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The Wedding 32
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Bette unfastened her seatbelt but was stopped by Shane sticking out an arm before she could get out of the truck.
"Wait….I don’t think we should go rushing in there"
"Are you kidding? Henry’s going into Tina’s sister’s apartment, T could be in there! I’m not just gonna sit around outside!"
"And what if she’s not here? I think we need to wait for him to come out and then we can go speak to the sister" Shane rationalised
"But…"
"Trust me on this one Bette. If we go rushing in there they could get all defensive. And we can’t let them know we’re onto them"
"I hate it when you’re right"
"It’s why you brought me along"
"Fine, we’ll wait" Bette relented "But don’t expect me to be patient about it"
Shane chuckled "I would never expect you to be patient about anything"
True to her word, Bette managed to keep herself in the truck for the duration of Henry’s visit to Tina’s sister. About half an hour later he exited the building, and Bette turned to Shane.
"Do we follow him or speak to her?"
"It’s your call Bette"
"I think….we should talk to her. She’s got to be involved somehow" Bette decided.
"Ok, well let’s give it a few minutes to try and make it look less like we’ve been following him" Shane suggested.
They did as Shane suggested and waited ten minutes before getting out of the truck. They walked briskly down the road to the apartment block and inspected the mailboxes in the open foyer.
"There it is, C Kennard apartment 2-F" Bette pointed out.
"Let’s go"
They headed for the stairs and made their way to the second floor.
"What do I say to her?" Bette asked, growing nervous.
"Just ask her about Tina. But I probably wouldn’t admit to being her girlfriend"
"Ok, I’ll say I’m Dana"
"Good idea. And if you get stuck I’ll take over ok?"
"Thanks Shane"
Upon reaching the door marked 2-F, the two women paused before Bette rang the bell. A few moments later the door was opened by a woman who was clearly an older version of Tina.
"Yes?" she asked them.
"Charlotte Kennard?" Bette spoke.
"Who’s asking?"
"We’re friends of your sister’s. I don’t know if you heard but she’s missing" Bette tried to keep her voice soft so as not to disturb Charlotte.
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And it gets better! *claps* Dad?!? Really now? That is just sick. You’re a parent and you should put your daughter’s happiness first. This is getting more interesting and I am loving every bit of it. Good job, BB! I take my hat off to you.
Dad? OMFG! I can’t believe that dear old Dad, slime ball sister, and piece of shit Henry are in on this..amazing writing BB..you ARE the best!!;)
Bows to ur amazing writng. U got me there lol. Realy thought it was her mom. brill cant wait for the next instalment. Still waitin for the girls lol. :)
I see what you’re doing here, BB. I’m onto you. You want to leave me breathless and vulnerable so you can have your way with me. Even though I don’t mind this tactic in the slightest, I’ll have you know that it’s not necessary. Saying this actually is quite counterproductive, as I love you having your way with me. Anyway – I love the way your scheming mind works! I always admire intelligence and rationality in a woman. You know, if I were Tina, I would say that I believed them alright and that I’d been wrong and led astray, just to get them off her back. If Tina’s Dad is doing this all by himself, maybe Tina should say she has got her montly period and is in need of the most obvious in-your-face tampons ever. Just to embarrass him in the supermarket. Thanks for the second update! Love x
I love how complicated it’s getting. Bette and Shane=Nancy Drew and Friend.
DAD?! Wow, it gets better and better! Please post soon…I’m on the edge of my seat.
Shows you the old adage! You can choose your friends but not your family! Love your story! There is comeuppance on the way I feel!:0)
I’m in no position to tell you what to do with your story. It’s yours and you do whatever works for you. But I noticed that the dickhead for a father Tina has, is planning something. Can I request something? If any of your next chapters involves any… rape kind of things can you please write it in your author’s note? It’s something that we can’t read. It brings home a lot of ugly memories. By the way, thanks for sharing. Amazing as always. Liz and I stop played football when I was 18 and went away for studies and Liz was 16 and her best friend (me) wasn’t there. Does your soon to be wife play? We could have a little fan at the field the four of us before we burn the sheets! ;) Thank you for the double post. Kisses
Too bad the TSA won’t let you pack brass knuckles any more :) Just catching back up, BB! I’ll just sit back and enjoy the ride – I hope both T & B get some butt kicking in :D
OMG, the father, sister, and dickhead henry. My god, poor Tina doesn’t have a damned chance in hell. The girls have got to get their thing together and find her location. This is about to get ugly and so very serious I’m afraid. Hope they find her soon. I know you won’t let us down. Thanks for posting.
OH MY GOD! Now we have a “dad” in the story! Who would have thought?! At least we know Tina is completely safe. =]
Yeah I thought daddy dearest would make an appearance eventually.. this is very therapeutic. I´m slowly beginning to appreciate my own homophobic family. Now bring on the “reformed” motherfigure, who probably had to go through a special cleansing after having been to Bettes house. However this ends, Bette needs to vent out her anger – I think you should let her! Thanks for posting.
Loving every chapter, I think Tina should just agree to whatever will help set her free from her sorry excuse of a family grrrr. PPS
LOL! Now why did I have the feeling that dear old Dad was involved with these shenanigans? I do love that you threw me off track with the Tina’s sister. You’re quite the little trickster.
DAD? Sick man.Thank you for the update.
DAD???!!! WTF???!! OMG Tina has the WORST family EVER…
You are a great writer i love your story!
Wha…?! Dad!! Whew really good twist here BB! :-) cant wait to see where are you going to take us….