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The Set Up (8)
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“I am asking you that … I wanna know.”
“Just because you’re so cute,” Tina smiled, tracing her fingers down the muscular abdomen before her, “And just because in a minute … I wanna touch you, too.”
“Mmm …”
“No, I don’t just taste myself,” she answered quietly, very carefully watching the stomach flex under her hand. “I … touch myself, but … no. If you must know.”
“Oh I must,” Bette moaned, lowering her lips. “I just get so … it makes me hot, thinking about you … trying to touch yourself because you feel like you have to … when I’m right here … willing to do it all for you.”
“You’re terrible,” Tina smiled, pretending to push Bette off when she got close again. “Bette …”
“Do you … put your fingers inside?”
“Bette …” she started again, getting incredibly excited. She liked when Bette spoke such naughty things to her, expecting her to respond with unabashed honesty. It was so bad that it was thrilling.
Bette could read her excitement, so she kept on: “Because I bet I can get mine a little deeper … couldn’t I?”
“Bette … this is bad …” Tina moaned, accepting the kiss that finally met her lips. At first it was simple and cautious, but as Tina became more excited, she invited Bette’s tongue into her mouth. She threw her arms around Bette’s neck, and they were making out together, Bette’s hands keeping Tina right where she wanted her.
“B … I like that,” Tina moaned, feeling spoiled with Bette’s kisses all over her neck again. She eagerly spread her legs when Bette’s hand found its way between them again. She desperately wanted them inside of her, unconcerned at last with all the details. “Are you gonna make me cum …?”
Bette groaned into her ear, feeling Tina all over her fingers. “You … are driving me crazy … when you talk like that …”
“I’m so wet for you …” Tina moaned again, relaxing when Bette’s finger gently circled her entrance. She was going to beg Bette to just do it, but then she realized that she didn’t want that. This was not under her control – for once, her own climax was not under her control. Her hands gently found Bette’s shoulders.
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if there was a 10 point rating this would be a 10… thats why me and most of the other writers disable the stars… anyway… loved this chapter… and bette does have to get tin a talking about her ex… he did a lot of anage to her… but i’m sure bette will fix… so the night is still young, let them eat and then get them back to bed… :)… pps
*thud* … It’s so sweet sexy loving amazing chapter! I love the way you describe each turmoil of their struggle, and how deep is their connection! The beautiful thing is how honest you wrote about Tina’s new experience and how Bette is fighting her own tears and in the end it is so so beautiful as they have more understanding of themselves and also each other. And what is that about one star?! Whoever give that rating is not understand the rating system properly I guess! (duh!) anyway GR.. Thank you so much for the amazing chapter and wonderful story, I am so looking forward to your next update ;-)
So much excitement and their thoughts reflected that. Was their anything else on Bette’s mind besides love, that had her cleaning Tina’s bedroom? Thank you GR 😘
This was a most wonderfully sweet and loving chapter. It showed that even though Tina was a bit green about the process she hung in there for the woman she loves and tried to do any and everything that would make their experience together as loving as it could possibly be. Brava Tina!!! And she learned how to please her love and discovered the wonder of loving a woman and making love to someone that she truly loves, as opposed to having sex with someone as a duty. They are becoming so easy with each other and that is great. Even Bette discovered the joys and the deep level of intimacy in makng love to the person that you are truly in love with. Thanks for sharing.
Wooooow. That was… amazing. I love this Bette and Tina. And I love how emotional Bette is, they both need each other and it’s beautiful.
Beautiful chapter! Can we have more please?!
That was just absolutely wonderful. Thank you for this story.
i’m speechless,i never thought i would read something so so BEAUTIFUL and i must confess that after reading the chapter i felt bad because i realized that underestimate the story,so i apologize to GR for that.I am very moved by how you wrote the emotions,desires and fears of Bette and Tina and how they can see or feel what happens to the other with only a gesture or a look and the way they care for each other is really beautiful.I like how Tina used her mother’s side to comfort Bette,to make her feel better.For me this is undeniably one of the best chapter i’ve read so far and i’m really grateful that this site exists and that incredibly talented people like GR take the time to share their stories with us. THANK YOU
Fantastic GR really just wow!
If you don’t like the story don’t read it but to give few or a solitary star is ridiculous. Stars should be based on the quality of the story not if you like it. There are stories on this site that are well written but I don’t care for the approach or the story line. Therefore, I don’t read anymore or don’t vote.
Oh shit that was fucking hot and sweet, love itt. Please post more, thanks!
What jp22,kins40,teegirl,AmandaMG,Dainty and bumsue said.
Wow. One star, huh? I haven’t even read this chapter past the author’s notes yet, but I think I have a pretty good idea of what goes on at times with the ratings, specific to your posts. I’ll read and then come back with a comment on the chapter.
Yeah… This chapter was not exactly a one-star affair. To whoever the low rater/s is/are, just speak up already. Honest, CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is never a bad thing. Besides, we *are* all adults here, right? To GrindRight, just do your thing, there is certainly room for it all here. To each her (or his) own.
By the time I read this post, it had already been given 4 stars but considering Jp22’s post, I honestly can’t see why this would be rated with only one star. I personally enjoyed it, actually I enjoy all of your work lol. I love how these two are able to be so playful together even at the most intimate times. They can so easily make each other comfortable and cure any insecurities. I believe you achieved everything you were aiming for GR, thank you for sharing
sooooo hhhhhhooooootttt wow thank you for the update it was nice!!!
I am arriving post war… It seems but if jp22’s comment is anything to go by I think there are people here who should have a wee bit more honesty instead of hiding behind an anonymous star rating! This was a perfectly crafted scene, one which could easily fit in the ‘how to’ category, it was sweet, sexy, serious …. They had a good time…. Hell… I had a good time and I thank you very much GR for this chapter (you are still a tease but!) and for this story. You are the mistress ;-) of your inimitable style and we love you for it! x K
Oh, GR, what are you doing to me? Sweet, sexy, and exciting. My heart was beating hard against my chest with the anticipation. Your descriptions were terrific.
What kins40 said: sweet and sexy!
I’m really enjoying this story. I love how realistic this love scene is. This is Tina’s first time with a woman and you captured her excitement mixed with anxiety perfectly. It is so sweet how Tina is able to soothe Bette’s fears about the intensity of her feelings for Tina. They are so sweet together. Thanks for posting!
Forget the star rating… I loved the way you wrote this chapter, honestly from the heart of two beautiful women just beginning the dance of intimacy with one another. It was raw, honest, heartfelt and such a pleasure to enjoy being there with them as they walked the path together of this new discover y for both of them of falling in love with the right one. Thank you for the tenderness of this story and for all the emotions that I feel when I read it. I appreciate you GrindRight and the way you write. Thanks for the post!
Amazing Chapter!!! I like that it was a frist for both Bette and Tina. Tina frist with a woman and Bette’s frist with the woman she loves. Great story!!! Thank you PPS
GrindRight, can I ask you a question out of curiosity? What’s your native language? Is it French or any other Latin language? Sometimes your texts give me the impression it is French!Anyway, nice update! =]