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The Roommates: Chapter 29
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Tina bent down and held her lovers face in her slender hands, inspecting it for damage. Bette, this side of your face is a little red. She must have hit you pretty hard.
That she did.
I cant believe she did this to you. Ill take care of her tomorrow. Sidney has a habit of marking on things that belong to me., said Tina.
Bette smiled at Tinas possessive attitude. Its okay, T. She kind of owed me one. I guess were even now.
Tinas brow wrinkled. Why?
Bettes smile fell and she reached down for Tinas hands, looking up into her eyes. I slapped her pretty hard earlier today. Its the other part of the story, T. The part I didnt get to finish.
What happened? Why did you slap her?, asked Tina.
Last night, after I screamed your name, Sidney ran out of here like a bat out of *****.
Tina nodded.
I felt so bad, T. I mean, I love you, but it wasnt fair to Sidney for me to disrespect her and yell out your name. I felt horrible. I tried to call her and I couldnt get through. I felt just like my mother, T. I was really beating myself up, hating myself. I felt like Id lost everything. Id lost her, Id lost you, Id lost my own self-respect. All night, I was worried about her and was wrapped up in my own self-hate.
Well, what do you know, I woke up in the morning and went down to Damons room on our way to breakfast. I see Sidney coming out of the room of this upperclassman. This girl named Angela. She ran from me to this *****. It turns out, shes been sleeping with her for weeks, T. For weeks, shes been having ***** with her. All this time shes been lying to my face.
There was surprise on Tinas sun-kissed face. Thats why she brought the balloons and stuff?
Yes. She even sent me an email earlier. I was so pissed when I found out, I just slapped her really heard. Damon had to hold me back. I just felt so humiliated. Like everything was built on a lie., Bettes tears had started to flow.
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I was scared that I wouldn’t have time to read it, but with I did it. Well done!
ahhh, almost satisfied…..bette’s turn.
I sure am taking a lot of cold showers today!! lol Thanx so much for the update…. and make them as long as you like coz no matter what I’m always left wanting more! ;)
ahh soo dam good.. love it.. love it .. love it.. nicely done chick.. can’t wait for more
Now that’s what I call a welcome home!!! MoreT….Happy Easter to you, too. Please post soon. Tina’s waiting for hers! (Smiles) I’d like to see what Tina does to Sidney, should she come anywhere close to Bette.
Let me see…am I the first to comment?
LoL…I guess I was to slow…anyways, BRAVO!! They’re together again…YAY!! You handled that love scene wonderfully! Tina had some nice moves, let’s see Bette’s counter-attack in the next chapter;-P My last day of Spring Break, I still have tons of assignments to complete (start even) and I have your story and countless others here on this site to thank for that, I just can’t get enough of your stories. Much mahalos!! Oh by the way, I think describing Bette as “caramel-colored and mocha-colored beauty” does justice to her gorgeousness:-D There’s no other way to portray her! Just thought I give a more meaningful comment. Thanks again and please continue!!
i cannot wait for the next chapter…Spectacular!!!
Great, they are finally together, but how long will the drama subside? Good Job.
finally…..OMG….that was awesome..thanx for a before bedtime story……..
DA..DA.. Damn! You have got it going on with this story. That was worth the wait! And we get a part two? that is too good to be true. What a thought.. Tina and Bette finding one another so young and having an amazing life together – love it!
great job…won’t be satisfied until Bette’s turn!
Ah, they are so good togeher. I like that your tina is the more experienced of the two.
I great chapter, i love your story.x
way too hot to read at work. nice job, MTS! now it’s Tina’s turn
Whew ~ loved it, MTS! For the record, I personally don’t care how you refer to Bette…caramel apple…mocha frappucino…chocolate-vanilla swirl milkshake (getting hungry here ~ sorry, focusing!) ~ awesome writing, as always :)
Awesome…..Great job girl!!!!!
how many ways to say I love this story…I may have to start commenting in French or Spanish or Chinese or something because I am seriously running out of words in the English language to say how effing AMAZING this story is! I can’t wait to see where you’re heading with this story now that T&B can be together!! I’m hooked!
Wow super hottt. Yea the girls are together.
i hope that is the last we see of sidney!……Great Chapter loved how tina took her time with bette! cant wait for the next post!!:)
Wow that was so hot and amazing chapter, the love scene is so awesome and love it. Tina make Bette feel so hot and now is Bette turn to make Tina hotter. Please post soon the next one, thank you! Great chapter!
Very nice. Thanks for this.
This line – “Believe it, T. I love you and only you. I want to be with you and only you.†– gave me the biggest smile. So incredibly sweet, and just what T needed to hear. Simply lovely.
I must admit my confusion: exactly which scene are you not great at writing?! Were I more lecherous, I’d say you should practice more … but, frankly, dear, you’ve already got it going on just fine!! Er, I guess you’ll give it the old “college try” in the next chapter! (Sorry, couldn’t resist.) These young women sure know more than I did in college! Thanks for another great chapter in an utterly engaging and fun story!
YAAAAAAYYY!!!!
excellent.
You captured the moment and captured it well. Very sensual, very real and very hot.
Great Job
That was awesome. I love B and T together.
Thank you, Thank you….they are finally together! Please let us enjoy this for a little while! It helps me get over my disappointment of the show!
Oh my water bill is going to be sky high!!!
The novelty of their feelings is what I find appealing about this story.
Here’s hoping they don’t grow jaded with each other. It’s about the love they share and the confidence they instill in each other. Each is the other’s refuge.
That’s what their love is all about.
I hope Bette and Tina will be tender in their lovemaking.
Thanks for posting!
Absolutely yummy!!!
Sweet …. really sweet. Tina needs some serious loving .. now ! If Bette`s too tired – well I will happy oblige! ; ) Thank you – great story.
No criticsms. Just really good stuff.