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The Wedding 4
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Across town, Tina was once again at loggerheads with her fiance. She’d had every intention of picking up a take away and calling in to Bette’s, however Henry had caught her just before she planned on leaving and she’d never got the chance to text her friend.
"Look, I just don’t get why you can’t stay in the house until the wedding"
"I’ve told you this before, I want to do this the traditional way" Tina tried explaining for the fourth time.
"You can hardly call this relationship traditional Tina, we’ve been living together for nearly two years. It just doesn’t make sense for you to stay somewhere else after your bachelorette party"
"Well it makes sense to me, and you know what, it’s my decision"
"So I have to go without sex for the next two weeks?" Henry asked, clearly frustrated at the direction this conversation was taking.
"Seriously? That’s what you’re bothered about? Not getting laid?!"
"No, Tina, it’s not that. I just want to spend some time with you before the wedding" Henry tried to back track.
"We’re getting married Henry. We have the rest of our lives to spend together. And the way we’re going right now, I’m not sure we’ll make it to the wedding without killing each other if I don’t stay somewhere else"
"Come on Tina…"
"My mind’s made up Henry. You’re not gonna change my mind"
Tina was pacing the living room. She was sick to death of the arguments about the wedding, and in all honesty, the explanation about it being traditional not to live together after the bachelorette party was just an excuse. She just wanted to save herself the inevitable rows that would surely worsen as the big day grew closer.
"So you’re not even going to consider how I feel about this?"
"What, so you want me to put aside my own opinions and just do what you want?" Tina retorted.
"No, I’m not saying that…" Henry protested.
"Yes you are. That’s exactly what you’re saying Henry"
"I’m sorry Tina, I didn’t mean it to sound like that" Henry tried a different tact "I just wish all the stress could be over and we’d be away on our honeymoon"
"Me too"
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I’ m crying like a tree year old now!
You and this story are. Killing. Me. Thanks for updating so frequently!!
Oh my poor Bette. My heart is aching for her. I know this will end sweetly though…right? Anxiously awaiting the next post.
I promise I will try very hard to update tomorrow, but it could be Tuesday (my exam is at 3.45 pm). I’m so glad you update so frequently. Each time I see a new chapter I get all giddy and yay and it makes up for this sucky course I’m studying (interesting, but ranting way too long about one particular sub-subject). I look forward to the fortnight they’ll be spending together. I’d say this is Bette’s chance, but you will probably give us lots of almost-moments but eventually leave us hanging in there. I certainly look forward to your next post, the smile and butterfies that come with it! (It’s wicked, actually being in love with a story almost).
You’re absolutely right, that’s what Sundays are for. And Mondays too. And every other day of the week as well, so don’t hesitate posting 3 times a day every day^^ Thank you for this great chapter PPS oh and yeah, you’d better give her this fucking happy ending, cause this is the only way I can get it myself. Yes, I live through fanfix and especially through yours ;)
A third post :O! And what an excellent post it was! I can’t wait until Tina gets her head out of her ass and dumps henry! The selfish part of me wants another post tonight but I’ll settle for tomorrow morning :) Thanks! Loving your story! :D
Where is the forth post?! =P Just kiddin! =PThank you for posting so frequently!
A very touching moment between friends (even if Bette had to be drunk to speak up). Tina has a lot to think about…And I wonder what will happen at the bachelorette party…Once again, you have delivered an excellent update – Kudos to you!!!
This story’s totally addictive… thanks for the triple posts! :)
“You really think I could do better?” Tina asked,- “I could certainly find you a nice girl”… – I bet! ;-D
I really feel for Bette! I was shedding a tear with her. PPS
What a truly beautiful story. Thank you.
What a treat! I leav for 2 days then come back to read the ending of your last story witch was great by the way, to another great fic. I’m beyond thrilled :)
feeling sad for some reason…not that i don’t think tina won’t listen to bette because she already knows something is wrong with henry and she is just settling but she might still marry him because i’m pretty sure she rememvers that night when bette told her she’s in love with her but i think tina thinks that bette didn’t mean it or forgot about it and that’s why she’s marrying henry…ok, i confused myself with this LOL so i just say: love this story, can’t wait to read more :)
I’ve just caught up. Thanks for posting so frequently. Wow! You are a fantastic writer. I feel like I’m on a roller coaster of emotions. I hate Henry! My heart is breaking with Bette. As for Tina, I’m as confused as she is. Please let Tina come to her senses before the wedding.
Unrequited love is so painful.
Amazming and heartfelt Chapter!!! Thank you PPS
Amazing.Thank you.
You put three chapters in one day for…tease!!!But I am impressed with the words Bette said to Tina. And somehow, I would rather Tina end the wedding with Henry because she think it through (maybe a little push by Bette’s words), but not because Bette’s confession.
Oh man, just read all your updates. It’s just so damn sad. Thank you for this story.
Hey, I like these back to back posts. I am hoping there is more football so you are busy writing again. Thanks for the ongoing fine story.