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The Roommates: Chapter 33
The wetness continued to drip, slipping down, exciting Bette even more. Bette slid her tongue into Tinas core, thrusting in and out, her nose teasing the swollen *****. She heard her lovers whimpering over her head, the lusty whispered words falling down to Bettes ears, Oh God..Oh Bette..FuckAhhhhh..dont stop.
Her hips were bucking, moving in time with her lovers thrusts, the pleasure of Bettes tongue driving her eyes to the back of her head. Tina struggled to remain upright. Her standing leg was weak, her body was shaking. Bette didnt feel her lovers trembles, but her hands were gripping Tinas ***** tightly, sliding slightly against the sweaty flesh as she continued her assault on the beautiful body in her hands.
Bettes tongue began to twist and turn inside of Tina and her efforts were met with more lusty murmurings. Oh *****. Bette.Ahh.Ahhhh. Bette pressed her nose harder against Tinas ***** and increased her thrusts. She could feel Tinas climax approaching. She wanted to make her touch the stars.
Tina could feel her ***** building. The pleasant fluttering started in her core and slowly began to ripple out in pleasurable waves, flowing through her body as she proclaimed her rapid ascent, *****..Im cumming.Ahhhh. AhhhShit..Im cumming.Bette!
Tinas body shook as Bette gripped her tightly, licking around her girlfriends mound, lapping up the juices that had so easily slipped from her body. Tina was still shaking when Bette slowly raised her head and smiled up into a pair of light brown eyes. Tinas cheeks were even redder, her body glistening from all the exertion. She smiled at Bette, her chest heaving as she struggled to catch her breath.
Bette, Im all over your face., she said, finally placing her right foot on the floor.
Bette stood up and their lips met. Tina tasted herself, and kissed away the remnants of their lovemaking from her lovers caramel flesh. When Bette was all clean, their lips met again and they shared a loving kiss. Tina held Bette tightly and whispered, That was ***** incredible. Im still so swollen. Another great memory.
Bette smiled. Good, now we can go eat.
Tina lifted her eyebrows. You sure? We can always just stay up here and order pizza again.
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(82 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
love the story but there is trouble if bette dont tell tina.
Your scenes are so HOT! I always need to take a long cold shower after I read your stories. I can’t wait what you have in stored for the young lovers. Keep writing…
i have a feeling that even though bette doesnt want to hurt tina anymore she is!! thanks for the post….hope to see another one soon!!
YAY! LOL…you’re story is fantabulous, I love it to pieces.
I was about to say…you can never be so hungry that you stop in the middle of a passionate exchange to have dinner. Sorry but every meal is better after ardent love making. Thank you for saving them from such a mistake. Great chapter. More please!
That was great and a nice treat to return from lunch and find that you have written another chapter.
Wow, I’m like a prune I’ve been taking so many cold showers lol…. that was amazing as always and I can’t wait for more!! =0)
Before I read this, let me say, I will be pissed if the ‘NC-17’ rating is has anything to do with Sidney.
Now, back to the story…
I’m your new reader but I want to tell you that I read all!! of 32 chapters yesterday and I’ve liked this story so much. Actually I wait for the next fragment more than for the next TLW. Greetings! :)
Thank you! Thank you!
Of course, Bette needs to be tied at the waist to Tina to prevent her from doing anything stupid with Sidney.
loving it post soon
MTS, I feel so inadequate when I try to describe just how much I love this story. It’s somehow not enough to say, “Thiiiiiiiis much!” Every time I see you’ve got a new post, I get a little flutter of excitement. The characters are so complete, their feelings so real, their loving so intense, their outlook so age-appropriate, their drama so believable. As for this chapter: oh, my! That Bette’s such a quick study! At least in bed. Definitely going to learn the hard way about keeping secrets and “protecting” people. Tsk tsk. Great writing, great story. Thanks so much for sharing it.
I’m loving your story and you are writing some very hot scenes.
DAMN girl! That was SO hot! LOVE this story.
I love this story! I have never commented before but I felt I needed to tell you how wonderful this story is. Post soon!
hmmm, im hungry now
just wanted to let you know that i love your story…i have always commented but under a different name…
God that was hot.
I need a sexy roommate like Bette when I’m in college *wink* haha.
love it girl.. can’t wait for more.. keep up the awesome story :)
Okay I am now officially caught up. Great chapter so nice to see the girls happy. I have a feeling Bette should tell Tina about the meeting, maybe Sidney is not to be trusted. Again wonderful writing.
Bette should tell Tina because Tina will find out and it will come back to bite bet in the ass. I’m Loving this story!
didn’t know what pleasure trip you were going to take us on….Thanks for the ride!!
yowza……i can’t be reading these stories while I’m still at work! Very nicely done!
They are hot and tender and really sexy. Loving every chapter.
Smokin’ hot!! Fuck the cold shower.
MTS- this story rocks! Question: Is Bette as dumb as a rock? The Magic 8 ball says – most certainly so…oh, no Bette-just a hunch, but this ain’t gonna be good 4 ya..the magic 8 ball never lies..look forward to seeing how this really turns out though….wonderful writing!
hey. Just read all these chapters in one go…i couldn’t stop they were just too addictive. I think ure story and writing is great, and I cant wait fot the next chapter.
Aaaaa ~ you know I just started breathing again (in battling that nasty cold) and there you are taking my breath away! I love the way you write ~ the vivid imagery you conjure in my head places me right there in the moment. Oh, to A your Q…I swear that incident I wrote about was not an autobiography ~ girl scout’s honor!
thumbs up.
Honestly…school is so depriving me of my fanfic world!! Hehe. You are so good!! I need to go take a shower…a COLD one that’s for sure. That scene was AWESOME! It was HOTT!! Thanks again! Can’t for the next chapter, laters!
Finally got caught up on all yuour great chapters. Love this story!!!
That was awesome and hot. I really like it, please post soon. Thank you!
i smellllll trouble…oh-oh
…and i just read it.Oh so HOT.Great writing.Can´t wait the drama continue but i hope tine will understand bette.be back soon.please.