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The Wedding 34
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Bette rose early and got dressed. She paused before leaving Tina’s old bedroom, deciding to leave the photo of Tina and her mother on the windowsill in its rightful place. Unsurprisingly, she found the door to the guestroom still shut. Shane never was an early riser.
As she went downstairs, the smell of coffee flooded her nostrils and she soon found Jackie in the kitchen.
"Good morning" she said politely.
"Morning Bette. Did you sleep ok?"
"Yeah, really well thanks"
"Can I interest you in a coffee?"
"Definitely"
Having just finished her own drink, Jackie poured two fresh mugs full and leant back against the counter opposite her daughter’s lover.
"Jackie….why are all the photos in Tina’s room in a drawer?"
The older woman sighed. She wasn’t quite sure how to explain her actions to Bette.
"The thing is….this might sound crazy, but to me those photos are symbolic of unhappy times. Everybody may be smiling in the pictures but it’s all just for show. They were taken at a time when relations between Tina and her father were already strained beyond repair…"
"But I thought things were fine until she started hanging around with gay people?" Bette interrupted.
"No, it started way before that. The gay thing was just the final nail in the coffin. Tina was just…never the daughter he wanted. In his eyes, Charlotte was perfect and Tina just never lived up to that. She was too independent, her dreams were too big for a small town. And John hated that"
"So he hated her because she wanted to make the most of her life?!" Bette asked incredulously.
"I guess so"
"That fucking bastard"
"I had been hoping that when I came down to visit I might get a different photo to put up. A real one"
"I’m sure we can get a copy of some of the pictures Alice took at the barbeque"
"Thanks, I’d really like that"
Bette stood in silence for a moment, tapping her fingers on the side of her mug. She was trying to control her fury at Tina’s father, but knew that the second she saw him it was likely to boil over.
"So what are you planning for today?" Jackie asked after a while.
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holy heck… John’s gone round the twist. That murderous old bigot and his stupid daughter and Henry can rot in hell. Thank the stars Bette and Shane and Jackie got there in time. Intense stuff, thanks, BB!
Holy fuck! Before the last sentence I was having a heart attack! Can you wait for the next chapter until the 20th of February? Although Liz is not back to her old healthy self yet I believe she has a surprise for me for my birthiday at 19 and I want to be alive to see it! FUCK ME!
OMG..that was intense! You made me feel that I was in the room with them..such great writing. I hope your diet is better today..you can do it! Of course I am still eating ice cream for ya..lol!
One of them should have picked something up and brained the old bastard
YAY! Tho I do hope Bette didn’t break her hand landing that punch. :D *muahhahahas* Good luck on the diet thing! Sure it wouldn’t be easier to just do moderation and smaller portions? : I know I HATE being hungry! Speaking of – back to homework : Thanks for the break…again! oh – and there’s absolutely NOTHING wrong with spending an evening watching football and writing!
To some extent, I can understand Henry going in all of this as he wants to marry Tina – although it’s pretty fucked up if you force a woman into marrying you. But I simply cannot understand how he can watch someone being killed and not use whatever inch of masculinity he has in himself to try and stop John. Not once did he try to help the woman he claims to love, or the woman the women he claims to love loves. It’s sickening. Now let’s hope the police doesn’t get the wrong idea. And booh for Charlotte walking away. PPS! Love you, hun. Birmingham sounds great.
Oh I love it when Bette gets all protective! Lucky Tina! There will be some bruising and it’ll all have to be kissed better!!! ;0)
OMFG!!!!! More, more, more….I can’t wait!!!!!
Dang!!! The old bastard is stone crazy and henry is just as stupid. Charlotte should have her a** kicked as well. Hopefully the police will arrest the right person and I hope he makes them kill him, because I think he will charge Bette and Tina again even with the police there. He thinks he is right. I hope they blow his behind straight to hell because that is the only way any of them will be free of him. Tina can have him, charlotte,and henry arrested for kidnapping, and all sorts of things. It actually becomes a federal case because they have taken her across state lines and those cases are never easy to extricate oneself from and almost always the person(s) are found guilty with a long jail term. henry may be an attorney but I don’t think he can get himself out of this one. At least the clerk got out to call the police and maybe they will listen to what she has to say as well since she was a witness to the madness and the threats. Sad to say there are people out there with ideas like his and they are very dangerous. Great update. Hope you have the next chapter ready. Thanks for posting.
Too bad no one had a taser to taser his ass. Or his balls.
OMG so dramatic and barbaric!! And those 2 men just completely rubish! >_
Thanks GOD for the police.OMG this was intense.Thank you for the update.Great story.P.S.mette hartmann I like your idea with the lesbian porn for 50 years.Haha.
THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER!!!!!!!!!
Good thinking of Tina to invite her mother. Glad that Bette appeared on time. Hopefully Tinas father, sister and Henry will spent the next 50 years sentenced to watch lesbian porn nonstop.
Wow- the level of craziness here is like -wow. I’m fucking impressed. I’m gonna have nightmares about John tonight, thanks BB…