally wasn’t expecting that. Awesome chapter, MTS. I feel kinda bad for Tina though, she must still be scared to death! Hehe
t-boz says
It’s great that Kit is still the Kit we love and adore. Great that the sisters are bonding, how could they not, after their shared experience. That was great.
rosie says
Such a great twist, you are tricky. Love this story.
special_ed1845 says
THe echo is back!!!
“Pregnant.”, Kit repeated.
“Pregnant?”
“Pregnant.” Kit replied
lol
I was disappointed that Bette and Tina’s voyeaur was Kit at first….but now I’m glad it was KIt. Terrific Job.
YOu get two special points.
jbealsfan says
I so didnt see that coming! Wow I really love this story, and I love you for writing it. This is the best story by far that I have ever read. Cant wait for the next post.
JBlover4life says
I wasn’t thinking of Kit at all. I forgot she wasn’t in this story. Good way to bring her into it. So now they both confided secrets with eachother. Excellent chapter. I can’t wait for more. Please post soon :)
AmandaMG says
MTS… well i’m with the others.. never thought of Kit… so glad it was her and not any of the others… hopefullt tinw will not freak out… love your story…please continue
Fa6Fa6 says
WOW i never thought of that one..
great chappy, loved the whole i’m preg convo..
tylo says
OMG!!!!! so glad it was kit post soon
robbeedee says
MTS,
You have raised the bar so high that most other authors can’t even see it and yet you always manage to raise a little bit higher each time. I am so thrilled at seeing another fine post from you.
Brilliant twist by introducing Kit at this point. At least Bette has another supporter in her family abet one which is a bit of a black sheep. Just like Aunt Karen. Acorns don’t fall far from the Oak, I guess.
This is the simplest of scenes as Bette and Kit talk but given your talent and skill it has become a living a breathing entity full of promise, emotion and much satisfaction for the readers.
Thanks you for sharing this wondrous tale with me. I am truly gratiful to be a part of this pleasure.
Your Loyal fan.
ut says
You know, I don’t know how to tell you this and hope you don’t call me a liar. Ok when I read your last chapter and about who’s at the door that accidentally saw Bette and Tina make love and I don’t even thinking that is Kit and this morning when I wake up I suddenly know who’s at the door and is Kit and I think that it’s the one who’s we not thinking about lately, and I’m glad you post this chapter and I know who is now and good way to introduce Kit to us, love it. Bette and Kit is a little bit shy and they have a good coversation and damn what a surprise Kit’s pregnant and let see what’s next. Post soon please, thanks! Good chapter!
nzgrl says
I forgot all about Kit.
Down Low says
Pink and green elephant huh? Well atleast it wasn’t red. Can I get a Skee Wee?
momo says
OMG! That was so funny MTS WHOA! Thank Gosh it’s only Kit LOL! Hey I’m still catching up Thanks for posted again I Love it Please post SOON.
nik_noodle says
brilliant :D I so didnt even think of Kit….i’d actually *blush* forgotten she existed in this story :P
Way too B&T Foucused!
trecelovinit says
That was good thinking to introduce Kit into the story like that. I never thought it would be her. Great job!!!
Traci921 says
Ok, in the last few days I have read every chapter of the Roomates and the Roomates, second dimension. I LOVE this story…and now that I am all caught up….I have no more chapters waiting for me to read. please post soon, I’m a total addict.
Change says
MTS…OMG, WHAT A CHAPTER!!…I so thought it was gonna be Janice…lol…you had me going there for a minute…spectacular chapter…what else is there to say?!…YOU ROCK MTS!!
cabqbw says
I’ve fianally gotten caught up with your series. This is great. I love your style. Please post again soon.