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The very first time – chapter 8
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Someone next door was walking slowly along the wooden fence, careful not to make any noise. Flaming eyes watched as Bette and Tina made love in the pool for the second time.
«Bitch», the person thought, anger rising. The two women kissed and played like they didn’t have a care in the world, but if they only knew… Pictures were snapped again through a hole in the wood, capturing Bette and Tina once more in a compromising situation.
«I’ll get you fucking bitch… You maybe smiling and laughing now, but wait until I get my hands on you… You’ll be screaming for your life, I swear».
Without being seen, the person walked back into the empty house… Well, not really empty since the body of the realtor was lying face down on the carpet. «Good-bye Jane, I guess you won’t be selling houses anymore». After a sinister laugh, the murderer left, closing the front door really quietly…
It was late when Bette came back to her house after driving Tina home. She had just pulled into her street when she noticed several police cars parked in front of the empty house next door. Bette saw in horror the yellow tapes that police used in crime scene. A shiver went through her body…
She pulled into her driveway and quickly, an officer ran up to her. «Ma’am, is this your house ?». he asked.
«Yeah… What’s going on?»
«Can you please come with me ?». He opened the door for her and took her arm. Bette followed him and he took her to the detective in charge of the scene. «Detective, this lady here lives next door», he simply stated to a tall man with glasses. The detective looked at Bette and extended his hand.
«I’m Detective Wilson and you are ?»
Bette shook his hand. «Bette Porter. Can you please tell me what happened ? I’m very worried here…»
«The realtor who was in charge of selling this house had been found dead just a few hours ago». Bette gasped in horror when she heard the news. «Were you by any chance home between two and five this afternoon?», the detective asked, ready to take notes.
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Ok seriously freaky! You are definitely keeping me on the edge of my seat. Fantastic chapter!
Interesting direction the story is taking but scary too, I don’t know how they will cope with this new situation? They should catch that bitch and interrogate her. Thanks for the up date dear.
too good ..keep them coming and i will be glad to keep reading… i love how this is going..please post soon
Great Chapter!!!! Can not wait to see what happens next. Thank you PPVS
The mystery of the stalker. So we know now that someone is after Tina. Bet they got close enough to take picture of them both. Bette needs to be as careful as Tina now. Thanks
hey, I just caught up with the rest of the story. I can’t believe I’ve missed the chapters. This is very interesting, I’m hooked. PPMS
Not sure that it is Claire because that would be tooo easy. I am scared for Bette and Tina though. Poor Tina getting suspended because of her affair with Bette.
OMG that is scary and claire is crazy and hope the cops will catch her soon. Please don’t let anything happen to B&T. Please post more, thanks!
How scary is that. Claire is seriously crazy and very dangerous, hopefully they catch her really quickly. Great story. PPS
No way… this is so good love a good mystery… poor tina being suspended, but if she did everything by the book with bette’s case then there should be no grounds for it… tangle webs :) PPS
This just keeps getting better! PPS!!
HEY ML, Wow Wee!!! That was awesome. Please post soon as I can’t wait to find out what happens nest. Godd thing is that Bette and Tina are together with policemen outside. Interesting take. Shame that Tina was suspended after this twisted freak sent her boss the letter with pictures. Scary! Sitting here waiting for your next post. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.