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The Second Chance (18)
"So you weren’t like really ‘there’ when you did all that shit?" Bette said in surprise.
Jenny shook her head, "I was brought here after I tried to kill myself and Shane found me all cut up."
Bette’s eyes widened, "that was three years you were gone!"
Jenny nodded, "I didn’t even recognize myself and I just knew what was the right choice. I mean God gave us this chance for a reason. Sure He wants us to help all the people around us, but He wants us to focus on us."
"I’m not ruining people’s lives though, I’m in a coma in a hospital bed," Bette said. "I think my purpose is to save Tina."
"No, your purpose is the same as mine," Jenny said, "Tina is your life. She’s a person that you love more than you love yourself. Saving her is saving you."
Bette nodded, "but I still wanna save that other Tina."
"You can," Jenny said, "don’t linger. The longer your indecisive the longer Tina’s clinging onto you hoping that you’ll wake up from your coma."
"She won’t move on or find love again," Bette said.
"And Angelica will only have half of her love and time because she’s focusing on trying to wake you up," Jenny said.
"I can’t do that to either of them," Bette said.
"So you just have to make this decision for you and no one else," Jenny said. "The other Tina may need you more than this Tina, but you can’t make this decision for her. Where do you feel happiest?"
"How can I go back to that world where there is no Dana? No you? Where Helena’s a depressive alcoholic, Shane’s a lonely, bitter shell of herself, I have missed two years of my daughter’s life, and Alice is locked up in a prison for a crime she didn’t commit."
Jenny looked surprised, "Alice went to jail?"
"For killing you."
"But she didn’t!" Jenny cried.
"That’s not what they think," Bette said. She sighed, "how could I go back to that world? I would never be happy because they would be miserable and because I would forever long to be back in this world."
"I think your decision is made," Jenny said.
"Then you need to come with me," God’s voice resounded.
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Oh damn this is hard and sad, what Bette gonna do? Please post more, thanks!
talk about a ROCK AND A HARD PLACE.. fuck what a story.. ok your writing and we are reading. bring it on…
well shit that sucks.. will she be in a coma in this life too now or will she wake up right away damn so many questions please dont leave me hangin for too long this story rocks..thanks tb24
oh man! Can’t wait to read your next update on this story. This is so gripping. Thank you for this story.
Nooooooo! I’ve been reading this chapter all morning as i’m at work and now you leave me hanging lol! Bette has gotta stay in this world, please let her be alright.
Oh wow this is so hard. My heart is literally pounding right now. Can’t wait to see what happens
OMG…which life to choose? My heart is pounding hard against my chest.
Great!!! Now she has to choose between two comas? I think I am whiplashed from this story 😝 thanks for the awesome posts buttercup 😘
Please fix this,don`t let Bette die.Thank you for the update.PPS