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The Wedding 33
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Tina sat on the edge of the bed that she had been sleeping in for the past week. Much as it was comfortable, it was nothing compared to Bette’s bed. Or more accurately, her and Bette’s bed. Her whole body felt heavy, as though the emotional strain was weighing on her physically. The days of preaching and attempted interventions were taking their toll on her, but despite the constant pressure, she had never once wavered in her convictions. She loved Bette, and no amount of Bible verses or scare tactics could change that.
She sighed as she heard the door to the room being unlocked. She could only look up and glare at the figure who stepped through the door.
"I’ve brought you some dinner"
"So I can’t even be trusted to eat at the table like a human being?" Tina retorted.
"Not after your little attempt at running away after your therapy session today"
"Therapy?!" Tina scoffed "More like attempted brainwashing"
"So I see you still haven’t seen the light then"
"You can have your little preacher lecture me day in, day out, it won’t change who I am"
"Maybe I’ll have to try a different tactic then"
"Like what?"
"You’ll see"
"Why are you doing this Dad?"
"I’ve told you this Christina. You’re sick, and I’m keeping you here until you get better"
"And I’ve told you there’s nothing wrong with me! If anything, you’re the one who’s ill. All that hatred inside you….it’ll eat you up until one day you find yourself a lonely old man. Hey, maybe that day isn’t so far away after all"
"I suggest you watch your mouth young lady and remember who you’re talking to" Tina’s father sneered.
"Oh I know exactly who I’m talking to. A twisted old bigot. The best thing Mom ever did was leave your sorry ass"
The sound of a resounding slap rang around the room as Tina’s father struck her across the cheek.
Despite the stinging sensation that she was experiencing, the blonde remained defiant "Still got the same violent temper I see"
Her father was fuming, but at that moment, she didn’t care. She could take physical pain from him, hell she’d managed to block out being slapped around on several occasions as a child. Her resolve was focused on her mind, determined that no matter what he did to her physically, he wouldn’t get to her mentally.
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What can I say? I love you. Love this story. Liking the twist. Avoiding using subjects in my otherwise grammatically correct sentences – well, I hope they are. Either way, PPS!
Yes! I love this story! Thank you for not going in that direction. But I wonder what else we could have in common? Oh, nearly forgot, is Genner the jealous type? Why is she reading your response to my comment? He he he, if she is, you are one lucky lady. After an argument make up sex with that type of person is more than HOT! I’m talking from experience (Liz)! Anyway, as always your writing is remarkable. Thank you for sharing girl
I love this story..can’t wait to see what happens next! I’m sorry you’re having a rough time with your diet..hang in there! I keep eating ice cream and thinking about you..lol!
So, good! You are doing a great job with this story. Hang in there Tina – Bette is on the way, I hope!
Diets do suck – moderation is so much easier – feeling your pain since today was the first day back at the gym! thanks for the homework break, chica!
i love this story and i can’t wait to read what happens next! Tina your superwomen is on the way baby!!
Nice flow… PPS :-) and I hope Bette’s temper wont put her in trouble when meet those bigots! (Although i kinda hope someone can SMACK some senses to them :-p )
Great post as always! Please, make them pay!
Just read all 3 of your updates. How excellent was that! What a twist! Thanks and love love love this story.
I hope,Tinas dad is not planing to “cure” his daughter by himself.Please let them find Tina soon.Great story.Thank you.
Please, don’t hurt Tina!
hanging onto the edge of me seat here. great great great. mmmmmmmmmmm me thinks the source of tina being gay is bette so here dad may go for her. that would hurt tina but wouldnt make her straight. hav been tellin peeps at work bout story to hav to giv updates lol ty ty ty :)
Hi BealsBaby, I have just caught up with the last few chapters as had a day’s vacation. Wow-wee what a turn up as Tina’s Dad is behind this kidnapping. It is such a shame that he believes that she can be cured of this disease by bible bashing and scripture readings. Her love for Bette is eternal and constant. Bette and Shane have been fun to read as their friendship grows. I am happy that Tina’s Mom is out of this loop and there to rebuild and support her daugther. So many threads and directions to go in. I can’t wait to read more. Many Thanks for keeping the faith. Bloody brilliant. Your Loyal Fan.
Gosh, now I dont know what to think. A couple chapters ago I thought Tina mentioned her mother being abused and now the woman says she wasn’t. And Tina’s pictures are in her dresser face down and the father has been gone for some time now. I think the woman is lying. Why would the pictures be face down if she lives alone. NOw to Tina’s father, (loosely) I certainly hope he does not intend to affect a “cure” himself or does he intend to bring dickhead henry along for the ride. Please don’t let him abuse Tina or let henry or any other male do that to her. I think she would fight like hell but I don’t put anything past any of those bigots by harming her in any way so they can do what it is they think is the thing to do. I’m trying to stay with this but don’t know if I can. Thanks for posting.
I think I am getting a little paranoid here. Why are the pictures face down? It is the mothers house now, right? You´d think that after reconciling with her long lost daughter… ? You have to wrap this up soon, I can´t stand homophobes and I really don´t want to throw my laptop through the window – so please give poor Bette (and me) a break! Interesting update. Thanks.
ADDICTED!