Fan Fiction
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The start
‘I just want it to be somewhere I can truly… have you…’ Bette’s lips against Tina’s not ready to break contact. She trailed off. Tina’s arms were still around the brunette’s neck and she kept her eye contact.
‘I get it..’ Tina whispered and pulled back.
‘T’ the desire not gone from Bette’s voice ‘I don’t want to let go. When can I see you?’ She leant her forehead to Tina’s as she felt the blonde lift her hand to the side of her face, her thumb stroking Bette’s jaw line.
‘Umm.. I don’t know, to be honest I didn’t expect this.’ She dropped her hand and Bette’s face fell. She could feel Tina pulling away as she extricated herself from Bette’s arms.
Bette stepped back, shoving her hands in her pockets. The thud of the party next door surrounded them and she waited, not knowing what to do.
‘I should go.’ Bette said, unable to meet Tina’s eyes. She made to move past her, to open the door they’d just been pressed against. ‘Sorry’ Bette mumbled as she reached for the handle. As her palm felt the cool brass Tina covered the back of her hand.
‘Bette’ she whispered. It was only a whisper but it froze the brunette in her tracks. Shivers running up and down her spine as her heart felt like it was pounding so hard that it would explode out of her chest. How does she have this much hold on me? She glanced in Tina’s direction and finally met her gaze. She looked back at her and held it.
‘I don’t regret this, I want you’ and with that she moved both hands to either side of Bette’s face and kissed her again. The instant their lips touched, there was a spark. They both felt it as they moaned into each other’s mouths. Once again, Bette pulled her close, wrapping her arms around Tina’s waist. This time, Tina pushed Bette up against the door and enjoyed the groan from Bette as she slid a leg in between hers and brushed against her aching centre.
BBBBRRRRIIIINNNNGGG… BBBBRRRRRIIINNNNGGG
Bette pulled back from her as she felt her phone vibrate in her back pocket. Her hand clutched to it to try and switch it off hating the intrusion. She glanced at the caller to see Alice calling. God I would kill her later! I cancelled the call and looked up as Tina was picking up her handbag from the floor.
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(31 votes, average: 4.19 out of 5)
Great start!! PPS
Oh – wow!!! Great start. Please post soon!!!
amazing please contined i like it thank you moooorrreeee please!!!
great one pps
Are you sure this is your first fanfic because that was pretty good and hot. Bring on the dinner.
Are you sure this is your first fanfic because that was pretty good and hot. Bring on the dinner.
you should definitely continue. don’t stop
Wow! I am impressed with setting and storyline… Tina being a bit more alpha. Liking your beginning and so hoping that you continue with a long, frequently posted story. Thank you!
Wonderful start. Thank you and waiting to read more.
The body is very well written. The subject, well I’m a skeptic when it comes to people in relationships who window shop. I hope Bette does the right thing and not let her other body parts think for her. Go easy on her, great start. Thank you 😘
Awesome start please keep it going!!!
Wow that was such an amazing start. Please keep going, I love it !
You got me really interested! Great start!
Great start :) PPS!!!
Please continue, you are a good writer
Great start.Bette is really in trouble.PPS
Good start, like it!
When I started my first fan fic in no way was ut written this good. So be proud of yourself for what you’ve accomplished. And just so you know I think your readers already want more. Including me.