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The Second Chance (2)
Bette let out a breath of relief and started grilling the chicken and the vegetables. She was about to tell Tina about a compromise when she heard a door outside being swung open and crashing loudly against something.
Bette glanced out the window and Tina got up from her chair.
"Tim!" Jenny cried running out of the shed as Tim stormed off. "Wait! Tim!"
Tim drove off before Jenny could reach him. Bette swallowed a lump in her throat. That was the start of Jenny’s downfall, losing Tim. There was nothing Bette could do for that girl, but maybe she could prolong her life. Maybe avoid that youthful violent death she had and save Alice that jailtime. Jenny’s death was pinned on Alice who was innocent. Bette remembered that she and Tasha used to visit Alice all the time but she still had ten more years to go before being released.
Marina walked out of the shed then like a lioness. She walked to Jenny and touched her shoulder.
"No!" Jenny cried, "get out! This is all your fault!"
"You were a consenting adult Jenny," Marina said looking hurt.
"I love Tim," Jenny cried.
Marina looked like she was about to cry, but she held it in and walked away from her. "You know, not even Franchesca treated me like this," Marina said over her shoulder, "you better make up your mind Jenny."
"Oh man, poor Tim," Tina said softly. "Ever since Tim and Jenny got married and divorced in one day things have been crazy. She’s been flailing back and forth between Tim and Marina like crazy. Yesterday, when you were at work, Jenny had a row with Franchesca. It wasn’t pretty."
Bette turned around and continued stirring the food. Tina looked at her in confusion, "are you crying?"
"No," Bette said cursing inwardly when her voice cracked.
"Yes you are!" Tina said moving to hug Bette from behind, "why baby?"
Bette shook her head as tears fell, "I just feel bad for Jenny." She didn’t realize how much Jenny’s death would affect her until she saw the woman alive again.
"But the other time you were all pissed at her cause she was hurting Tim," Tina said.
"What she did to Tim was horrible but how is it any different than what you did to Eric?" Bette said.
"I didn’t have an affair with you Bette, after that kiss I broke up with him to be with you," Tina said.
"Yeah but what if you had been with him for 5 years?" Bette said, "and engaged to be married? What it be so easy to just break up with him?"
"Well I guess not, but I would find a way to express those conflicting feelings ya know," Tina said.
"Some people are not as good with the skills of communication," Bette said.
"Oh," Tina said glancing at Jenny who had sunk to her knees in the grass sobbing hysterically. "I’ll go talk to her."
Bette smiled and continued cooking as Tina went outside to Jenny.
TBC
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love it ..more please…thanks
A+ You get a gold star! Nice flow!”Psychic Bette” could be cool!! Super Cool! Like Shaft! Like FOXY BROWN – her sista! Keep ’em coming!
I really love this story. I think its so great how Bette is trying to make things better with everyone and not with just her own life. I can’t wait to read more !
wow this is really an interesting version of the L Word ;D
This is so good and love it. Please post more, thanks!
I love this… so much better then what we saw on the show… bette has the power to save them all… can’t wait for more… pps
Bette may just be able to save them all.
Excellent. Please post soon. Love it! Thank you.
Love it.Great storyline.PPS
Super love it. Lay it on me some more please. Thank you xo
Don’t let Angus cheat on Kit!!! We have the power to alter time and space. Awesome buttercup thank you ; )
if you include Angus PLEASE, PLEASE make him look better. I always thought that Kit deserved a better looking man than that. He was too scrany for her.
if you include Angus PLEASE, PLEASE make him look better. I always thought that Kit deserved a better looking man than that. He was too scrany for her.
Wonderful.
Oh this is really good! And i like how Bette tries to make things right this time, thanks 4 giving her a second chance(-;
New. Favorite. Story. Thanks!
Hello girl!! :-) you know, this story is so good!! The flow is flawless and the story is so engaging!! Well done!! And it’s kinda amazing to have Bette being so toughful and considerate, even towards Jenny!!! :-0 I was thinking that you were going to focus on Tibette only, but it looks like you have a grand master plan to restructured and recreate the whole story!! ;-) I am so looking forward to your next update ^^,_v
So much better than the original chaos