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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 50
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Bette was an emotional wreck. She could barely speak. The walls of her fictional world were crashing down all around her. Her head was spinning. She didn’t want to say the wrong thing, but she had no idea of what the right thing should be.
She sobbed as she spoke. Her words halting, her thoughts scattered. “I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to lie to you. I’m sorry, Daddy.”
Melvin’s grip became tighter and for the first time in a long time, raw emotion eclipsed his cultivated demeanor. There were tears in his eyes as he shook his youngest daughter. “I gave you the world. Put it at your fingertips. And this is what you do? This is how you repay me? I’ve loved you, doted on you….”
“Let her go!”, Kit repeated, moving closer still.
Melvin was still talking, still finding his way out of this shock-induced haze.
“I don’t know you. I really don’t know you. I’m so ashamed of you…..”, he continued.
“Daddy, please.”, Bette begged. “Please let me go”
“You lied to me. Lied to me. All this time you’ve lied to me……”, he said.
“You’re hurting me”, said Bette.
Kit finally moved over to Bette, holding on to her baby sister’s waist, trying to find the right balance of protecting both Bette and her unborn child.
“Dad! Let go! Let go of her!”, Kit yelled.
The words of his eldest daughter seemed to snap Melvin back to reality. His eyes refocused and he realized what he was doing. He let go of Bette’s shoulders, pushing her a little as he did so.
Being as distraught as she was, Bette slipped through Kit’s arms and collapsed into a sobbing pool of heartache on the floor of her father’s kitchen.
Melvin looked down on his two children and fought to hold back his own tears. He’d never intended to hurt his baby girl. Never intended to grab her so forcibly. To see her in so much pain. But then again, he’d never expected betrayal. And at the end of the day, for a man like Melvin Edward Porter, betrayal was the king of sins. He couldn’t process it. Couldn’t deal with it. Couldn’t handle anything other than total submission and obedience from the one person in the world he’d always thought he could control.
The disenchanted father, still breathing heavily from the chaos around him, fought against the emotion in his voice and raspily whispered, “Get out of my house. I don’t want to see you again.”
With that, he turned and left, forcing himself not to look back.
In the kitchen, Kit cradled her sister’s head to her chest and gently rubbed the soft, dark curls. The foot soldiers had acquired skills in the heat of battle. Love and compassion now flowed easily between them. Tragedy had bonded them in ways that 19 years of co-existence could not.
“Shh….don’t cry, Bette. Don’t cry. It’s okay”, said Kit.
“It’s not okay. It’s not okay.”, Bette replied.
The dark-haired freshman sniffled and with a whimper said, “What am I going to do? It wasn’t supposed to be like this. What am I going to do?”
Kit didn’t have any answers. She continued to comfort and rock her sister until the sobs gave way to quiet short breaths. Eventually, the quiet short breaths gave way to dry cheeks and when the dry cheeks gave way to calm, even breathing, Kit Porter helped her baby sister up off the floor. Together, they left the Porter compound, with a weeping Melvin watching them from the second story of his empty home.
TBC (To Be Continued)
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Wow I just came across this story and from what I have read I like it. I am going to have to go back and read the whole thing.
maybe bette’s mother support her
maybe bette’s mother support her
That was an extremely emotional chapter. Well done!
that’s a tough chapter to read. Full of emotions…Ladystorm is right, maybe Bette’s mom is gonna help her…To continue her scholarship but also to keep seeing Tina !
Bette still has her aunt!It will be hard but I know Bette & Tina can overcome this. There are scholarships, student loans.
One more thing, your writing is awesome. It has gotten better not that it was not before but it’s a lttle different which has made it even better to read. Please let us know when that novel is finsihed!
What an emotional confrontation between father and daughters. Really liked these lines: “hese two young women had lived their lives as distant sisters; connected only by the man who’d fathered them. And now, in the quiet hush before the dawn of a Porter Family war, these emotionally crippled foot soldiers lacked the skills needed for battle” and “The foot soldiers had acquired skills in the heat of battle. Love and compassion now flowed easily between them.” Ah, to be in control…hope when Bette grows up, she won’t have this problem as her father does. I too think that perhaps now is the time for Bette’s mother to be more of a part of her life. Thanks for another wonderful addition to the Baby Bette and Tiny Tina story!
Oh yeah, Bette still has her Mom, her Aunt and Grandmother to lean on. I’m sure they’ll be more than willing and happy to lend that support, whether emotionally and financially.
Oops, that should be emotionally or financially.
the manure just keeps hitting the fan…it would be great for melvin to get a heart attack right now and be alone just as kit said…maybe bette should get a job and pay her way through school, but the main thing, she had to talk to tina and ket her know about this, as painful as it could be, they have to deal with this together
wow that was sad and intense..poor Bette and just to think that Tina probably will have the same problems with her family. I hope things get better for them.
That’s so heartbreaking. Bette could learn from JB, to be neighbours’ babysitter or walk their dogs to earn the tuition fees…
So glad that you’re back! The amazingly written tension is wonderfully done and sadly easy to relate to. Keep up the great work and please post more as soon as you can!
Oooohh my GOD just found out that ou had posted again *twice* Brilliant yes I still read your stories, I have 4 authors I go Back and read ove and over Ally, Skip, Beluga And yourself. Yes I was soooo excited when I seen youhas posted. Going to be hard for our girls but I hope they dont start pulling back from each other, Stuff ass hole Melvin, as somebody says she has her aunt and mum, but let her talk to Tina
I swear my heart rate kept increasing during this chapter. If it’s late enough into the semester then Bette can still finish and have the summer to do whatever it takes to stay in school. And like others have said, she has other family members who would probably help out. She just has to not open her mouth for awhile unless her aunt is the only one helping. =/
And that’s why kids find it so difficult to come out to their parents… if ever. Please post again soon.
great stuff!!! I’m gonna have to go back and read about baby Tina and Baby Bette, damn 49 chapters!!!!lmao …anywayz more soon please, find a way to keep Bette in school and don’t let her and T break up…
Let Bette call Tina. She really needs her. Yes, her mother or her aunt I know will definitely support, Yes. Post soon, please.
Bette needs to go to Tina right now. Bette has a support system in Tina, Kit, her aunt, and she could even talk to her mother. But most important, Bette needs Tina right now. This was a very emotional chapter. Very well done.
Man, that was intense. Bette still can go to her aunt even her mom. Still not the end of the world .. yet. Let Bette go to Tina. Brilliant chapter, more please :)
So glad to see these 2 chapters of my favorite story. Melvin is such a self-rightess prick and stands to lose the love of both daughters forever. I hope that he wakes up before its too late… people that say sticks and stones may break my bones but words will never hurt me… haven’t been on the receiving end of such hateful comments. So much passion and emotions in this chapter- can’t wait for Bette to get back to Tina, she needs her now.
So you’ve brought some serious drama in this chapter. Bette has got be destroyed at Melvin’s continued negative reaction. And now that Melvin knows it was Tina all along i’m worried for her future as well; what if Melvin shares this little lifestyle choice w/ Tina’s family in an attempt to break Tina and Bette apart….uh oh! So how is Bette going to stay in school? I really felt Melvin’s anger and hatred towards Bette (and Kit for that matter) in this chapter. Great writing job, well done!
Damn this is so sad and emotional!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So raw all those emotions, well done.
This is so heart breaking for Bette and her relationship with Tina. Hopefully there is a way that Bette will be able to continue with her schooling and remain with Tina. Post soon.
This story just keeps getting better and better – a definite “must read”.
Wow, MTS, that’s some return. Welcome back, glad you decided to pick up with this story again. Yup, life isn’t always happiness and good times. We have to struggle thru drama to be able to appreciate those happier moments. Can’t wait to see how our young ladies work their way through this all.
She can get student loans…screw Melvin. she needs to get back to Tina
Wow! Wrenching drama! Thanks!
MTS…your writing has taken on a new dimension too. Congrats on your novel and thank you for continuing this story.Its difficult to fathom that Melvin would be so against Bette this way because of the way I interpreted his character on the show. It is a wonderfully written, heartwrenching chapter.
well well if it isnt my friend fergz. sns, excellent. you forgot one. he who is with sin, yada yada yada. funny how people use scripture to only make themselves feel justified. thanks for the update.
MTS….Your’e the best.I’ve said that to a lot of authors on this site but I’ve never really meant it until now. : ) If Melivin doesn’t pay for the rest of Bette’s schooling…I think Bette should sell the Beamer. The money she’d get would last her up until her senior year at UCLA…that’s of course if she finds a small apartment and split the rent with Tina.It’s only 6K for califronia residents a year..w/o room and board. I should of applied there but I didn’t. **Sigh** Now my tuition is around 40K a year. Keep posting regularly..if you get the time. Toodles.
WOW both of them are hurt but grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr to melvin for being such a bastard to bette
I am so glad you are back. Don’t leave us again, k? Roommates was one of the stories that got me hooked on this site. Wonderful chapter. I’m scared for Bette, but with help from Kit, Tina, and her aunt she should be okay. PS How’s the novel going? Whats it going to be about?