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The Telling
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"***** me," she demanded, her voice raw with hunger. "***** me, baby…please…***** me…"
Dizzy with her pleas, drunk on the way she felt against my hand, I leaned down to taste her mouth with mine, kissing her deeply as she curved her fingers into claws, raking them down my back. Throwing my head back, I let out a cry of glorious pain as I slid my fingers up and down between her legs, slipping inside her hole but never all the way. All the way would be too much and I wanted to make this last, the painful pleasure of touching her like this.
Moving down her body again, I positioned myself between her legs and crouched on the bed as her legs spread wide, exposing her dampened thighs and glistening lips. The second my tongue slid over her lust-soaked clitoris, she cried out and pushed against my mouth. My fingers slid up and inside her, all the way this time, the inner walls of her ***** clenching around them as I circled her clitoris with the tip of my tongue before sucking it entirely into my mouth. Her scent surrounded me, her taste intoxicated me like a fine wine and I lost myself in her. The bittersweet delicacy of her only increased my hunger and I felt as though I would never be satiated. I began moving at an increased pace, slipping in and out of her slickness as she covered me with her fervor, hips moving up and down as she writhed beneath my mouth. I could tell from her breathing that she was close; a part of me wanted so desperately to bring her to climax and finish what we had started. But how could I? How could I end this and plunge into the unknown?
Feeling my doubt, she called out my name and pressed her fingers against my head, pushing me ever further against her body. The gasping breath that carried my name with it reached my ears and tingled down my spine. Opening my mouth, I scraped my teeth over the tip of her clitoris and rejoiced in the cry of wanton pleasure that escaped her lips before she called my name again. My fingers sunk in deeper, curling around and finding the fleshy mound that received my touch gratefully. She opened her legs wider, planting her feet on the bed and thrusting upwards into my face and hand as I threatened to never stop caressing her like this, only sinking in deeper to what she was offering me.
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gaymo, your writing is exceptional. Great job!
Gaymo, very nice, as good as the first time but where is part 2. Don’t tease its not kind :0. Who is on the cell phone?
Whao, that was great, no worries about bruising, because that was phenomenal. Well written, you should continue.
You have a great handle on the way words flow and an excellent vocabulary. The sentences take on a languid quality which reflects Bette’s inertia very well. Perhaps dividing this into chapters would make it easier for those of us with short attention spans.
Five stars and two cold showers (at least). That was HOT, gaymo, and beautifully written.
Wow! This is excellent writing! I wish i could write as beautiful as this!!! Keep em coming please..
I can’t remember where I’ve read this before………but, that’s not important…….I just want more……please! ;D 5-stars
incredible writing. i don’t think you need to worry about bruising when you write like this. fantastic, please write more. thanks! :)
Gaymo..this is absolutely great…more soon….and i love the name..”You big gaymo…” hehehehe
Does the end mean the end or TBC. That was womderful,well written. Letting us know that Tina still loves Bette,but can’t be with her because of all the hurt. Thanks
amazingly written, well done!
This is extraordinary. I loved it the first time I read it and have been longing for a next chapter ever since. Please follow this up with something–ANYTHING!
Gaymo, that was some excellent storytelling. Man…pick me up off of the floor!
This was incredible. As I was reading, I kept thinking that this can only end badly, but I couldn’t stop from reading it anyway…one hand periodically hitting the down arrow button on my keyboard, the other clenching the arm of my chair. Thanks!
WoW! The flow was great, the vivid imagery was very well used and the internal thoughts are well written, graciously weaved into the whole story. Articulate and clear language. Very well done. Like JB said, sex can be a lot of things, it can be about power, reconnection, and other things… and yours have been graciously and beautifully written to reflect as reconnecting as well as asking for forgiveness.
wow. totally impressive writing!!!!
This is sooooooo good, Gaymo. And I know the American went back home so you should have plenty of time to write more for us. Put the Bailey’s down and get busy.
holy hootin’ hell! That was AMAZING! you capture their pain and just, wow, just that’s crazy good. I’m floored really, so glad to read some quality BT emotional storytelling. I hope this isn’t the end for this story!!
oh my goodness, you made me cry. you write very visually i can just see bette’s heart breaking… who is on the phone? will you please write a part 2? you’re really doing a wonderful job
Please let it be Tina on the phone. Just asking for some more time. Anything to ease this ache. You are sooooo good at this, gaymo!!
Absolutely wonderful writing – you capture the conflict of continuing love with the pain of betrayal so wonderfully. Exceptional
I’m never writing again. I swear to god. Anything I could come up with would be like lining up a hand tracing that became a turkey with a New York Times best-seller. :D To say this was incredible would be an insult. I still feel the ache in my chest. Please, for the love of all that is good and holy, please write more. Soon. Now? :P 5 stars!!
Hahah cramit! i was thinking the same thing.. right now i feel like i couldnt write anymore… All i want to do is wait for the next chapter… :D Gaymo please write soon… dont let your Portard family down!
Exceptionally well written.
That was incredible. Again i say, I don’t know how you guys do it.
I just don’t know what else to say. That was just great!!
Could you please use your wonderful literary and writing talent for good…and put them back together? Your story has moved me to tears.
wow!
Oh my god!
How great is that story, it moved me so much with your expression and use of words, ( i even shed a few tears) you are truely a great writter, keep up the good work.xxx
Just wanted to reiterate my desperate need for you to continue this story. The ache while reading this……it’s still unbelievable. Your writing is amazing. Please, please continue this. :)
that was amazing, seriously. amazing. thank you