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    The Telling

    Story written on November 4, 2004 by Gaymo.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=50157
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    Set post-Season 1, Tina returns to the house to collect some clothing. Bette is desperate to make Tina stay but things don’t quite go as planned.

    I grabbed at the waistband of her skirt, reaching around her to find the zipper, my fingers fumbling uncharacteristically as I tried to unclasp the metal hook at the top.  Her own hands were at my back, tugging the tank top up towards my chest, trying to remove it in haste and passion as she laid her hands on my body, her fingers pressing indentations into my skin as she touched metouched me and caressed me and drove my senses into a blurring heady mixture of urgency and the desire to make this last forever.

    Pushing me back firmly, she grasped my tank top and pulled it up, literally ripping it over my head.  As my hair fell free and whispered against my naked shoulders, she tossed the garment to one side and reached back for my bra.  Her hurried fingers on my skin only increased my need to see her naked, to have her skin against mind and lose myself in the curves I had traced a thousand times.  It felt as though we were moving too fast, and yet not fast enough.  There was a primal fervor to what we were doing, echoing the last time we had been together; this time was different, though.  I felt it in every move her body made towards me, in every quickened breath that came from her lips.  We fell together, against one another, bending like reeds in the whirlwind that surrounded us, desperately grabbing at hair, skin, flesh on flesh finally as she discarded her top.

    I hadn’t forgotten how she knew me, how her hands held the sense memory of my body and trailed desire across my belly as she reached for the fastening on my pants, leaving fire in the wake of her touch.  She fell to her knees in front of me, almost ripping my zipper apart so that she could feast on my skin.  My legs weakened as I trembled under her mouth, the heat of her lips winding a pathway of want that liquefied between my legs and flooded my body with ice-fire.  I almost fell as I stumbled and tried desperately to keep upright, my hands winding themselves into her hair and pulling her up against me once more so I could savor her mouth.  The kiss was hard, forceful, exciting; she was strong again and she wanted me to know it.  I thrilled to it, colors of passion tinged around the edges with fear, fading to white heat as she undressed me and laid me bare in front of her.

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    4. You have a great handle on the way words flow and an excellent vocabulary. The sentences take on a languid quality which reflects Bette’s inertia very well. Perhaps dividing this into chapters would make it easier for those of us with short attention spans.

    10. Does the end mean the end or TBC. That was womderful,well written. Letting us know that Tina still loves Bette,but can’t be with her because of all the hurt. Thanks

    12. This is extraordinary. I loved it the first time I read it and have been longing for a next chapter ever since. Please follow this up with something–ANYTHING!

    14. This was incredible. As I was reading, I kept thinking that this can only end badly, but I couldn’t stop from reading it anyway…one hand periodically hitting the down arrow button on my keyboard, the other clenching the arm of my chair. Thanks!

    15. WoW! The flow was great, the vivid imagery was very well used and the internal thoughts are well written, graciously weaved into the whole story. Articulate and clear language. Very well done. Like JB said, sex can be a lot of things, it can be about power, reconnection, and other things… and yours have been graciously and beautifully written to reflect as reconnecting as well as asking for forgiveness.

    17. This is sooooooo good, Gaymo. And I know the American went back home so you should have plenty of time to write more for us. Put the Bailey’s down and get busy.

    18. holy hootin’ hell! That was AMAZING! you capture their pain and just, wow, just that’s crazy good. I’m floored really, so glad to read some quality BT emotional storytelling. I hope this isn’t the end for this story!!

    19. oh my goodness, you made me cry. you write very visually i can just see bette’s heart breaking… who is on the phone? will you please write a part 2? you’re really doing a wonderful job

    22. I’m never writing again. I swear to god. Anything I could come up with would be like lining up a hand tracing that became a turkey with a New York Times best-seller. :D To say this was incredible would be an insult. I still feel the ache in my chest. Please, for the love of all that is good and holy, please write more. Soon. Now? :P 5 stars!!

    23. Hahah cramit! i was thinking the same thing.. right now i feel like i couldnt write anymore… All i want to do is wait for the next chapter… :D Gaymo please write soon… dont let your Portard family down!

    28. Oh my god!
      How great is that story, it moved me so much with your expression and use of words, ( i even shed a few tears) you are truely a great writter, keep up the good work.xxx

    29. Just wanted to reiterate my desperate need for you to continue this story. The ache while reading this……it’s still unbelievable. Your writing is amazing. Please, please continue this. :)

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