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‘Sorry’ Bette said. ‘I guess that’s someone’s way of telling us another time?’ she followed it with a small laugh.
‘I think it’s best if I head out first. I think we’ve been gone for a while.’ Tina said, at first not meeting Bette’s eyes. As she looked up, Bette saw the familiar twinkle that she had come to know as her cheeky look. Tina beamed at her. ‘What I meant to say was, give me this evening and I can arrange a time when Eric isn’t around.’
Bette’s heart dropped. ‘Wait, T, you’re still going to carry on seeing him?’ She realised in the instant the words left her lips how naive that sounded. They weren’t dating, they weren’t anything, not yet anyway. ‘Sorry, stupid thing for me to say. Ignore that.’ Bette creased her eyes shut and turned to search for her bag. ‘Give me a call sometime, or a text’ With her back to Tina, she chastised herself again. Way to play it casual Bette you idiot!
Her breath caught as she felt Tina’s hands slide around her waist. Tina slowly turned her round so Bette was facing her making eye contact with intensity like no other.
‘I like it when you call me that. How about you come over to mine for dinner tomorrow?’ She smiled at Bette. She may has well have just invited her to the moon and back and Bette would have agreed.
‘Sure, sounds great, T.’ Bette nodded. Her chest felt tight like she couldn’t move. She cupped Tina’s face in her hands and leaned down to place a soft kiss on her lips. It took all Bette’s strength to pull back as she ran her hands down Tina’s arms. ‘Let me know a time and your address and I’ll be there.’ The biggest smile spread across Bette’s mouth as Tina smiled back.
Bette watched as Tina turned away and slipped out of the door back to the party. She watched her as she had done numerous times before but this time, knowing what it was like to grab that ass! Bette exhaled loudly, span around and bent at the waist trying to catch her breath, not really sure whether she was able to believe what had just happened. She jumped as she heard the door open, its hinges creaking.
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Great start!! PPS
Oh – wow!!! Great start. Please post soon!!!
amazing please contined i like it thank you moooorrreeee please!!!
great one pps
Are you sure this is your first fanfic because that was pretty good and hot. Bring on the dinner.
Are you sure this is your first fanfic because that was pretty good and hot. Bring on the dinner.
you should definitely continue. don’t stop
Wow! I am impressed with setting and storyline… Tina being a bit more alpha. Liking your beginning and so hoping that you continue with a long, frequently posted story. Thank you!
Wonderful start. Thank you and waiting to read more.
The body is very well written. The subject, well I’m a skeptic when it comes to people in relationships who window shop. I hope Bette does the right thing and not let her other body parts think for her. Go easy on her, great start. Thank you 😘
Awesome start please keep it going!!!
Wow that was such an amazing start. Please keep going, I love it !
You got me really interested! Great start!
Great start :) PPS!!!
Please continue, you are a good writer
Great start.Bette is really in trouble.PPS
Good start, like it!
When I started my first fan fic in no way was ut written this good. So be proud of yourself for what you’ve accomplished. And just so you know I think your readers already want more. Including me.