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    The Set Up (30) – Final Chapter

    Story written on August 15, 2012 by GrindRight.
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    Final chapter.

    Her parents couldn’t hear what she said out there, but they could read her body language. She was still upset, and slowly, Darnell let the stereo down to the grass, and argued just as passionately with her. They could drive each other into such arguments with their combined stubborn natures, but Darnell seemed to keep much calmer most times – trying to be the voice of reason when he could see just how upset Angelica had really become.

    “Let’s just go inside, Annie. Where we can talk.”

    “No,” she insisted, bringing her hands up to her face. “You just don’t understand …” He was the only person who could make her crazy.

    “I do. I get it now. I just … didn’t want you to leave your family for your job. I don’t want you leaving all that behind. And I’m willing to talk – let’s talk. I’ll do anything for you. You know that.” He just had a way of speaking to her – speaking with more than his words.

    “So you don’t see at all then.”

    “No,” he answered, pulling her in to stumble up with wobbly knees, against him. She held her breath, listening to him as she always did when she was drawn so close. “I won’t let your determination get in the way, so no – I won’t give in that hastily … but I wanna talk to you about it.” His words of wisdom could stun her into silence, sending her frustrating shivers as he combed his hands into her hair and just looked at her. “I know you’re mad, baby. And that’s okay … but you need to listen, too. I care about you.”

    Angelica hated how right he could be. She tried to put on a strong face, but it all melted when he smiled at her.

    “Come on – let’s go for a walk,” she smiled back, knowing it had a similar effect.

    “Oh no – you just wanna get me alone,” Darnell teased, stepping away just as she caught his thicker wrist and pulled him in close. She had a way of commanding his every move when she wanted to, even as strong as he was.

    “Is that so bad?” she chuckled, looking up at him in that challenging way she did best. “I’m still mad, you know.”

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    1. When you love something from the first chapter it only makes it that much sadder when ut has to come to an end. Beautifully written as always GR. Hope to see you back real soon :D

    2. Such an AMAZING Story!!!! Thank you so much for it!!! You wrote it so beautifuly and it was so full of love thankyou!!! Hope to get a new story from you soon.

    3. I really enjoyed this story. I was however thinking that at some point that Angie’s “sperm donor”, was going to make an appearance and try to start trouble for Tina and Bette, and that we would really see how Angie had grown to love Bette, and start to call her Mom or her Mama B. But as it was written, I truly still did love it dearly. Thank You so much. Looking forward to another one of your stories.

    4. Thank for your wonderful story! No drama, no terror, just pure unadulterated love for this amazing family. I appreciate the time and effort that you put forth. Sorry to see this story end but I am sure that there is another masterpiece on your computer to come. Thank you.

    9. Love how this story end with three of them sharing a moment. this is a story all about love and you did a fantastic job as always. Kind of sad it end but still end well, and every story will end eventually. Hope we can see ur next story soon, a girl can hope. Thank you again!

    11. I absolutely loved this story, I was hooked from the very beginning. I’m sad to see it end but I did enjoy the ride. Can’t wait to see what you have next ! Thank you for such an amazing story

    12. Hi there GrindRight! nice ending to a great story, compelling from the first chapter, with characters full of emotions and unforgettable dialogues.I really admire you, I love the way you tell your story, when you want to convey something, you do it with your writing very easy and that is just because you have talent.I can not stand the urge to read a new story of yours.Reading “Fifty shades of Grey”, you’ve read it?, I could not help imagining a version of it with Bette and Tina of course written by you,what do you think? the Fifty shades of Porter.I would die if you do it,but after of read it! hahahaha!

    19. Wow, so sad to see this story go. Please start a new fix soon, as you are one of those unique writers with stories so vivid and rich they seem so real. Excellent fix with a creative ending!

    20. Thank you GR!! I do enjoy reading your story! :-) This will be one of the story which will be re-read in the future :-) the final chapter is simply heart warming and it’s so touching on how Angelica realized on how much Tina took her role from being someone strong to look after her daughter to finally being herself and let Bette be the strong one for her and Angelica :-) so sweet – so lovely :-) thanks again GR!! Appreciate your kindness in sharing your amazing talent with us! will be stick around and waiting for more stories from you ;-)

    22. Thank you for your amazing writing. You have created the perfect story for your characters. I loved every chapter and the way you created Angie’s future. Perfect! I’m sad to see it end but look forward to more incredible stories. Awesome!

    24. Hello GrindRight,How are you? Sorry I’ve been away for such a long time. The intensity of the sex scenes in yourStory got me in trouble. I am just now escaping the arms of someonewho doesn’t belong to me. I’m grateful that I didn’t get caught inEurope. (Mercy), you are most definitely an amazing writing. “The Set Up”, althoughthis literally happened to me while reading your story, I also hate that it’sending. And the moral to the story is this “Always choose Love”. Je t’aime GrindRight!

    27. I really enjoyed this Story and would give five stars for each of the 30 posts – if I had the time :)

      A Sequel would be great with Bette and Tina as Grand moms :)

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