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The Roommates: Chapter 22
Dont stop.Dont stop.Dont stop.Right there.Ahhhhh.Oh *****, she moaned, her body and mind no longer communicating.
As Sidneys final thrusts sent Bette over the edge, the blonde could feel her lover contracting around her fingers as Bettes lungs prepared for the final stanza.
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh………OhhhhhhhhhhhhhhOhhhhhhh.GodAhhhhhhhhhh!……..Tina!, she yelled, the colors exploding in her mind and a heavy cloud of darkness settling around the room.
Sidney whipped her head up and looked at Bettes whose dark brown eyes were suddenly opened wide with embarrassment; shame and arousal coloring her cheeks.
Tears stood in Sidneys eyes as she looked up at Bette. Tina?, she whispered. Tina?
Bette sought to get a handle on the emotions and trembles still coursing through her body as she sat up and reached for Sidney. Sidney, honey, I didnt mean that. It was a mistake. I didnt mean to ., Bette tried to explain.
Tina? Are you ***** her?, asked Sidney, the disbelief and shock at the situation rendering her an emotional mess, the tears slipping down her face.
Bette had no idea of how to even begin to explain what had just happened. No! Sidney, IIm sorry. Im not ***** Tina. I promise!
Sidneys words came out haltingly as she struggled to compose herself, the tears never ending. Im.makinglove to youand you.youre.youre thinking of Tina?
Now Bette was crying; crying for the betrayal of her heart, crying for Sidneys pain, crying for the similarity she now felt to her philandering mother. Sidney, I wasnt. Please.just hear me out.
Sidney stood up and started hunting for her clothes, throwing on the items in a haste to make an exit. Theres..theres nothing you can say, Bette. I love you. Ive waited for you. Ive done what you asked and you are thinking of her! Wasnt I good enough, Bette?
Bette pulled her chemise over her head and reached out to her lover. Sidney, please. You are more than enough. Im so sorry. Ive just been so worried about her the last couple of days. Shes been going through so much. I.I wasnt thinking of her. You are all I want. Please dont go.
Bettes words were lost on Sidney. The blonde beauty stared at Bette, her blue eyes filled with tears, her heart breaking. How could you do this to me?, she asked, her voice nearly a whisper.
Bette didnt know what else to say. She ran to Sidney and bent down, hugging her at her waist. Sidney, I love you. Please, dont go. Im sorry. I didnt mean it. I only love you.
I dont think youve ever loved me. Let me go, Bette. Just let me go. I have to get out of here., said Sidney, pushing at Bettes shoulders, pulling her arms from around her waist.
When Bette didnt let go, Sidney pushed harder until Bette was forced to let go and fell back on the carpet. Sidney made her way for the door as Bette sat on the floor, her eyes full of tears, her heart full of pain. Sidney, please dont go! Dont leave me!
Bette, I have to go. We can talk later, but right now, I have to go., said Sidney, before leaving the room and slamming the door behind her.
Bette was paralyzed by her own emotions. She sat there, sobbing to herself, feeling the weight of the world descend down on her shoulders. She had become what she feared the most..her mother.
TBC (To Be Continued)
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(72 votes, average: 4.18 out of 5)
All I can say is ..loved it…can’t wait till Tina comes home!
I have loved this story from the very first chapter. I feel bad for Bette, but I was so happy that she said ‘Tina’. I can only hope our favorite couple will be reunited soon. Keep writing, this story is one of the best i’ve read.
Wow – beautifully written – didn’t see it coming I thought Bette had it undercontrol. Thanks for your fabulous writing.
LOL…that was kick A$$!!! Red rover red rover let Tin come home…
God… I knew it, i just knew it!
OMG all I could do was cover my eyes as I read Tina! Oh you are so good with this story. It took me a sec to read on. My mouth wide open from the OMG shock of No she didn’t say Tina’s name. WOW…. Excellent job.
OMG I’m glad Bette finally realised she truly loves Tina, even if it was a Freudian slip (sorry about the spelling). Feel kinda bad for Sydney though…. can’t wait to see how it all works out!! =0)
Oh Sh@#!!! What the…??!! I love it…please get Tina home soon!
I have loved every chapter of this story.. i was reading hoping she would scream out ‘tina’. I feel bad for sid but nothing beats bette and tina. I hope they get 2gether and soon.
OMG, you totally got us with this one! Awesome chapter. And she’s not her mother – I feel bad for Bette, but the heart could not lie..
Very well done!
Simply awesome…….i love it….Thankyou:)
Oh nooo, I just died a slow, agonizing death, and oh wait a minute, this is a good thing. Can’t help feeling Sidey’s pain though. Please don’t keep us waiting too long.
I had a feeling she was gonna scream tina’s name… loved it… please please please post soon
It would seem the primary lesson Bette will unwittingly walk away with from her attempts to not behave like her mother is that she became her father. She let pride dictate her heart. One can’t help whom one falls in love with, but we can prevent hurting others by being honest with them. Nicely done!
Oh Bette you are not your mother…don’t beat yourself up…awesome new chapter!
OMFG>>..i didn’t see that coming…holy crap..that was just an awesome chapter…your love scene was beautiful..don’t worry.. please post soon…really soon!!!
Awesome…rendered speechless…bloody awesome
Another great chapter. Bette needs to follow her heart and let Sidney go.
OMG Bette I didn’t think that you give you’re self to Sidney and then you did Sex for Tina before, Woah you really not thinking right now but we love Bette thank you it’s really nice story.
Just had to skip down here for a moment – I hope Tina doesn’t come home early!
As another writer said, “Turn About is Fair Play!”
YYYEESSS….that’s perfect…….cuz bette wants tina
Didn’t see that coming!
Well, the heart doesn’t lie – especially when in the throes of passion!
Bette belongs with Tina. I guess they’ll just raise the baby in their dorm room – their parents will just sh*t!
Loved it, loved it, loved it! I have spent this entire rainy day reading every chapter and what a way to end, she yelled out Tina…Great job and I can’t wait for the next ch.
Simply brilliant! I must convince I’m a BnT addict so I was thrilled when Bette yelled out “Tina”. I did feel bad for Sid though as you have created a very likable character in her! Wouldn’t mind dating her myself…ha ha!
Haha…good story…you had me fooled there for a minute…deep down inside Bette only loves Tina…there’s no denying that;-) Thank you!!
Great story. ive just read all 22 chaps,my eyes blurry from the screen but cant wait for the next one
oh shit! never saw that one coming! great chapter! post soon!
This was written well. Thank you for the drama.
damn that was a good twist. give us more please
GOD I LOVE THIS STORY! When she yelled out Tina’s name I totally gasped and then burst out laughing!(that was probably mean of me but I couldn’t help it) I did feel bad for Sidney, that’s a really shitty situation. . .but I’m over it. I hope Bette takes that as a sign and focusses her attention on her true love. Thank you so much for updating tonight! Please post more soon!
Excellent chapter. Man that was awesome and love it. Feel bad for Sidney but Bette and Tina mean to be together and they need to be together. Anyway I love it, can’t wait to see what happen next please post soon. Thank you! 5 stars for you!
Not good with these scenes eh? your not good your great the whole story is great thanks
Dude… when I read Tina’s name my heart stopped. I mean Hallmark just make cards for that kind of mistake. Ouch poor Sidney. It is a testimony to your writing that I really feel bad for Sidney, you have created full and rich characters. Great job.
Damn did someone just lose control of their feelings, poor Bette. When is Tina coming back. Please post soon.
cabt wait to see what bette does!! im lovng ur story:)
Good fycking job Porter!!!! you’ve been lying all around, now get real…T’s the one and only for you…and hey a baby to boot….good one..but I guess the Kennards will fix that up or nature????
Well, shit. Lol love the story