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The very first time – chapter 8
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«Yes… Yes, I was. I spent the day here with a friend». The detective seemed even more interested in Bette knowing she could be a potential witness. «Did you or your friend hear or see anything out of the ordinary?»
Bette thought for a few seconds, then she shook her head. «No, I’m sorry, we didn’t… I knew the house was empty so if I had noticed anything strange, I would have taken a closer look»
«It’s a good thing you didn’t or you could have been in danger yourself. Well, thanks for your time and if you remember anything, please give me a call», the detective said, handing his card to Bette.
Still in a daze, Bette walked up to her house and went inside. She locked her door and shivered when she realised that someone had been murdered while Tina and she were making out in the pool.
Bette collapsed on the couch. Oh my God, did the murderer see them in the backyard ? What if he thinks they know something ? Will he come after her or Tina? At least, he had no idea where Tina lived… Good one Bette, he can’t kill Tina, but he may come after you… Bette jumped when she heard a knock on the door. It was detective Wilson.
«I’m sorry if I scared you», he said, noticing how pale Bette was. «I just wanted to tell you that I’ll leave two men outside the house for tonight to ensure your protection».
Bette gave him a weak smile. «Thanks, that’s very kind of you»
«For what it’s worth, he’s probably long gone by now…», he told Bette, trying to reassure her.
«I’m sure he is too…», Bette replied, not sure about that at all. She closed the door and made sure all her windows were locked. She went to her bedroom, still trying to decide if she should call Tina or not and tell her about the murder.
She began dialling Tina’s number, then hung up. No need to worry her until she knew for sure what really happened. Without undressing, she collapsed on the bed and stared at the ceiling. She closed her eyes and soon, sleep caught up with her.
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Ok seriously freaky! You are definitely keeping me on the edge of my seat. Fantastic chapter!
Interesting direction the story is taking but scary too, I don’t know how they will cope with this new situation? They should catch that bitch and interrogate her. Thanks for the up date dear.
too good ..keep them coming and i will be glad to keep reading… i love how this is going..please post soon
Great Chapter!!!! Can not wait to see what happens next. Thank you PPVS
The mystery of the stalker. So we know now that someone is after Tina. Bet they got close enough to take picture of them both. Bette needs to be as careful as Tina now. Thanks
hey, I just caught up with the rest of the story. I can’t believe I’ve missed the chapters. This is very interesting, I’m hooked. PPMS
Not sure that it is Claire because that would be tooo easy. I am scared for Bette and Tina though. Poor Tina getting suspended because of her affair with Bette.
OMG that is scary and claire is crazy and hope the cops will catch her soon. Please don’t let anything happen to B&T. Please post more, thanks!
How scary is that. Claire is seriously crazy and very dangerous, hopefully they catch her really quickly. Great story. PPS
No way… this is so good love a good mystery… poor tina being suspended, but if she did everything by the book with bette’s case then there should be no grounds for it… tangle webs :) PPS
This just keeps getting better! PPS!!
HEY ML, Wow Wee!!! That was awesome. Please post soon as I can’t wait to find out what happens nest. Godd thing is that Bette and Tina are together with policemen outside. Interesting take. Shame that Tina was suspended after this twisted freak sent her boss the letter with pictures. Scary! Sitting here waiting for your next post. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.