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The Set Up (6)
“You’re her mom. She’s trying to make you proud, that’s all. She’s not hiding anything, I’m sure.”
“… What if you’re wrong? … I think I just feel she’s so responsible … Maybe I don’t ask her enough about what she really thinks. Maybe-”
“Whoa, whoa,” Bette smiled, brushing her fingers over Tina’s bangs, still out of view from the child. “Whoa there. It’s okay. I think it’s great that she wants to talk to me. Right? Isn’t that a good thing that she opened up to us?”
Tina turned her head. “To you.”
“Oh,” Bette started, tilting Tina’s chin so she could look into her eyes. “I’m sure you don’t share everything with her.”
Tina looked down, “I can’t, no.”
“Well, maybe she feels the same way.”
“Where did you come from?” Tina chuckled. “Are you some sort of secret child expert or something? How do you know all of this?”
“I don’t know. Maybe I just remember what it was like as a kid.”
“Oh no. You’re not allowed to have a good memory, too. I get to be better than you at something.”
That had Bette laughing freely before finally calming herself. “You’re more beautiful.” She looked closely at Tina’s face, trying to memorize it as she always did. “So beautiful … I wish you could see it.”
“Uh huh.”
“I bet people fall over themselves when they look at you,” Bette whispered, wondering about Tina’s workplace, when suddenly she realized something. She had never asked Tina about her work. Granted, Tina hadn’t asked her either, but she had no idea what Tina did. What kept her busy each day? “Oh god … I just realized. I haven’t asked you once about your job. I feel terrible. How haven’t we talked about this?”
“I’m used to ignoring the topic,” Tina teased, stopped when she brought the last dishes to the counter with Bette. “What?”
“I’m serious! … I feel like the worst person for not asking you sooner. I’m sure you’re hurt by that …?”
“No, actually,” Tina smiled, licking her finger of the sauce she’d dipped into. “It’s fine, really. I feel like people are often … put off by it when I tell them what I do. Like they try to … avoid me or whatever. I don’t like to talk about work anyway. Work and my life are very, very separate things.”
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(50 votes, average: 4.24 out of 5)
Holy hell! This story is awesome. So much emotion and inner turmoil captured so well. I have a feeling these two aren’t going to last much longer with this game-they’ve escalated too much to keep holding back and then it’s gonna get really good. Please post soon!
Once again another great chapter. I love the flow of it and cant wait for the next chapter!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK…AS ALWAYS !!
I think, if they are going to have a weekend together – it should be…far away…………high up in the mountains some where nobody could hear them!!!! This story might set off a Richter scale! Explosive !(dble post 2nite. pwease)!
Wow! How delightful… another post. Thank you! That was hot, hot, hot! Angie is an amazing kid in that she loves her mom so much and want her to be happy and now that her mom has the opportunity, she is second guessing what she thought she wanted for her mom. How cute! Trust, Angie, trust!
WOW!!! I hope Angie will get used to having Bette around, it is what she wanted for her Mom. When B&T get together it will be highly explosive and very HOT!!! Thank you PPS
That was so awesome and sweet, love it. Can’t wait to see the weeken. Please post more, thanks!
This story is AWESOME!!! Can’t wait for their weekend alone to get here! PPS
OMGR😱 so freaking hot!!!!! Loved that whole scene. I can’t wait for the next post. Thanks GR 😘
They are going to self combust! ;-)
OMG! This story´s fantastic!
Wonderful update. thank you.
HOT.Amazing update,thank you.
Woooo so hot!!!!!!
OMFG! This story is really a pleasure to read and it’s so GOOD on so many levels. Incredibly well written and told! I’m not surprised because i know the writer behind,which is capable of creating unforgettable stories. GR i don’t know how you do it but you always do it! The interaction between Bette Tina and Angie is lovely and i love that Bette take every opportunity she has to touch or kiss Tina. I hope Bette doesn’t have a heart attack with Tina text messages and i can’t wait for Bette to have her way with Tina ha! And people be prepare the hurricane Tibette is coming ha!
OMFG! This story is really a pleasure to read and it’s so GOOD on so many levels. Incredibly well written and told! I’m not surprised because i know the writer behind,which is capable of creating unforgettable stories. GR i don’t know how you do it but you always do it! The interaction between Bette Tina and Angie is lovely and i love that Bette take every opportunity she has to touch or kiss Tina. I hope Bette doesn’t have a heart attack with Tina text messages and i can’t wait for Bette to have her way with Tina ha! And people be prepare the hurricane Tibette is coming ha!
OK, I’m back… it’s the weekend, right?… (drumming fingers on table)
Weekend… so that’s like, tomorrow, right? :-) Really love this story. The pace is great, the characters are perfect, the tone is refreshing. Superb!
Weekend… so that’s like, tomorrow, right? :-) Really love this story. The pace is great, the characters are perfect, the tone is refreshing. Superb!
Damn, GR, you can’t leave us hanging here!!! ;) Love this story, can’t wait for more…
GR.. This is teasing to the extreme… They are teasing each other and you are teasing us… Explosive combo and I would like to echo slntrdr… The weekend starts tonight… So I am waiting ..maybe not so patiently
wow… I love that liltle girl
😱 nooo!!! how come there’s no more!?!? OMG … GR! You really do enjoy torturing us, don’t you?! ;-) super tease!! 😲 *sigh* … I enjoy reading your story! I love the flow, the interaction amongst 3 of them, the gentle or passionate moment between the 2 of them.. And I am in awe on how you wrote those simple actions turn into something so hot and sizzling?!? I think you are partially responsible for the hot weather here :-p haha…I can’t imagine how to survive the hotness of their weekend then?! … :-D I hope you’ll post soon.. Thanks again GR for this heart warming update with a touch of hotness in the end ;-) PPVS?!?
What a great story. Can’t wait for the next chapter!!
Oh My, I had a smile on my face too.