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The Roommates: Chapter 33
Tina, what are you doing?, asked Bette, her eyes filled with desire, her face a mask of frustration.
Tina stood up on the side of the bed and looked down at Bette. You do not know how much I want to make love to you right now. But I know you. I know how you get. I know you probably didnt eat breakfast. Did you eat lunch?
Bette looked up at her, almost afraid to answer. She knew the truth would move her further and further away from Tinas magical touch. Quietly, she responded No, T. I didnt eat lunch.
Tina looked at the clock and placed a hand on her hip, Bette, its almost 5:30 and you havent eaten all day. Were going to dinner right now.
Bettes eyes opened wide as she began to protest. Are you kidding me? We were just about to
Tina smiled and finished her sentence. Go.. to.. dinner. , she said.
Bette sighed and reached out for Tina one last time. Tina dodged her and said, Bette, lets go. The sooner we eat, the sooner we can get back.
Bette was not happy, but as she pouted, her stomach growled again, as if to second Tinas command. Her dark eyes looked from her traitorous belly to Tinas commanding stance. She finally acquiesced, Okay, I see your point. Let me find my shoes.
Tina smiled at her hollow victory. Bette was going to get some nourishment, but Tinas body needed the sustenance of Bettes touch. As the aroused blonde walked around, searching for her own shoes, she felt the silk in her panties moving against her sensitive skin.
I am going to be so uncomfortable like this. I have to change. Tina shuffled over to her closet and pulled out a fresh pair of under wear and placed them on her desk, before unbuckling her belt and sliding off her jeans.
Bette was tying up her laces when she heard the sound of Tina undressing. She whipped up her head in time to see Tina sliding out of her jeans. What are you doing, T?, she whispered.
Tina was now standing beside her bed, clad only in her wet panties, her cheeks flushed and red. She saw the look in Bettes eyes and realized that maybe she should have gone to the bathroom to do this. I..I..needed to change. My panties are soaked.
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(82 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
love the story but there is trouble if bette dont tell tina.
Your scenes are so HOT! I always need to take a long cold shower after I read your stories. I can’t wait what you have in stored for the young lovers. Keep writing…
i have a feeling that even though bette doesnt want to hurt tina anymore she is!! thanks for the post….hope to see another one soon!!
YAY! LOL…you’re story is fantabulous, I love it to pieces.
I was about to say…you can never be so hungry that you stop in the middle of a passionate exchange to have dinner. Sorry but every meal is better after ardent love making. Thank you for saving them from such a mistake. Great chapter. More please!
That was great and a nice treat to return from lunch and find that you have written another chapter.
Wow, I’m like a prune I’ve been taking so many cold showers lol…. that was amazing as always and I can’t wait for more!! =0)
Before I read this, let me say, I will be pissed if the ‘NC-17’ rating is has anything to do with Sidney.
Now, back to the story…
I’m your new reader but I want to tell you that I read all!! of 32 chapters yesterday and I’ve liked this story so much. Actually I wait for the next fragment more than for the next TLW. Greetings! :)
Thank you! Thank you!
Of course, Bette needs to be tied at the waist to Tina to prevent her from doing anything stupid with Sidney.
loving it post soon
MTS, I feel so inadequate when I try to describe just how much I love this story. It’s somehow not enough to say, “Thiiiiiiiis much!” Every time I see you’ve got a new post, I get a little flutter of excitement. The characters are so complete, their feelings so real, their loving so intense, their outlook so age-appropriate, their drama so believable. As for this chapter: oh, my! That Bette’s such a quick study! At least in bed. Definitely going to learn the hard way about keeping secrets and “protecting” people. Tsk tsk. Great writing, great story. Thanks so much for sharing it.
I’m loving your story and you are writing some very hot scenes.
DAMN girl! That was SO hot! LOVE this story.
I love this story! I have never commented before but I felt I needed to tell you how wonderful this story is. Post soon!
hmmm, im hungry now
just wanted to let you know that i love your story…i have always commented but under a different name…
God that was hot.
I need a sexy roommate like Bette when I’m in college *wink* haha.
love it girl.. can’t wait for more.. keep up the awesome story :)
Okay I am now officially caught up. Great chapter so nice to see the girls happy. I have a feeling Bette should tell Tina about the meeting, maybe Sidney is not to be trusted. Again wonderful writing.
Bette should tell Tina because Tina will find out and it will come back to bite bet in the ass. I’m Loving this story!
didn’t know what pleasure trip you were going to take us on….Thanks for the ride!!
yowza……i can’t be reading these stories while I’m still at work! Very nicely done!
They are hot and tender and really sexy. Loving every chapter.
Smokin’ hot!! Fuck the cold shower.
MTS- this story rocks! Question: Is Bette as dumb as a rock? The Magic 8 ball says – most certainly so…oh, no Bette-just a hunch, but this ain’t gonna be good 4 ya..the magic 8 ball never lies..look forward to seeing how this really turns out though….wonderful writing!
hey. Just read all these chapters in one go…i couldn’t stop they were just too addictive. I think ure story and writing is great, and I cant wait fot the next chapter.
Aaaaa ~ you know I just started breathing again (in battling that nasty cold) and there you are taking my breath away! I love the way you write ~ the vivid imagery you conjure in my head places me right there in the moment. Oh, to A your Q…I swear that incident I wrote about was not an autobiography ~ girl scout’s honor!
thumbs up.
Honestly…school is so depriving me of my fanfic world!! Hehe. You are so good!! I need to go take a shower…a COLD one that’s for sure. That scene was AWESOME! It was HOTT!! Thanks again! Can’t for the next chapter, laters!
Finally got caught up on all yuour great chapters. Love this story!!!
That was awesome and hot. I really like it, please post soon. Thank you!
i smellllll trouble…oh-oh
…and i just read it.Oh so HOT.Great writing.Can´t wait the drama continue but i hope tine will understand bette.be back soon.please.