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The Roommates: Chapter 36
Tinas words were met with the sound of labored breathing. She could hear Bette struggling not to cry. Bette, baby, if you dont want to talk, we dont have to. Im just so worried about you.
Bette took a deep breath and exhaled as the tears slipped down the side of her face. She was tired of feeling so weak and emotional. It was so unlike her, but shed felt really powerless and vulnerable this week. She cleared her throat and said, T, this has been a really hard week for me.
Tina wiped at the tears she couldnt see but could still sense. I know, baby. I know. I started this.didnt I?
Its not your fault, T. I just need to get over it., said Bette.
Im so sorry, baby.
I know, T. When you walked out of here and left me, I felt like I couldnt even breathe. It was just likewhen my mom walked out. I was begging her to stay, but she just walked out. I feel like Im a ***** Vietnam war vet. I was reliving everything. I was just crushed. It just hurt so much., as Bette talked, Tina held her hand and drew small circles on the caramel flesh with her thumb.
Bette continued, All day I was walking around missing you and feeling like an idiot for not telling you about meeting Sidney for lunch. Then Id think about my mom and how she walked out. And to top it off, I was going to sit down and meet with someone else Id let down. I was feeling like a total failure.
And then, Sidney was telling me how I didnt think of her feelings and something just totally snapped. I felt this intense feeling of loss. You had just walked out on me and then I flashed back to my mom and how lonely I felt because she walked out of my life. I just felt so lost and alone and everything just rushed at me all at once. The loneliness, the fear, feeling like a failure. Everything just came down on me, T. Im so glad you came to the dining hall the other day. I needed you so much, T. I really thought you were going to end it with me.
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(95 votes, average: 3.92 out of 5)
Peace comes again….but is this just the calm before the storm?
I love this story. sorry i haven’t commented before but i will from now on. I understand you writers need encouragement. So write away MTS. Its one of the best on the boards. Good job! & thank you.
God how I love this story. You are just too good!!
Still lovin it. Onward and upward please!
Your chapters always make me so emotional,I love it. Please continue!
i just found this site last week..so it’s been everyday lunch break starting with ch.1 and i am finally caught up.. it just makes me sad for the bette and tina on the show.. although the last episode was encouraging. i love the story, thanks.
awesome as usual. thanks for this and will be looking for more!
Another emotionally awesome chapter and I can not wait until the next chapter of your wonderfully romantic and brilliant story.
Lovin’ the story baby! Keem em’ comming!
Thanks for another wonderful update. I hope the two weeks go by quickly, for all of our sakes. Don’t keep us waiting.
(sigh of relief) There you are MTS ~ with another excellent installment :) More!
i just love this story…Just when all seems well between the two of them, you masterfully keep it intruiging to keep us on our toes…..Thanks for this story……Awesome:)
Such a cool chapter…tender, thoughtful and mature themes. Loving it.
You continue to amaze me with your writing! I simply can’t get enough!
*Looks around* Am I the only one wondering what creative thoughts Tina’s lower half were inspiring? :P
Once again, MTS, bravo!! I’m glad Tina was able to make Bette feel better. Thanks for the double post, I’ve missed your story the past couple of days!
SPEECHLESS!! Two weeks? Oh my goodness! Fabulous chapter, more please
GREAT JOB PLEASE POST SOON
Wow great chapter. Bette and Tina are so good to each other and loving so much, love it. Post soon, thank you!
Girl, you never cease to amaze with your story. I have to agree with Wayout you have really gotten in depth with your characters which makes the story so much more interesting and enjoyable, as always I love this story. This is my first comment on your on going story but just to let you know I think it is one of the best out there and I always look forward to another great chapter. Keep up the great work girl!***
Oh, for heaven’s sake, is there any point to commenting any more? One chapter is as good as or better than the last and I’m running out of things to say. Okay, here. I love that your characters are so fully drawn. There’s just no skimming the surface here, each character is complex and multifaceted, and their interactions are complete and believable. Good Lord, MTS, I’m just going to have to quit. Because you’re rendering me speechless (and that’s quite an accomplishment!). Oh, golly, thanks for posting. Um, well, I love this story. ‘Nuff said.
Ah…bliss, if this is just the calm before the storm, I’m sure our girls can overcome any storm that’s in the near future;-) Maybe I’m just a hopeless romantic, but I believe love conquers ALL!! Thanks again for this quicky update. Trust me, this story is award worthy!! It kicks major ARSE!! ‘Til next time, much mahalos!
MTS, it’s so much pleasure to read your story! i think it’s because i can feel everything what’s going on between b&t. i don’t know how you do it, but it’s great. and like TiBetteShipper I’ve missed your story the past couple of days! thanks for posting.
oh yeah this is do good. i love this story. but then again i’m a sucker for all B & T beginnings.
PS Thanks for reading and commenting on my story
Awesome you have them in such a tender place thanks
love it…love it…love it…
Thank you Beautiful story Lovin it post soon.
Excellent story, just getting better and better.
loved it!! please post soon!! ur doing a great job!!
i totally love this story. so did tina ever hear back from the doctor? are we sure she’s not preggers? thanks for the story!
*giggles* I’m feeling all mushy mushy inside *giggles*
Two awesome chapters! You really have a great handle on these two. I hope they can figure out a way to be together for summer.