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The Roommates: Chapter 29
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I did, T. I wanted to make sure she understood that you are the only one for me., said Bette with a smile.
Tina smiled in return. Wow. I cant believe you told her that.
Believe it baby., said Bette.
Tinas smile fell and her eyes narrowed, boring into Bettes soul. Bette felt a chill run down her spine. So, then where the ***** did you go?
Bette swallowed hard and said, Sidney asked me if you and I had been intimate. I told her that we had and then she hit me. The next thing I know, were fighting each other and two campus cops roll up on us and take us to the police station. They threw us in a couple of cells until we calmed down.
She hit you?, asked Tina.
Yeah, she did.
Were you in the same cell?, asked Tina.
Bette shook her head. No, different cells. They finally let me go and I walked back here.
Tina looked into Bettes eyes, searching for a hint of a lie. Bette felt her heart rate speed up. This interrogation was making her nervous. Bette, if youre lying to me, Ill never forgive you.
Tina, Im not lying. Its over between me & Sidney. I really mean that. All I want is you. Have I ever given you any reason not to trust me?
Tina sighed. No, you havent. I dont mean to make you feel as if I dont trust you, but I am so in love with you, Im afraid of being hurt. You are amazing, Bette. Part of me doesnt trust that you really want to be with me.
Bette slid her arm around Tina and pulled her closer. Believe it, T. I love you and only you. I want to be with you and only you. Bette smiled and said, I just spent the last few hours in a cell because I was fighting about you. Trust me, you are the one.
Tina smiled as well and kissed Bette softly. My little inmate, Im so glad they set you free.
Me too. They wouldnt even let me make a phone call.
Tina caressed the side of Bettes face. Poor baby. I still cant believe she hit you. Let me see, Bette. I want to make sure there isnt a bruise. Tina then straddled Bette and reached over to turn on Bettes desk lamp.
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I was scared that I wouldn’t have time to read it, but with I did it. Well done!
ahhh, almost satisfied…..bette’s turn.
I sure am taking a lot of cold showers today!! lol Thanx so much for the update…. and make them as long as you like coz no matter what I’m always left wanting more! ;)
ahh soo dam good.. love it.. love it .. love it.. nicely done chick.. can’t wait for more
Now that’s what I call a welcome home!!! MoreT….Happy Easter to you, too. Please post soon. Tina’s waiting for hers! (Smiles) I’d like to see what Tina does to Sidney, should she come anywhere close to Bette.
Let me see…am I the first to comment?
LoL…I guess I was to slow…anyways, BRAVO!! They’re together again…YAY!! You handled that love scene wonderfully! Tina had some nice moves, let’s see Bette’s counter-attack in the next chapter;-P My last day of Spring Break, I still have tons of assignments to complete (start even) and I have your story and countless others here on this site to thank for that, I just can’t get enough of your stories. Much mahalos!! Oh by the way, I think describing Bette as “caramel-colored and mocha-colored beauty” does justice to her gorgeousness:-D There’s no other way to portray her! Just thought I give a more meaningful comment. Thanks again and please continue!!
i cannot wait for the next chapter…Spectacular!!!
Great, they are finally together, but how long will the drama subside? Good Job.
finally…..OMG….that was awesome..thanx for a before bedtime story……..
DA..DA.. Damn! You have got it going on with this story. That was worth the wait! And we get a part two? that is too good to be true. What a thought.. Tina and Bette finding one another so young and having an amazing life together – love it!
great job…won’t be satisfied until Bette’s turn!
Ah, they are so good togeher. I like that your tina is the more experienced of the two.
I great chapter, i love your story.x
way too hot to read at work. nice job, MTS! now it’s Tina’s turn
Whew ~ loved it, MTS! For the record, I personally don’t care how you refer to Bette…caramel apple…mocha frappucino…chocolate-vanilla swirl milkshake (getting hungry here ~ sorry, focusing!) ~ awesome writing, as always :)
Awesome…..Great job girl!!!!!
how many ways to say I love this story…I may have to start commenting in French or Spanish or Chinese or something because I am seriously running out of words in the English language to say how effing AMAZING this story is! I can’t wait to see where you’re heading with this story now that T&B can be together!! I’m hooked!
Wow super hottt. Yea the girls are together.
i hope that is the last we see of sidney!……Great Chapter loved how tina took her time with bette! cant wait for the next post!!:)
Wow that was so hot and amazing chapter, the love scene is so awesome and love it. Tina make Bette feel so hot and now is Bette turn to make Tina hotter. Please post soon the next one, thank you! Great chapter!
Very nice. Thanks for this.
This line – “Believe it, T. I love you and only you. I want to be with you and only you.†– gave me the biggest smile. So incredibly sweet, and just what T needed to hear. Simply lovely.
I must admit my confusion: exactly which scene are you not great at writing?! Were I more lecherous, I’d say you should practice more … but, frankly, dear, you’ve already got it going on just fine!! Er, I guess you’ll give it the old “college try” in the next chapter! (Sorry, couldn’t resist.) These young women sure know more than I did in college! Thanks for another great chapter in an utterly engaging and fun story!
YAAAAAAYYY!!!!
excellent.
You captured the moment and captured it well. Very sensual, very real and very hot.
Great Job
That was awesome. I love B and T together.
Thank you, Thank you….they are finally together! Please let us enjoy this for a little while! It helps me get over my disappointment of the show!
Oh my water bill is going to be sky high!!!
The novelty of their feelings is what I find appealing about this story.
Here’s hoping they don’t grow jaded with each other. It’s about the love they share and the confidence they instill in each other. Each is the other’s refuge.
That’s what their love is all about.
I hope Bette and Tina will be tender in their lovemaking.
Thanks for posting!
Absolutely yummy!!!
Sweet …. really sweet. Tina needs some serious loving .. now ! If Bette`s too tired – well I will happy oblige! ; ) Thank you – great story.
No criticsms. Just really good stuff.